Date: Nov 29, 2015 12:17 pm Title: The One in VIP
Great job!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Nov 29, 2015 09:42 am Title: Prologue
You doing yo thang girl! Lol
Congrats on the already awesome story.
More soon 😁
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: Nov 29, 2015 08:14 am Title: The One in VIP
krishna really needs to fire her crazy she-devil mum and make spread her wings in her own way but that looks that won't happen anytime soon by the looks of it. ooh she met mj, i wonder how they will interact again or how soon? i'll be keeping an eye out ally <3
Author's Response:
Yes! 😊 Krishna has quite the TO-DO list to make so she can become her own, happier person; She hopes to be able to see that handsome Michael again 😉
Date: Nov 29, 2015 08:12 am Title: Prologue
I love the way you describe this prologue sounds interesting so far :D
Author's Response: Thank you, Lorry!
Date: Nov 29, 2015 02:03 am Title: The One in VIP
I like the story & its direction. I also like the length of the chapter. It would be helpful if you had faces to go with the names.
Krishna really needs to fire her mother. Its a shame that she would force her daughter to be involved with anyone like Tevin & allow him to disrespect her all for attention & profit. Its also sad that Krish is using drugs to cope with the nonsense, hopefully she will stop. I think its time for a change of scenery, a trip to California may help... 😊
Anyways, keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you, love_deeply! You're right; Krishna would LOVE a change somewhere away from the chaos. She needs to go forth with confidence :)
Date: Nov 28, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Prologue
This is really interesting...more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will have more very soon :)