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Date: Jan 08, 2017 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 25

Can I play truth or dare with him?! lol...if only. Awesome chapter!

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Date: Jan 08, 2017 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 24

I'm so glad I started reading this after it was finished. No waiting, yay!

Author's Response:

well when you are done you will have plenty of stories to read.  I have a few out there.  Thanks for reading

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 21

Poor Micheal...I think she's afraid that she is falling in love with him. Once again awesome chapter!

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 20

Amazing girl! So loving your writing skills!

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 19

Um....wow!

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 17

Goldie Pants! Still love that! Will watch HIStory concerts differently from now on.

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 15

So good. This chapter made me cry and it made me laugh. Very good writing.

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 14

You never disappoint, excellent chapter.

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 12

Uh oh! lol Onto the next chapter! Excellent writing girl!

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

Lump in throat again. Love this!

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wow...choked up here. I could totally see him doing something like that.

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 7

Goldie pants...lol. Love it! Man, had to go watch one of his concerts after this chapter! Well done!

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

So well written. I have to remind myself from time to time that I'm reading fiction and not the 'real thing'. Such as the letter from the nurse? Or was that real?

Author's Response:

thanks, no it's not real just something I made up.

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

The MJ bug is nipping at her. Who can resist him? Very nicely done!

Author's Response:

thanks

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Date: Jan 07, 2017 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like this 'out of character' Michael. Suits him just fine!

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