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Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2017 06:18 pm Title: 18. 'Out'

Omg her sister is jealous of her that how some family are that right B get out l  love it🙌

Reviewer: NekaJace4398 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 12:49 pm Title: 15. 'XMAS'

Finally, something substantial occurring

Author's Response: Of course, it took me and them a while to get in the groove of things. It shall be steady from now on.

Reviewer: NekaJace4398 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 11:30 am Title: 2. 'Nice2MeetU'

Yes, A friendship has started. Excellent. Now, yes I think that Michael should be with Beyonce, Yes I think he should pursue her, but It would be interesting if it was the other way around. I havent read the rest of the chapters yet, so...

Author's Response: Thank you for joining in on the reading! I hope that you liked it.

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2017 04:11 pm Title: 17. 'Dinner'

Omg omg that all l can say speechless but it was good girl keep it coming



Author's Response: Thank you love!

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 07:05 pm Title: 16. 'MEETINGS'

I like this chapter girl you better not keep me waiting too long lol these two are so fun l just love them



Author's Response: thanks hun!!!

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 11:40 am Title: 15. 'XMAS'

Great chapter it was very sweet...And yes girl the ending was hott good job.



Author's Response: much love thank you!!!

Reviewer: KhadijaDer Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 06:18 am Title: 15. 'XMAS'

Absolutely loved it! it always makes me so happy to see his beautiful smile

Author's Response: your too kind thx for stopping bye!

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 10:21 pm Title: 15. 'XMAS'

Omg girl l love it l need more it too hot😎🍸



Author's Response: thank you baby!

Reviewer: KhadijaDer Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 06:45 am Title: 14. 'I am Yours..'

I love how cute this chapter was ... Can't wait to read the next one ... Much love

Author's Response: How sweet I love u baby

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 10:32 am Title: 14. 'I am Yours..'

Aweee I'm in love with this chapter soo much!!I'm just loving how your taking the time to set the pace.Your not rushing with the sex thing like alot of stories do,they just have a sweet boyfriend/girlfriend vibe going on.I'm loving how considerate and loving they are to each other their simply having a good time time getting to know one another and I love that.Great chapter girly its like you've been invigorated because you knocked this one outta the park good job!!!



Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: KhadijaDer Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 08:23 am Title: 13. 'Toche'

Love love love the dynamics between MJ and Bey

Author's Response: Thank You! Much Love

Reviewer: KhadijaDer Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 07:14 am Title: 8. 'Setting Spray'

Hahahahahaha .... Queen Bey wins. you are hilarious and OMG! Bey's character

Author's Response: Lmfao trust me they will meet again!

Reviewer: KhadijaDer Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 06:40 am Title: 4. 'Try Me, Try Bey!'

Hi :) Just found your story while browsing the website and I'm so glad I did. Girl you made me laugh so hard reading this chapter, you should never mess with Bey hahahaha. I like how you changed the backgrounds of the characters and I love bold Michael and the relationship between him and Bey ... Much love

Author's Response: Welcome to the story! Thank you for taking time out of your day to review! I really do appreciate it. It makes me so happy

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 01:22 pm Title: 12. 'Liz'

Wow she got to meet Elizabeth Taylor talk about legendary one of the perks of befriending Michael Jackson lol.They are really coming along the bubble fight how cute was that.And MJ  did say when you visit Neverland your bound to get wet haha he really did say that by the way lol.And her setting up the Christmas surprise for him is wonderful hes going to love but the perk for him is being with her I'm sure its gonna be great.



Author's Response: Yes Yes Yes!

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 01:12 pm Title: 13. 'Toche'

Please try not to feel too dicouraged I know sometimes not enough feedback is annoying at best.And there are times when readers don't leave comments I'm guilty of that being a silent reader.But don't take offense its just times when things get in the way.I love all your stories and would like you to continue but at the same time its up to you.Sometimes you lose motivation or get writers block but if you've got more plots fot the story then keep it coming girly lol do whatevers in your heart.



Author's Response: Thank you! You have been with me since the very begging and I appreciate that. I love you so much. You guys are my motivation. I am Back and ready to snatch wigs, frontals, and closures. Next Chapter tomorrow night. I love you! Thank you so much for believing in me

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