Date: Jul 08, 2017 11:00 pm Title: Ch.31
Considering the outcome...not a smart move. Although Marlon meant well to try to stop Joseph from being nasty and insulting...
Well yes Marlon sometimes doesn't use his brain at times but he did mean well. At least there wasn't too too much violence at least.
Date: Jul 03, 2017 07:50 pm Title: Ch.30
Have enjoyed Michael and Amber's story so far :)... Am looking forward to their further adventures together :D.
Perhaps together, they can be a 'force' Joseph never figured he'd have to reckon with...as they say 'strength in numbers' :D.
I'm glad you've had fun reading this story. There is plenty more to read in the sequel. Who knows they might have a chance to away from Joseph 😏
Date: Jul 01, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Ch. 29
Omj...Joseph sure seems to be enjoying intimidating his sons into doing what he wants them to do...smh
I think Michael will get Amber to agree...eventually
That's the only way he will get his way somehow force and intimidation smh. Hopefully he will but how is the issue.
Date: Jun 26, 2017 06:54 pm Title: Ch. 27
Yeah, I can see Amber and Michael in LA together... Although I think Amber will try to keep Michael from rushing into things and acting hastily...knowing what she knows about his family...Doing anything hasty would possibly put them in more danger...especially if Joseph were to find out...
Looking forward to the next chapter :D
I agree Amber will try to stop him from jumping into things lol. But that's why she's there lol. Ooh if he finds out..it won't be pretty tsk.
Date: Jun 25, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Ch26
No, his anger is understandable, wanting to protect Amber & her family from the mafia-ish tactics of his brothers & Joseph.
Hope they won't have to be apart for too long this time...
Yep I can't blame him either poor guy let's hope the break is temporaily but we shall see next time :P
Date: Jun 21, 2017 06:41 pm Title: Ch.24
Sweet interaction between Michael and Amber. Tbh, Michael doesn't need Marlon's advice when it comes to...flirting etc ;)
Look forward to reading more when you're in the mood for writing more :)
Of course he doesn't but Marlon sees it as his mission to he 'helpful' whatever that can be smh lool. Thanks Mary
Date: Jun 19, 2017 06:07 pm Title: Ch. 23
LOL...Marlon the dating expert of the family XD...
I'm just picturing Michael...poor guy...LOL
The idiot doesn't care and takes on the throne of being the dating expert. Yes poor Michael he can never get a break XD
Date: Jun 18, 2017 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 22
Whoo HOO...finally Miss Crazy Horse gets what's coming to her...she sure was STUPID to think she could traumatize Amber and have there not be reprucutions
Wow...Chris sure was blinded by family loyalty, but that's typical...family members usually can't see people for who they really are
Wow...Michael handled Angelina with CLASS...perfectly
No, I think Miss Crazy Horse will be back, people like her are just too stupid to get it, their egos are too big...
I have no idea which song it is...though i would probably go 'Oh yeah' if i read the title lol
she really is crazy and yes michael finished her with class doing his thing without violence. I do agree Chris was blinded by her fake sweetnessa needing something to get her way somehow. maybe she'll be back who knows smh lol. the song was just a little bit of you by mj lol.
Date: Jun 15, 2017 08:40 pm Title: Ch. 21
Hm...I don't think Chris knows how crazy his cousin REALLY is
Having Miss Crazy Horse show up after a Christmas holiday of getting unintentionally drunk is the last thing Michael and Amber need...smh lol
Some of those drinks are deceptively POTENT...lol
He's blinded by her cutesy image smh. I love the new nickname you gave it's perfect for her. Also they need to get out every now and then even to be drunk lol.
Date: Jun 13, 2017 11:45 am Title: Ch.20 - Christmas Parti II
Wow...he's got a killer hangover, and his buddy Chris is making him go to ANOTHER party...smh...poor Michael lol
And his sisters calling him 'weird' and gossiping about him...seems he can't cut a break...smh lol
Look forward to reading more :)
I agree poor Michael he really cannot catch a damn break even from Chris smh lool. His sisters are just sisters they love you and still find some way to gossip bah lol. Thanks as always <3
Date: Jun 07, 2017 08:48 pm Title: Ch. 18
Put it this way... waiting for the confession added an element of suspense to the story :).
YAY...and the feeling is MUTUAL :D.
Thanks I tried even reading back I felt it was cheesy oh well lol. Yes at last they confessed and at least its mutual (thankfully)