Date: Jun 29, 2017 11:00 am Title: Up All Night
K ur getting a couple reviews cuz i feel like a shitty person for not reviewing sooner! THANK YOU FOR THE SHOUT OUR LOVED HOW U INCORPORATED THE PHOTO IN. In fucking in love with your writing! There's nothing id change about it! I especially loved this chapter! Makes me insecure af about my own writing! Lowkey wish this happened in RL this is fucking adorable and awesome and a fab way to songwrite! And it's sweiden i think is how u spell his last name. I cant believe its been a year since you started this! I really have no criticisms!
Date: Jan 06, 2017 08:48 pm Title: Up All Night
Hi just curious to know when or if ur planning to update this story, thanks!
I'm currently working on the next one, I do apologise for the wait, I'm just as eager to update it as you are to read it. Thanks for being so patient! <3
Date: Oct 09, 2016 05:23 pm Title: Studio Date
Aww T and michael are soo adorable with their kissing and all lol..i hope michael let's her sing more, maybe add it to his album?
It's definitely an idea I have! Thank you so much for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter <3
Date: Sep 25, 2016 01:18 pm Title: A Surprise Visit
I have no criticism. This gave me soo manyy feeelssss. I lovve all of thissss, jermaines lowkey man whoreness making jokes, the whole family dyanamix u really breathed life into them! Lovveeee so much. Poor toya hope she and tinahse reconnect! it seems like tinashe's a good influence on the whole family. Loved the first date that went so awesome!! Ur an amazing writer!! Thanks for the update! Cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Ahh! My fav girl! I'm so glad you finally caught up with the story and that you enjoyed it! If you have any more questions about anything just ask! Thanks son much for reading and reviewing ily lots! You already know I'm working on the next one 😂 Ly lots!
Date: Apr 01, 2016 11:18 pm Title: Making Amends
I thought i'd surprise you and review!! i love how he's like so whyd u decide to date a woman um dude she's bisexual this wasn't a calculated desicion i know he wasnt trying to be judgmental. U date who ur attracted to regardless of gender if ur Bi. ANYWAY. THIS ID SICKENLY CUTE I JUST LOVVVE THEMM. love that they both like climbing trees!! I love how great they are at talking things out! Idk there were a few typos but otherwise i have no critiques! What book was she reading? I think you captured T & Mike perfectly ive only seen her perform so lol. Thats so sad about how her and Adrianna ended:( i honestly love how awkward they r around each other as the sexual tension builds 👀. Cant waittt to read more! U better update asap!
Date: Jan 23, 2016 12:24 am Title: Getting 2 On
LMFAO i love alicia i have a friend whos literally her twin except she doesnt need booze 2 b that crazzy. I totally relate 2 her about those pink elephants WTF is up with them. God i felt like i was hallucinating watching them! Yayyy glad he made it, and about whos being the better best friend hm i almost wanna go with alicia just because theyre closer, and Michael was her childhood friend while Alicia is someone she goes 2 for advice, support. Not saying she cant do that with michael idk her friendships with each of them are so different you cant say one persona better than the others, however I do think Alicia has proven 2 be a more consistent friend but Michael just renterrd her life so only time will tell! I love the research you put into this! Whos Haley and Allie i dont remember you mentioning them before? Wow im so legit impressed at how she treated Haley i hav zero patience and i would just lose my cool real fast and rip her head off. I totaly see Michael being hesistant i mean he thinks of tinashe as a sister or used to so its hard 2 not see her that way anymore completely. Ive had that happen 2 me b4 to where my drunk neighbor at her wedding came up to me and started giving me life advice and it was fucking hilarious she tried to sound so concerned about me it just came off so bad. Alicia was somewhat making sense this girl kept rambling on and ON and ON. alicia sounds like she can handle alcohol well i mean until she passed out the 3rd time. I love that she totally confessed to michael how much tinashe wont shut up about him and he needs 2 get on that ASAP. I have NO complaints! Im looking forward 2 more! If want any advice on anything lemme know!
Date: Jan 22, 2016 09:52 pm Title: Prologue: A Fresh Start
Stumbled across this story today and I am in loooove with it, I can't wait until her and Michael admit to each other they like each other. I can't wait for the next update!
Aw thank you! I assure you the next few chapters are an emotional roller coaster for both of them. Appreciate it! ^_^