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Reviewer: flshamone51 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2018 08:52 am Title: Author's Note

I’ll pray for your mom and i really appreciate your work ❤️ When u feel better, please update this story ❤️ I love it ☺️

Reviewer: love_deeply Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2015 05:59 pm Title: Author's Note

Hey girl. Sorry to hear about your mom. I'm sure finding that out was, and still is, hard to deal with. But, you have to stay strong for you & your mom. You'll come out of this dark space soon. Praying for you & your mom.

Keep your head up. Much love. 💟

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2015 08:31 am Title: Author's Note

I'm so sorry to hear that. Take your time and do whatever you want that makes you happy :) Its all for L.O.V.E

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2015 07:15 pm Title: Blurred Lines

Ayyeeeee...they were too turnt up! and Lisa and her almighty chin done broke Michael's heart. I think we all can agree that she needs a swift kick in the ass. And ooh, this is juicy...a little alcohol and a little sex can stir up more than just a party! Sounds juicy! Keep it up, girl!

 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2015 06:47 pm Title: Author's Note

Awwww, well you and your mom are in my prayers and even though I didn't read your story yet, I'm excited to see what you have so far! Looks interesting! And for someone who is studying mental health and psychology, you have my full support! Just keep your head up and keep the faith, okay? Your mom and all of us want you to be strong :-)

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2015 11:46 am Title: Author's Note

Girl we're praying for you and your mother  just live everything to god 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2015 03:14 am Title: Author's Note

You know you can always talk to me if you want

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2015 06:52 pm Title: Author's Note

you and your family are in my prayers i look forward to you coming back with more of this story 

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2015 06:36 am Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 2

She's PREGNANT?!?! THIS IS ABOUT TO GET WILD FOR SURE OMG



Author's Response:

Oh yeah she is pregnant. Another update is on the way :D

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2015 01:29 am Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 1

Oh gawd now everybody knows. I'm ready to see what happens after this. I'm picturing the footage of them so well lmao I read that part and cracked up 

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2015 01:25 am Title: Runaway Bride

I agree with Tut! These two are wishy washy as hell. Y'ALL NEED TO MAKE UP YA MINDS! 

But I'm still tripping over Michael saying he was going to kill her 

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2015 09:52 am Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 2

Oh! Its about time now Lisa got 2 find someone else and find some thing else 2 do. She gets on my nerves. So glad she got pregnant by him! Its about time! Now we getting some where. Keep it going!



Author's Response:

Lol maybe she will move on and that is a maybe. This is Lisa and I don't see her giving up anytime soon luv. Working on another update tomorrow :)

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2015 05:07 pm Title: Blurred Lines

I could serious kill Lisa. Like I could do all types of damage to her ass for what she did  Michael. All that man ever did was love her but noooo, she wants out. Some shit is that?!?!?!? 

I don't blame him for moving on from her and leaving her in.the past where she now resisted for the better. 

And I see He caught himself a lil eye.candy at.the pool. Hmmmm. ;) 

But damn, I was not expecting for the sex to happen then they wake up in her room Married!!!!!!??'???? :0

Loving this.

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2015 09:32 am Title: Runaway Bride

I can understand both of their frustration, but the should really discuss things. I know she was hurt thinking she's the rebound girl, but leaving the way she did not help. And Michael talking bout killing her once he finds her 😳 he must want to go to jail...lol. 

Well he got her address...let's see how this turns out... 

 

Back to reading. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2015 09:01 am Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 2

You're doing a great job writing about Michael in this era. It's the same Michael only working on a different album so Bad Michael and Dangerous Michael is just Michael. One concern I have tho is that Gabi is only 18. While she is of legal age to marry and things like that her Marriage to Michael started out with them being drunk. Alchohol that Michael bought and there in lies where things become illegal. If the press where to find out he bought an underaged girl drinks and got her drunk and had sex with her it could be very bad. Michael is in his 30's and almost twice her age. That could look super duper bad. It's not so much the age difference as it is the fact he bought her alchohol. She can't legally drink alcohol till 21. That hotel would also be libel for serving her alcohol before Michael bought her some as well.  

Now she's pregnant. Michael is happy but I'm sure like Gabi said before that she's only 18 she has yet to experience anything at all in life. She has school and all that to look forward to and now she has to worry about another human being. Michael loves children but now he's getting one at the expense of Gabi who herself is fresh out of being a child herself. I know it will be overwhelming for her. I'm sure her father being a lawyer finds all of this out of place and that's why he doesn't like Michael. Gabi is literally still his baby girl. If she where at least four years older it wouldn't be any illegality present and she would have at least gotten some life experience under her belt. 

With all that being said I know there is a lot of adjustments to come in their life both her and Michael let's see how it all pans out. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

I took everything that yu said into acct and I decided to change Gabi's age and you will see that in the next update. Gabi is scared about being mom and that is for sure. So a lot of adjustments will have to be made as she can't do the thing that she used to do as far as drinking goes. Michael has made it clear that his wants to care of her and their baby. And he does not want to get a divorce but how does Gabi feel about that?  Well you are  about to see :D

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