[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2017 06:56 pm Title: The End.
Love the ending :)
Can't wait to start reading the sequel :)
Author's Response:
I can't wait to see what you think! See you in the sequel XD
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2016 07:44 am Title: The End.
What a lovely adventurous way to escape, on horses. They are going to have a great life together. So glad I'm all caught up. And I'm sure California Dreamin is a worth reading experience too. Well done Lorry!
Author's Response:
Finnnnallly your all caught up! took you long enough tut tut lool. there is so much for you to read in the sequel! thanks ebony! <3
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 04:57 pm Title: The End.
This review well overdue lol!
Excellent chapter! It's been awhile since I read a PG story!
Amber and Michael made a great couple, especially going through all the trial and tribulations. At one point, I did not like how messy Amber was being lol! Her hooking up Marlon, which I believe to make him jealous and his personality had her swoon and vacillating back and forward. Michael not knowing what to do with himself when he fell madly in love with her. I'm glad he had Chris to add comic relief!
In the end, I'm glad they found it in their hearts that they love each other and going to run off towards! I'm also glad they picked a time where Mean Papa Joe wouldn't catch him!
Great story, Lorry! It was so good I nominated it for the site's Mj fanfiction awards. I hope I can tell you that! If not, oops lol! Anyways, off to read the sequel!
Author's Response:
It has been long over due but we here at last! Lmao. Yes Amber is seriously messy I agree putting Mj though all the emotional turmoils with Marlon and then Chris's crazy cousin involved smh but they stood it all no matter what! Yea the runway they chose a time when Joseph wouldn't find em which was a blessing in disguise and there's more in the sequel to be read lol. Aww thank you so much for the nomination! Never thought one of my stories would be nominated <3
Date: Mar 01, 2016 11:26 am Title: The End.
Lol at Amber mom
Glad they escaped without Joseph finding out
Can't wait for the sequel ;)
Author's Response:
I know it's great they were able to but how long will that last? And Amber's mum no comment Lmao poor Amber and the sequel is on its way 😉
Date: Mar 01, 2016 09:41 am Title: The End.
Please post the sequel. I look forward to reading it.
Author's Response:
I defiently will Kay don't ya worry hopefully by the end of the week or weekend can't make any promises :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2016 06:10 am Title: The End.
Yay they made it!!! I hope Marlon gets there soon. I can't wait for the sequel!!!
Author's Response:
Ikr? Thank goodness and just in time to avoid Joseph catching them! Gosh I hope so he leaves too in time...aww the sequel will soon be here Louie 😘