New reader here. :) I do like the story plot, loving the royal aspect to it and Faiths twin siblings are a great comedic addition when they are mentioned. :) However the only downside is the lack of care given to spelling and grammar. Although I'm not sure if this is because English may not be your first language. Not saying this to offend, but at some points even Michaels name has been spelt incorrectly. :/ Overall lovely job.

Author's Response:

thanks for taking the time to read my story but you misread English is my first language i know my grammer and so forth isn't perfect but we all make mistakes in our writing but i'm not taking it as offensive but still thank you...i hope you continue to read on and enjoy it :).