You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2015 03:25 pm Title: Sex and Fear

Loved this chapter



Author's Response:

I'm glad you did, thank you <3

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2015 06:48 pm Title: Truth and Ritual Sacrafice

That was so frightening. I hope Matt will be ok. Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing <3 I love your feedback! More soon.

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2015 04:58 pm Title: Truth and Ritual Sacrafice

I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you <3

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2015 02:40 pm Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Nice start to your story. Can't wat for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly :) More soon!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2015 07:40 am Title: Truth and Ritual Sacrafice

Wow that was intense!! Love it!!! I take it they're satanists of some kind? The black hooded dudes. I havent heard of satanists doing human sacrifices it's probably a very fucked up evil cult. Seriously Matt needs to carry a gun. Love how you described Michael's character through what he does for other people. Hes really selfless and compassionate. Janet is like that too, just saw her perform on Sunday. Its amazing how much they look alike and act alike. They have the same eyes, smile, and mannerisms when they get embarassed and they're both really humble. She was honored in my hometown cuz thats where she recorded all her hit albums, with having the day she performed get called Janet Jackson Day and shes being nominated to get inducted into the Rock & Roll Hall of fame so she decides to thank the fans for her success. Shes an AMAZING singer, dancer and performer and shes gorgeous! You should go see her if you  get the chance!  Ya it's amazing how even in the 1800s they still relied on religion to explain medical conditions 😒. Its vitiligo you morons not some supernatural shit. Yes you're right the leeches were used to get rid of the toxins in the body to cure the disease which you can imagine was a stupid idea because well the patient then often died from too much blood loss😒. That's a syringe right? Thats really awesome!!! Where do you find cool stuff like that? Do you know how old it is and where it's from? What else have you collected? No its not weird to have a passion its fucking cool! No need to be embarassed! Own it gurl! And youre not a sicko. Hope things are going better for you at home :/ honestly your husband is a dick for letting you feel that way. Love this!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was thinking like, Skull and Bones society observing the autumnal equinox which I believe does require human sacrafice. I am a dabbler, but by no means an expert in the subject of secret societies - or the Victorian era for that matter. I'm just trying to keep it interesting. I'm hoping for some leeway for any inaccuracies here lol.

 

Janet is awesome, yes! One Halloween when I was in high school, I did a very convincing Rythm Nation era Janet. Everyone loved it. They said I looked as much like her as a white girl possibly could, lol. But yeah, I love her. And it don't matter if you're black or white ;)

 

You know it's funny, when I was imagining what people in the 1800s would make of a skin condition like Vitiligo, I realized how similarly ignorent people are even now. Some people to this day will still believe Michael bathed in bleach in an attempt to become white, rather than accept that it is a legit medical condition. Idiots :( 

 

I got my syringe from a place called Obscura in NYC. It's a shop that specializes in weird antiques. The syringe is from 1890. Some hospital in England. I also have an old pharmacology and therapeutics book. I'm hoping to grow my collection this year. I have my eye on a nineteenth century bottle of hydromorphone. It's a good thing the stuff isn't good anymore, lol! 

 

I am pretty weird. I hope I find a man who appreciates my crazy one day :)

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2015 12:09 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Woaaaaaa I love it!!! You really got me, girl (^-^). I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! More soon <3

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2015 10:14 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

What kind of 1800s medical stuff do you collect? That's freaking awesome by the way. 



Author's Response:

 photo 2014-12-27 22.18.25_zpsnuhuu1x0.jpg

 

I'm such a sicko *covers face* lmao

Reviewer: Areyoulistening Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2015 10:13 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

You come up with the best ideas ! Can`t wait to read more <3



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so flattered! I really appreciate it. I try my best with these stories :)

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2015 10:13 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

WOW this is amazzzzing!! I lovve all the details! U havve to continue this!! I absolutely LOVE your writing! How old is Anna here? I take it this is set in London? U have to update this ASAP i am in love! Creepy ass old woman ugh, like im sorry u have cataracts, but can you honestly not find anything to do other than harass a kid because of where she chooses to get medical treatment? Honestly those apothecaries had better homeopathic medicine than the shit doctors of that century. Why was using leeches a thing anyway? Yes Michael does have REALLY pretty eyes 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Gosh, I'm so flattered :) Anna is young in the beginning  - maybe like 12 or something, but nothing happens between her and Michael (like that) until she is of age - at least 19, I'll say. To be safe, lol. Like in my other story. Only because it's the same age gap between Michael and myself, and you know ;)

 

I love my creepy old woman, I'm going to have a lot of fun with her character.

 

I believe leeches were to drain the "bad blood" out of one's body, thereby eliminating toxins. I think that was the theory.

 

Those eyes . . . I know! That’s how he gets you ;) Even through the TV, one look and I was his. For life. <3

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2015 07:30 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Great start!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2015 02:23 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Oh I love your type of creep! And I'm all about the Victorian Gothic, it's my lifeblood (you should see my books collection, I have all the penny dreadfuls of the 1800s!). Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

YES! Penny dreadfuls! I love it! That’s what I was thinking wit this. I love that era. This is weird, but I like to collect old medical stuff from the 1900s. *cringes* Or maybe that's about normal - for me. Lol!  Where did you get your books? Do you have Sweeny Todd?

Reviewer: RockinItLikeARobin Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2015 12:11 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Great chapter!! Keep writing!!



Author's Response:

Thank you <3 I will :)

You must login (register) to review.