[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2023 10:51 am Title: Ch.4
Thank you for this Story, you are so talented! :D
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 09:29 pm Title: Ch.4
LOL, love reading about Michael's playful side. Nice to see the two made up.
Hm...wonder if Joseph is the reason Michael doesn't want people visiting his house?...
Look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
That could be the reason with how tight Joseph's leash on the family is. Mj loves playing around lol.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2016 04:32 pm Title: Ch.4
I'm so happy I got round to starting reading this story, and I have so much to say!
First off, I was smiling throughout these past couple chapters. I really love the way you wrote these two children, every interaction, every gesture, every word they spoke was filled with cuteness!
Secondly, I think you depicted young Michael amazingly, especially given his situation at the time. I totally understand why he acted the way he did, and I think the way it played out with Amber apologising and them having a water gun fight (classic Michael) was spectacular. Really, very heartwarming.
Finally, this story reminds me of my own! Part of my story also features young Michael and his best friend, and it's really refreshing to read this - I feel like I gain some sort of insight by reading about how other people portray his childhood and all.
I'm definitely going to keep reading this, as you already know I really want to get on to the next instalment in this series! Amazing work!! <3
Author's Response:
No thank you taking the effort to read it! well I wanted them to have a sweet childhood but every friendship has it's trials lol. aw thank you I tried to make mj as fun and adorable like he was in his younger years I'm glad our stories connected somehow in his growing up I wanted him to have a decent childhood.
Date: Apr 29, 2016 02:04 pm Title: Ch.4
Lovers always start off as friends--well most of them. It's cute how these argue and fight then make up!
Author's Response:
yep your right lol, they are just too cute for words sometimes~
Date: Feb 09, 2016 12:38 pm Title: Ch.4
Its nice that they made up.
Author's Response:
Yea true to that they can't stay made at each other for too long 😄
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2015 03:04 pm Title: Ch.4
So glad they're friends again😘😘😘
Author's Response:
me too, it was sad seeing em be bad at each other, thanks for reading <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 05:48 pm Title: Ch.4
So glad they made up and I cant wait to see how things evolve with them in high school.
Author's Response:
I'm glad too, it's going to be an interesting ride when we get into the high school days *rubs hands evilly*
lol thanks for reading darling <3
Date: Oct 25, 2015 02:55 pm Title: Ch.4
Loved it
Michael just tell her what's going on, she's your best friend
Author's Response:
thanks hun <3, yes I agree should tell her but what if he has a reason behind it? stayed tune lol.