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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2018 07:21 pm Title: Ch.34

Sweet...Am loving the little moments of reconciliation between them

And Junior's reaction to Michael talking about where Nevada was concieved...you can just see Junior thinking 'Hey...TMI! lol DX

Author's Response:

aw i'm glad you are! the couple are slowly getting back to their groove. Junior just did not want to know it was awakard and uncomfortable for him to be in that situation! he has to learn about it someday lmao. thanks mary! <3

 

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Date: Jun 11, 2018 06:34 pm Title: Ch. 33

Well...it sounds like they're each starting to make the effort toward a reconciliation...regardless of how long it will actually take...

Things may never be the same as they were before, but we'll see...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah they are both putting the effort to get something going which is great to see for them even if it takes a while to move forward but they have rest of the family around them to help. There is always a bumpy road in relationships to grow stronger😁. Thanks As always Mary! 

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Date: Jun 08, 2018 09:53 pm Title: Ch 32

Hm...clearly Amber regrets her behaviour.

Ik Michael is hurting right now, but let's hope it won't be too long until he is able to find it in his heart to forgive Amber.

Author's Response:

At last her eyes are open and she regrets her actions. Let's hope mike comes around and choses to forgive her. Time can only tell 🙏. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: May 23, 2018 09:28 pm Title: Ch.31

Wow...I've heard of women giving birth by themselves...

Hm...maybe after Amber stops being hormonal, she'll be able to forgive Michael for not being there with her...

Author's Response:

Let's hope she gets back to her senses and forgives Michael! Time will only tell. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: May 10, 2018 08:05 pm Title: Ch.30

Well, at least once Michael and Amber are moved to their new place, Amber won't have to see Marlon with Michaela...unless Marlon and Michaela decide to drop over.

Enjoyed picturing Michael and Amber having breakfast together, and then shopping for baby furniture :)...

Author's Response:

Yep At least there is one good reason they are moving away lol. You can tell Amber hasn't warmed up to Michelea yet lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Apr 23, 2018 06:29 pm Title: Ch. 29

Good to see Michael is aware of the time he's spending away from Amber

The image of Quincy flirting with Michael's mother in law...lol

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

At least he is aware and actually cares like some men these days smh and the flirting was so cringy for me to write at the time but hey at least grace and quincy maybe find love in each other lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Mar 29, 2018 02:12 pm Title: Ch.28

Hm...am interested to see where this will lead... ;).

Wonder if Amber will have more to say, and just what Michael's reaction will be if he finds out about his brother and Michaela.

Author's Response:

knowing Amber she might not be happy about it but will have to suck it up and Michael wil be happy in his own twisted way lol. thanks Mary!

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Date: Mar 10, 2018 08:45 pm Title: Ch. 27

Good to see the potential for drama caused by Grace, and Michaela being there didn't disrupt the party.

Very clever of Marlon to take Amber to her appointment so Michael and the others could set up for Amber's surprise party :)

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Aw thanks but it is justified for Grace to get the closer she's wanted to have for years even though what she did was messy at the time since there is two sides to a story and yeah it was clever of Marlon to do that to hid the party from Amber he can use his brain when he wants to lol. thanks mary!

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Date: Feb 16, 2018 04:42 pm Title: Ch. 26

It just proves everyone is capable of changing... :).

LOL...Marlon's reaction to the others talking about him. Made me imagine him thinking: Hey! I'm standing right here! lol.

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

indeed it does prove people (cough) marlon can change for the better! Poor marlon having to seat though that like he is invisible lol. thanks as always Mary!

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Date: Feb 10, 2018 08:34 am Title: Ch. 25

LOL...the image of Michael if he'd pulled Amber's nose...I bet she'd have sent him flying across the room! XD!!!!

Marlon having to do business with Michaela...poor guy, and then having to apologize to her...not Marlon's day is it...lol

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

She does have great strength and i won't be surpised if she did lmao. It's never poor Marlon's day lool. He deserves a cookie! Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Jan 28, 2018 01:47 pm Title: Ch.24

Ikr...and the two of them having to work together...will be interesting to see whether they start to like each other or if they remain the same.

YOWCH!! A football player's kick...I bet Amber will be glad when that baby is born so she won't have to keep feeling that...lol.

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Ha lets hope they can tolerate each other hopefully. Poor Amber who knows she might have a footballer on their hands lmao. See you in the next chapter Mary! 

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Date: Jan 06, 2018 04:45 pm Title: Ch.23

I agree with Amber... Michaela was clearly in the wrong having bumped into Marlon, knocking his hot dog out of his hands...And she is little too into herself...smh

Author's Response:

Indeed her pride wouldn't allow her admit in the moment at least she bought him another hot dog lol. Well let's hope she becomes decent in Amber eyes eventually but we shall see as time goes on lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Dec 21, 2017 08:23 pm Title: Ch. 22

I enjoyed Michael's inner dialogues during his interview :) lol

I actually find myself agreeing with both of them. On the one hand, I agree with Michael wanting to protect his wife and family from 'crazy fans', but on the other hand I can see Amber's point about not wanting to be 'hidden away'. It seems to me, Frank has Michael between a 'rock and a hard place' with his requirement. Michael wants to be successful, but at the same time he wants to protect his family.

Am definitely looking forward to reading how Michael resolves his dilema :D.

Author's Response:

I agree it's hard to find a way to get both parties happy with whatever his decision will be to make the situation better. But something has to be done and you will definitely see how it goes next chapter. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Dec 16, 2017 09:56 am Title: Ch. 21

I can imagine Marlon with all the bows in his afro...LOL.

Hmmm...Amber sounds a little annoyed at Marlon...wonder if she'll ask him to babysit again...will just have to wait and see...LOL

Author's Response:

I have no pity for marlon thank goodness for small miracles like Junior lool. sheesh you can't blame her with him going though her stuff and I highly about it lmao. thanks mary!

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Date: Nov 19, 2017 07:56 pm Title: Ch. 20

I've noticed that too...Could be his timing...but then who really knows when the right time to approach a girl is...Or maybe it's his style...who knows...

Can imagine the interaction between Michael and Marlon in the checkout line...XD LOL

Yay...Frank DiLeo showed up, and gave Michael and impromptu audition :D... Can't wait to see what they say at the meeting with the producers at Epic :)

Author's Response:

Wellllll it's Marlon and his timing is mostly a hit or miss lol. I can't blame Mike since Marlon can't behave tsk Tsk smh. You'll have to see what happens on the day XD. 

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