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Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2015 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm so happy for Michael! ;) That was very nice of what Em did.



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:))))

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2015 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1

This is really good.  I can't wait to see where you go next!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!! Enjoy the update!!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2015 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 4

She should've shot him, & gotten rid of the body. Why does Michael still keep that fucking piece of shit in his life? Ugh. Joseph doesn't deserve any respect, he used to beat Michael and his brothers. I can't stand people like that. Anyway what was his reaction to her singing? Never got to hear what he thought. 



Author's Response:

That, his reaction and his opinion about her as a musician, will be revealed soon in the story. There's a lot to be analysed until the end of the story...

Thanks so much for reviewing, and I'm really glad you like "Tell me, why??"!! There'll be an update to that one as well soon!!

Much love :)

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2015 02:23 am Title: Chapter 3

I listened to the song. Like wow! I can see him playing that as it should be played. That's interesting that he hired because she didn't have an impressive resume and some kind of medical training. I'm so glad you didn't let him have ALS. Please don't kill him off. That was horrible enough in you're not you. That's actually freaking adorable that he's embarrassed to get a compliment. I think the way you portrayed his perspective on the 93 allegations without actually referring to them and the way the media attacks him because of his close relationship with kids was completely accurate and very heartwrenching :,( I wish she'd challenge him somewhat he can't move on and get better if he doesn't confront his own demons so to speak. Anyway I love that her surprise for him:) where do u find so many kids on such short notice anyway? I love this please keep writing and I love your other story I think it's called tell me why :) 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2015 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

- I like it 



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I'm glad! Enjoy!

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2015 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great!!! A little more spacing in the paragraphs but its fine so far :)

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Thanks a lot!! <3

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2015 09:55 pm Title: PROLOGUE

I loved that movie! Great idea! Please don't write him as having ALS it's such an awful disease. Is Emmy rossum who u had in mind for your lead character? Keep going with this it's really good. Is he going to be an addict in this story? 



Author's Response:

No, he's not having ALS, even though I thought about it at some point. And yeah, I have Emmy Rossum in mind, she's so beautiful and so talented!!

I won't reveal any other secrets for now!! Tell me what you think on the update!!

Thank you so much for reviewing! <3

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