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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 02:37 pm Title: ::Ch. 15::

Wow...good suspenseful scene :D btw

Wonder what Michael and Amber's reaction will be if and when they find out Joseph is dead.

Hm...what if Randy, Marlon, Tito, Jackie, and Jermaine start asking questions about their father...I'm guessing they might start wondering after a while...or maybe one of them is responsible for his death (just putting that out there, lol :D.)

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it. you'll see what happens in the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:10 pm Title: ::Ch. 15::

Good job!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 02:52 am Title: ::Ch. 15::

please add more chapters. I enjoyed reading your stories.



Author's Response:

thanks as always for your support Kay it's truly appriacted <3

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 02:49 am Title: ::Ch. 15::

Joseph was selfish and mean. Maybe now they can relax and feel safe.



Author's Response:

he really was and that was his downfall in the end hopefully they can feel a little more safe now he's out of their lives permenately~

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2016 07:37 am Title: ::Ch. 15::

Holy crap!!! At least they're safe from Joseph. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Ikr? thank goodness! thanks as always louie <3 

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