Date: Jul 03, 2015 02:41 pm Title: Audition
Haha if I was her & he asked are you excited for more rehearsals I would've said fuck no you're such a perfectionist that after the 20th time practicing the same thing I'd have to restrain myself from hitting you over the head with a 2 by 4 or whatever else I could find. Lol love your story. You should add some pranks he's famous for pulling on people in there.
Author's Response: thinking about it
Date: Jul 03, 2015 01:25 pm Title: Audition
i like the story!, just maybe you could split the paragrahs into smaller spaces, it gets a little difficult to read, just a suggestion.
Author's Response: thanks for reading hun!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2015 12:58 pm Title: Surprise For Everyone
Wow... :) This chapter is really good, as well as very well-written, too. I like it... :)
(This is how I imagine Michael to look in the story...)
Keep up your super-cool, very unique and phenomenally creative writing... :)
Author's Response: thank you
Date: Jul 03, 2015 12:41 pm Title: Surprise For Everyone
Sounds like it's gonna be an awesome time!
Author's Response: it will be
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2015 09:05 am Title: Audition
Awesome so far... I like it. :) Very neat, as well as very creative and inspiring...
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully cool writing! :)
Author's Response: thanks
Date: Jun 28, 2015 08:37 am Title: Audition
Yay for Kayla!
Author's Response: yay