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Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2015 07:43 am Title: Chapter 4-Your Ways

Great update

 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2015 05:11 am Title: Chapter 4-Your Ways

They seem pretty cute when they get along. I can tell there's way more than meets the eye than what went down in therapy for sure. 

On to the family dinner. 

More soon. <333

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2015 03:33 am Title: Chapter 3-There's Got to be a Way

There has to be a reason Joan's demeanor is so hostile. From the looks of how things here it's like she doesn't want the therapy. Oneupance seems more the goal than getting to the core of their issues.

She accepts his material gifts as apology and that set the precident for how he does apologize. He may not know any better.

As for Michael's thoughts he may want to fix something that is broken beyond repair. 

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2015 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3-There's Got to be a Way

I actually feel sorry for Michael here. I feel like he's trying, but Joan is making it hard for him. I have no doubt he might be a bit asshole-ish behind the scene while keeping his good boy appearance in front of everyone else, but Joan's outburst, she only proved him right in their first session. 

 

And Michael buying her things, I feel like is his way of showing more love to her. I think if he didn't care nor loved her, he wouldn't be there in the session. 

 

 

Great chapter, can't wait to read how they got to this point. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2015 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 3-There's Got to be a Way

Now we all know Michael isn't that slow to not know if you gonna go to a therapist, they're gonna pry. What therapist doesn't? Yes it's a bit much because it feels as if they're trying to get into his personal life but it's sorta their job to try and 'fix' what's breaking or is already broken. 

Imo, I think there could be more than just what is put out there for everyone to see and and know. Honestly, I'm not sure unless someone tells it what it really is, but I do believe it's something deeper. Way deeper.

As for Joan's outbursts, she's pregnant and going through the case of mood swings, but... it could be something else instead. 

As for Mike's and how he handles disagreements to buying Nik material thinks, hmmm... all I can say is that he felt the therapist was gonna say buying her things was not gonna solve what's going on between  them and that is just a never ending cycle of arguments, buy things to give to Joan to make her happy, when in truth she's not. .But I wish we could have gotten the chance to hear his response.

More soon :)



Author's Response:

All I can say is that there is definitely more going on than meets the eye with these two.

Thanks for your review, gosh I have to catch up with all your stories!

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2015 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 3-There's Got to be a Way

oh she's got a temper.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2015 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 2-A Chance Encounter

I ain't gonna lie, I thought they may butt heads or something but i was proven wrong here. That first encounter was better than I thought it would be. Michael was talking to her all carefree and once not even nervous. Normally he would be nervous to tall to such a gorgeous and attractive woman such as Joan. Look at Mike.

In all honesty, I think they're really gonna hit off well as friends that will blossominto something more but I shall not rush into things right now, lol.

More soon girl.



Author's Response:

Yes they're meeting was very calm LOL so unlike them currently..wondering what happened?

I'll update soon :)

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2015 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 2-A Chance Encounter

yassss!!! update soon :)



Author's Response:

I shall!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2015 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1- A New Start

Oh boy these two already seem like a handful. There in deep because there is the baby but let's see just how deep the rabbit hole goes. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

It goes very deep..Lordy.

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2015 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1- A New Start

Whoa! So they're starting out with drama....this is interesting. I can honestly say, I understood her when she said Michael do certain things that get under her skin but pretend like it's all her when she gets upset...smh. Can wait to see how things got them go this point. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2015 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1- A New Start

Wow. Intense girl. Really intense. I'm recalling feeling this new story you have but I don't think I'm feeling Michael in this one at all, lol. I guess I'll wait til the next update to see if that feeling may change or stay the same.

More soon.



Author's Response:

Michael can be sweet but he's definitely going to be a handful in this story, thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2015 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1- A New Start

Great start! I love this already.



Author's Response:

Yay!

Reviewer: Sugar Felice Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2015 04:04 am Title: Chapter 1- A New Start

nice conflict. plz update soon



Author's Response:

 i will, thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2015 03:35 am Title: Chapter 1- A New Start

Well this sounds interesting,  I hope this therapy sessions helps them work out the kinks in their relationship apart from lil baby in her stomach. A Great start! Cant wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

They have a long way to go!

Thanks for reviewing ! :)

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