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Date: Aug 12, 2018 02:30 pm Title: Ch. 39

Lol...Marlon and Amber trying to stop Chris from snoring...and Marlon grabbing Chris' nose...XD

Uh, oh...Amber's not too fond of Chris...Chris better hope Nevada's allergy isn't a serious one...

Author's Response:

ah Amber has to be tired of hearing his loud snoring every night that must be why she bought marlon to get him to wake up somewhat XD. And for the recordAmber will never be found of her husband's loud crazy friend lool and let us hope the pair don't end up getting themselves in trouble with the young parents.yikes!. thanks mary <3

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Date: Jul 29, 2018 07:48 pm Title: Ch.38

It was good to see Michael standing up to his bosses...who are they to tell him he can't be out with Amber in public...lol

It's going to be an interesting couple of days with Chris and Amber in the same house...Michael's in the 'dog house' with this one...lol

Love it that Chris and Michael are buds...And the interactions between Chris and Amber...lol...look forward to see what happens next

Author's Response:

Ikr? They have no right to make him be away from his own family smh lol. The one I feel for is Amber.. She is not liking this arrangement one bit πŸ˜‚ . Let's just hope the pair don't skin each other alive smh. Thanks Mary 😁 

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Date: Jul 22, 2018 06:39 pm Title: Ch.37

Sounds like they had a nice evening together...even if the paparazzi happened to see them...smh

Amber refusing to dance made me think of "I Won't Dance, Don't Ask Me" sung by Fred Astaire...lol :D

Hm...Michael is showing the symptoms of something... Look forward to finding out if it's the Vitiligo or the Lupus...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

The paparazzi always find a way to ruin a moment lol at least they were far away and the pair could have some fun. Amber is not a dancer like her boo lol. Well either one could be right you will just have to read and see πŸ‘€. Thanks Mary 

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Date: Jul 17, 2018 06:35 pm Title: Ch.36

I imagine Michael thinking "Who does Frank think he is...telling me I can't have a date with my wife." lol.

Good for Michael and Amber...XD! :D

Hm...I'll be interested to read more about Grace's relationship with Quincy ;).

Author's Response:

That is exactly his thought process! And they went against Frank's rules they can't cage Amber indoors forever smh and those two (quincy /grace) are just well eh crazy for each other I guess?? πŸ˜‚. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Jul 09, 2018 06:38 pm Title: Ch. 35

Loved picturing Marlon's bedroom... XD.

Now that Marlon is manager of the shop, wonder how tidy he'll keep things there, lol.

Yay...Michael and Amber have made up...I'll say it's about time...LOL

Author's Response:

Sigh Marlon is a special case yes that's right special XD and who knows! At least michaela is there to keep him in check! πŸ˜‚. Huzzah it's time the stubborn pair made up lool. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Jun 23, 2018 07:21 pm Title: Ch.34

Sweet...Am loving the little moments of reconciliation between them

And Junior's reaction to Michael talking about where Nevada was concieved...you can just see Junior thinking 'Hey...TMI! lol DX

Author's Response:

aw i'm glad you are! the couple are slowly getting back to their groove. Junior just did not want to know it was awakard and uncomfortable for him to be in that situation! he has to learn about it someday lmao. thanks mary! <3

 

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Date: Jun 11, 2018 06:34 pm Title: Ch. 33

Well...it sounds like they're each starting to make the effort toward a reconciliation...regardless of how long it will actually take...

Things may never be the same as they were before, but we'll see...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah they are both putting the effort to get something going which is great to see for them even if it takes a while to move forward but they have rest of the family around them to help. There is always a bumpy road in relationships to grow stronger😁. Thanks As always Mary! 

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Date: Jun 08, 2018 09:53 pm Title: Ch 32

Hm...clearly Amber regrets her behaviour.

Ik Michael is hurting right now, but let's hope it won't be too long until he is able to find it in his heart to forgive Amber.

Author's Response:

At last her eyes are open and she regrets her actions. Let's hope mike comes around and choses to forgive her. Time can only tell πŸ™. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: May 23, 2018 09:28 pm Title: Ch.31

Wow...I've heard of women giving birth by themselves...

Hm...maybe after Amber stops being hormonal, she'll be able to forgive Michael for not being there with her...

Author's Response:

Let's hope she gets back to her senses and forgives Michael! Time will only tell. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: May 10, 2018 08:05 pm Title: Ch.30

Well, at least once Michael and Amber are moved to their new place, Amber won't have to see Marlon with Michaela...unless Marlon and Michaela decide to drop over.

Enjoyed picturing Michael and Amber having breakfast together, and then shopping for baby furniture :)...

Author's Response:

Yep At least there is one good reason they are moving away lol. You can tell Amber hasn't warmed up to Michelea yet lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Apr 23, 2018 06:29 pm Title: Ch. 29

Good to see Michael is aware of the time he's spending away from Amber

The image of Quincy flirting with Michael's mother in law...lol

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

At least he is aware and actually cares like some men these days smh and the flirting was so cringy for me to write at the time but hey at least grace and quincy maybe find love in each other lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Mar 29, 2018 02:12 pm Title: Ch.28

Hm...am interested to see where this will lead... ;).

Wonder if Amber will have more to say, and just what Michael's reaction will be if he finds out about his brother and Michaela.

Author's Response:

knowing Amber she might not be happy about it but will have to suck it up and Michael wil be happy in his own twisted way lol. thanks Mary!

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Date: Mar 10, 2018 08:45 pm Title: Ch. 27

Good to see the potential for drama caused by Grace, and Michaela being there didn't disrupt the party.

Very clever of Marlon to take Amber to her appointment so Michael and the others could set up for Amber's surprise party :)

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Aw thanks but it is justified for Grace to get the closer she's wanted to have for years even though what she did was messy at the time since there is two sides to a story and yeah it was clever of Marlon to do that to hid the party from Amber he can use his brain when he wants to lol. thanks mary!

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Date: Feb 16, 2018 04:42 pm Title: Ch. 26

It just proves everyone is capable of changing... :).

LOL...Marlon's reaction to the others talking about him. Made me imagine him thinking: Hey! I'm standing right here! lol.

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

indeed it does prove people (cough) marlon can change for the better! Poor marlon having to seat though that like he is invisible lol. thanks as always Mary!

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Date: Feb 10, 2018 08:34 am Title: Ch. 25

LOL...the image of Michael if he'd pulled Amber's nose...I bet she'd have sent him flying across the room! XD!!!!

Marlon having to do business with Michaela...poor guy, and then having to apologize to her...not Marlon's day is it...lol

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

She does have great strength and i won't be surpised if she did lmao. It's never poor Marlon's day lool. He deserves a cookie! Thanks Mary! 

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