Date: Oct 01, 2018 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really hope you’ll come back to this story soon, I miss it โน๏ธ
โค๏ธ I will, I promise! I am currently working on the next chapter. Thank you for the push and motivation. I hope to have it up soon. Thank you!!
Date: Sep 13, 2018 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 37
Wow! This story is beyond incredible! I enjoyed every single word! The plot is so unique and characters well developed. The love between Michael and Gabby is so profound and that plot twist with Jeanine and Levi nearly killed me.
Please write more! Iโd love to see what happens next.
Awwwhhh โค๏ธ Bless you! And thank you so much! Im glad you like it. I do plan on finishing it. I’ve just had so many things come up recently but I promise you I will. You guys are my motivation...I won’t leave you hanging. And I’m glad you were able to push through the first few chapters ๐, I was just starting out and my writing has progressed since then. Lol ..Thanks again and I’ll try to get the next chapter out soon.
Date: Jun 26, 2018 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 37
Hey! I've been a reader of this story since... FOREVER! And this is the 5th time I read it all over again! I just love it so much, the way you describe things and feelings is so good! It's so easy to read, to understand and to engage to the story, you have no idea! I hope you'll continue this story soon, are you still working on new chapters? :)
Thank you so much for this review! โค๏ธ It has been a while. Today I actually went back and read the last three chapters and fell in love with this story all over again. And after reading your response, this really gave me the push I need to write the next chapter. Thank you so much...it really means a lot to me. Be on the lookout, I’ll have a chapter out soon.
Date: Nov 23, 2017 07:12 am Title: Chapter 37
I was checking and realized that the party had never really gotten started and that hopefully when you update, Jermaine will be in the next chapter! We really need to get to the bottom of this with him! What if this was intentional! For some reason i believe that he knew that the four of them were linked some how
Date: Nov 20, 2017 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 37
Man you don't know how estatic I AM that Gabby got to two-piece that bitch. I've been waiting damn near half the story time for this to happy. I'm sorry it had to go down at a party with Michael's family present nonetheless, but what's done is done and I ain't sorry you wrote it that way. I truly believe there is something mentally wrong with Jeanine and she needs to seek psychiatric help. Why does a grown ass woman use so much of her energy out of the day to worry about the next bitch? I'd be trying to work on my marriage or in her case, the lack thereof.
Great chapter and I can't wait until you update again. Happy Thanksgiving!
Date: Nov 18, 2017 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 37
Yay, another update! Happy Thanksgiving. ๐๐ฝ๐—
Ooh...the shit has hit DA (yes, "DA")๐’จ๐’จ fan! Jeanine is bold, cause I would've gone to jail ๐‘ฎ from 2300 Jackson Street that night. Ain't no way a chick gonna spit in my face and live to tell the tale!โ๐‘๐ ๐ก
I got heated, shit. Lol.I wanna know like Mike and Gab, who is this friend that invited her AND sent her that pic of MJ and Gab as a family ๐‘ช with Lil MJ. Messy boots and bitch! I declare.๐ฏ๐‘
Lord, all the tea fell out in the party, except the identify of WHO Jeanine was cheating with...lol. Levi would've drowned. ๐‘ He got the nerve to act concerned about Jeanine threatening ๐‘ถbaby MJ, but can't even really recall the baby's name. SMH.
Jeanine is unhinged though, and I can tell that this isn't the last we'll see of them and their shananagans. She is Glenn Close, Fatal Attraction type obsessed. I won't be surprised if that fool petitions for custody or visitation out of SPITE. SMH. Good thing, Gab and MJ will talk to their lawyer in the morning. MJ needs to officially adopt him, if his name isn't on the birth certificate. Too much uncertainty with it being like it currently is.
Shit, what next, she boils the baby's stuffed bear?๐จ๐‘๐‘
Also now, after this debacle, Mike has to come clean with his family about this situation and his relationship with Jeanine. Mother won't like this.๐ณ๐ฉ
Date: Nov 17, 2017 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 37
Thank gooodness Michael was the voice of reason. How did they get invited?
I glad that Gabby got to whoop her ass a little.
Jeaninie wont back down she wants Michael but she ain’t going to get him, ever again. He LOVES Gabby.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 37
Bruh! I been waiting for Jeannie to get her ass whooped. She fucking needs it with her crazy ass. Levi still needs one and i really hoped Michael was gonna whoop that ass. It made me so proud to see his brothers stand behind him and fight with him. I can’t wait until the next chapter. I know his family is gonna ask for the details.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 37
That entire slap and beat down had me yell Damn! the physco cow deserves it. What she said was unforgivable and how petty can one person to threaten a child! An innocent child. Crazy bish. What a chaos filled chapter. Wow just wow.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 37
Girl... I like so much this story ! i check every night if you posted a new chapter. I think i need to check your other story too ! I really love your style of writing. ๐
Now awesome chapter as always and the fight omg LMAO!
The best part: she has counted the positions she did with Levi and saying his dick isnโt big enough hahaha poor guy lol Luckyly with Michael, she won the jackpot! lol
Date: Nov 17, 2017 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 37
Gabby is my kind of people! Same thought process and everything. "I'll kill them!" trust me, that thought has ran through my mind before1 LMAO....but seriously...I feel her frustration and understand that the hurt she feels is making her talk likke that.
I always knew those Jacksons were gansta deep down. But I felt proud that they willing to stick up for Michael knowing they know nothing of the situation. I felt my chest stick out when they appeared. My level of respect has risen for them and I can only imagine how they were in real life. But where the hell was Jerms at? I can't wait to get to the bottom of this! I was waiting on Joe to come out of nowhere ready to pistol whip someone!
I'm quite surprised that Gabby didn't give Jeanine AND Levi the ass whooping of the year. The deserve it! Levi for not taking care of his responsibility and Jeanine for being so conviing. WHat did Michael ever see in her? How could he have feelings for her? I wonder what is his thought process in all of this. He has to feel a certain way. Will we see his thoughts on it? What about Levi and Jeanine's thoughts on it. I know she has to be jealous of the way Michael stuck up for Gabby. That has to be gut wrenching.
How are they going to explain everything to everyone? I'm sure everyone is going to be side eyeing Michael's companyb with Gabby, even thought who don't know about them.
Man...don't keep us waiting!