Date: Aug 08, 2016 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 25
Glad to see an update! Glad we could help!
I see Michael is trying to balance his career and the child he got on the way. Incorporating Quincy into the story is excellent. I like their interaction. On the other hand, Marlon needs to stop being a jerk. He knows he's feeling Michaela. That's why he's being such a jerk. Some guys do that, and some girls like it! I'm one of them!
Hey Kara! Yes your advice indeed helped. Putting Quincy in I wanted someone he knew from real life to be in it so it felt more real as well Marlon he wants to deny his feelings typical Marlon lmao you like when a guy does that? To each their own lol. Don't worry those two will admit their feelings eventually. Thanks Kara!