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Date: Jun 23, 2017 09:46 pm Title: Ch.25

So Chris had dated Amber's cousin... small world :D, lol.

It would be cool to see these characters in a sequel :)

Author's Response:

indeed they did lool.

wait and see :P 

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Date: Jun 21, 2017 06:41 pm Title: Ch.24

Sweet interaction between Michael and Amber. Tbh, Michael doesn't need Marlon's advice when it comes to...flirting etc ;)

Look forward to reading more when you're in the mood for writing more :)

Author's Response:

Of course he doesn't but Marlon sees it as his mission to he 'helpful' whatever that can be smh lool. Thanks Mary 

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Date: Jun 19, 2017 06:07 pm Title: Ch. 23

LOL...Marlon the dating expert of the family XD...

I'm just picturing Michael...poor guy...LOL

Author's Response:

The idiot doesn't care and takes on the throne of being the dating expert. Yes poor Michael he can never get a break XD

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Date: Jun 18, 2017 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 22

Whoo HOO...finally Miss Crazy Horse gets what's coming to her...she sure was STUPID to think she could traumatize Amber and have there not be reprucutions

Wow...Chris sure was blinded by family loyalty, but that's typical...family members usually can't see people for who they really are

Wow...Michael handled Angelina with CLASS...perfectly

No, I think Miss Crazy Horse will be back, people like her are just too stupid to get it, their egos are too big...

I have no idea which song it is...though i would probably go 'Oh yeah' if i read the title lol

Author's Response:

she really is crazy and yes michael finished her with class doing his thing without violence.  I do agree Chris was blinded by her fake sweetnessa needing something to get her way somehow. maybe she'll be back who knows smh lol. the song was just a little bit of you by mj lol. 

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Date: Jun 15, 2017 08:40 pm Title: Ch. 21

Hm...I don't think Chris knows how crazy his cousin REALLY is

Having Miss Crazy Horse show up after a Christmas holiday of getting unintentionally drunk is the last thing Michael and Amber need...smh lol

Some of those drinks are deceptively POTENT...lol

Author's Response:

He's blinded by her cutesy image smh. I love the new nickname you gave it's perfect for her. Also they need to get out every now and then even to be drunk lol. 

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Date: Jun 13, 2017 11:45 am Title: Ch.20 - Christmas Parti II

Wow...he's got a killer hangover, and his buddy Chris is making him go to ANOTHER party...smh...poor Michael lol

And his sisters calling him 'weird' and gossiping about him...seems he can't cut a break...smh lol

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

I agree poor Michael he really cannot catch a damn break even from Chris smh lool. His sisters are just sisters they love you and still find some way to gossip bah lol. Thanks as always <3

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Date: Jun 09, 2017 07:30 pm Title: Ch.19 - Christmas Parti

Wow...sounds like Michael really 'tied one on' as they say...LOL

Wonder if he'll remember the night before ...:D

Author's Response:

Mary who knows if he will or be left with a wonderful headache lol

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 08:48 pm Title: Ch. 18

Put it this way... waiting for the confession added an element of suspense to the story :).

YAY...and the feeling is MUTUAL :D.

Author's Response:

Thanks I tried even reading back I felt it was cheesy oh well lol. Yes at last they confessed and at least its mutual (thankfully)

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Date: Jun 04, 2017 05:54 pm Title: Ch.17

Let's see what words come to my mind...Hm...STALKER...sociopath...NARCISSIST...the B word...LOL...CRAZY... Ms Jekyll and Ms HYDE

Michael and Amber are gonna need a team to get rid of Angelina...impo smh LOL

Author's Response:

Ah so many words that describe her craziness heck they are going to need the damn army to get away from the crazy girl! Lmao.

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Date: Jun 03, 2017 04:06 pm Title: Ch.16

Oh yeah...she's delusional alright...lol
Sounds like a girl who won't take 'No' for an answer.

Am looking forward to seeing how Michael and Amber deal with her...and what the outcomes are...

Author's Response:

She's crazy and spoilt with a dash of delusional OK the side loll. Let's hope they can cope. 

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Date: Jun 01, 2017 07:04 pm Title: Ch.15

YAY...they made up! :D...whew, finally! LOL :D. Even if it took Marlon and Chris to make it happen, with the 'let's lock them in the room, and not let them out til they've made up ploy :).

Yes, they are a cute couple :).

I agree, Amber's apology was more sincere :)

Author's Response:

At last we finally got there with a good nudge from my helpful idiots lol. A childish tactic but it worked thankfully. I agree lol. 

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Date: May 29, 2017 05:21 pm Title: Ch.14

Sounds like Marlon and Michael (and probably the other 4) know how dangerous being part of the mafia is, and they're protective of any woman who shows an interest in any of them.

Good update :).

Maybe this insight will help Amber forgive Michael...

Am curious to see what will help Michael forgive Amber...

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

They do understand when it comes to when an enemy would try to use their ladies in their lives against them for ransom or payback. This should help on both sides. 

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Date: May 27, 2017 02:31 pm Title: Ch.13

Well...idk, she could've been sincere, or it could have just been her automatic emotional response following the confrontation with Chris...

Will be interested to see what happens next :)

Author's Response:

She was trying to be but it just wasn't good enough for Michael as well the confrontation she had with Chris didn't help. Hopefully something will occur to fix the situation. Thanks Mary <3

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Date: May 26, 2017 11:33 am Title: Ch.12

Hm...I wonder if Marlon knew Michael would be there, and has his sites set on Amber as well...

Will be interested to see where things go from here :)

Author's Response:

Marlon could have known but he's one sneaky guy when he wants to be lol. 

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Date: May 21, 2017 02:50 pm Title: Ch.11

I'm imagining this conversation LOL... Chris sure thinks highly of himself doesn't he?...LOL No, seriously he's cool :D.

Will be interested to see what type of girls this 'fine glass of chocolate milk (I love that description, btw :D)' is able to attract...LOL :)

Author's Response:

Let's keep that secret between you and I we don't want his ego to get Eben more inflated lool. The fool will have several at his beck and call. Typical lol

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