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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2018 08:34 am Title: Ch. 25

LOL...the image of Michael if he'd pulled Amber's nose...I bet she'd have sent him flying across the room! XD!!!!

Marlon having to do business with Michaela...poor guy, and then having to apologize to her...not Marlon's day is it...lol

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

She does have great strength and i won't be surpised if she did lmao. It's never poor Marlon's day lool. He deserves a cookie! Thanks Mary! 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2016 07:43 pm Title: Ch. 25

Love reading the story! Please write more chapters! I can't wait to read them!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2016 07:43 pm Title: Ch. 25

Love reading the story! Please write more chapters! I can't wait to read them!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kay! I will definitely 😄

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 08:01 pm Title: Ch. 25

I really enjoy reading your stories! Please continue to write more chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kay <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 25

Hey Lorry,

Glad to see an update! Glad we could help!

I see Michael is trying to balance his career and the child he got on the way. Incorporating Quincy into the story is excellent. I like their interaction. On the other hand, Marlon needs to stop being a jerk. He knows he's feeling Michaela. That's why he's being such a jerk. Some guys do that, and some girls like it! I'm one of them!

Author's Response:

Hey Kara! Yes your advice indeed helped. Putting Quincy in I wanted someone he knew from real life to be in it so it felt more real as well Marlon he wants to deny his feelings typical Marlon lmao you like when a guy does that? To each their own lol. Don't worry those two will admit their feelings eventually. Thanks Kara!

Reviewer: eVa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 07:25 am Title: Ch. 25

Good story!! <3



Author's Response:

oh my a new reader! thank you for reading <3

more to come soon :3

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