Date: Feb 10, 2018 08:34 am Title: Ch. 25
LOL...the image of Michael if he'd pulled Amber's nose...I bet she'd have sent him flying across the room! XD!!!!
Marlon having to do business with Michaela...poor guy, and then having to apologize to her...not Marlon's day is it...lol
Looking forward to more :)
She does have great strength and i won't be surpised if she did lmao. It's never poor Marlon's day lool. He deserves a cookie! Thanks Mary!
Date: Aug 08, 2016 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 25
Glad to see an update! Glad we could help!
I see Michael is trying to balance his career and the child he got on the way. Incorporating Quincy into the story is excellent. I like their interaction. On the other hand, Marlon needs to stop being a jerk. He knows he's feeling Michaela. That's why he's being such a jerk. Some guys do that, and some girls like it! I'm one of them!
Hey Kara! Yes your advice indeed helped. Putting Quincy in I wanted someone he knew from real life to be in it so it felt more real as well Marlon he wants to deny his feelings typical Marlon lmao you like when a guy does that? To each their own lol. Don't worry those two will admit their feelings eventually. Thanks Kara!