Date: Oct 07, 2015 11:57 am Title: Chapter 13. Running Back Into You...
Why am I so late on reading this update? This was so sweet and I loved it!
Author's Response:
It's okay. You catch up whenever you have th time right?
And ikr. Although, there's still one more thing to do on michael's part.
But I'm glad you loved it.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2015 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 4. Running Back Into You...
If she's thinking about quitting, she should rethink things through. Despite her relationship with Michael, getting her foot in the door and starting her career should come first at this point.
I wasn't expecting her to leave the room though. I pictured just this awkward metting and them just pretending not to know each other in front of Teddy, boy was I wrong,
Author's Response:
You and everyone else.thought the same.except for some. She should have stayed and just brushed it off until after their meeting but I guess she reacted out on her pain he caused her.
We all know Michael was.not having that. Pretending to not know one another. Uh uh. He was gonna blurt her name out, lol.
But yes, you got whoooole another reaction in this chapter, lllooolllll.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2015 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 3. Running Back Into You...
Im with Janet. He would have been better off just telling Dawn the truth anout his feelings for her and everything would have worked out fine.
Oh well, I will give him the benefit of the doubt. At least now he has a chance to redeem himself.
Author's Response:
True. He really did have a chance, he'll plenty of chances if he loved her then before all that FWB took place. Why create that when you could have had her altogether as you partner, your companion. So backwards.
Yeah, he has a chance now, but will It get accepted. Who knows.
Date: Sep 28, 2015 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 13. Running Back Into You...
Thank the lawd. Everybody knows now. Dawn can stop beating herself up about this and Michael can shut the fuck up too. Lord. Smh. Dawn didn't get herself pregnant so if his ass would have even slightly tried it, she needed to drag him for filth and snatch his ass by them baby hairs. Ugh. Anyway, Kyan is such a sweetheart. I knew he wouldn't be mad at his mommy. Now he knows who his daddy is and they're off to building a relationship. Now Michael needs to tell him that he has a sister and she will be coming over. I wonder how this will make Dawn feel. Hmm.
Author's Response:
You and everyone else. Finally they told Kyan about Michael being his father now everything is going on the right track. And yes, finally Dawn can stop beating herself up about it but she is still doing it to herself. Thinking of what Kyan would think or feel about her in the future. That's something she should worry about.
Michael as he claims is still angry about everything still, but at least he's being.nice cause Mike could have been filthy in this chapter and being harsh to her purposely so thank God for that.
Ky is such a cutie. Omg. He lobes his mommy so.much an looked past her wrongs. He's young so he really wouldn't understand as much now but yeah, he wasn't mad at her. She's fearingthat he will later on in life as I mentioned earlier .
But now they can build on their father and son relationship and meet michael's other child his baby sister. So many reunions going on, lol.
As for the way dawn may feel, she shouldn't be upset. After all, Giuliana was conceived a year later.during a marriage not while she and Michael wafooling around so she shouldn't be upset.
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 13. Running Back Into You...
So glad to see you updated this story! I was almost certain he was going to tell Dawnette about his daughter coming over when he went into the other room...so now his son knows he's his son, but his daughter doesn't know she has a brother. Jeebus. I need another chapter. Please!
Author's Response:
Yasss, it's been what? A month almost? Lol, kinda tricked you with that one huh? But eventually he will tell her before his daughter does arrive. Let's hope so.
Yes Kyan knows that Michael is his father. The only thing is Kyan doesn't know exactly what his father does yet which will be known sometime later in the story. To Kyan he's just daddy now. It's obvious Kyan never mentioned Michael's celebrity. Or maybe he does know but just never said anything.
Giuliana and Kyan reunion will be something to look forward to. Will they get along to say they're so young in age.
And your chapter will come soon. Hopefully this week.
Date: Sep 28, 2015 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 13. Running Back Into You...
Please update soon! Love the story. Great writing!
Author's Response:
I will. Probably this week I'm not sure but thanks. I'm glad you're loving it.
Date: Sep 28, 2015 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2. Running Back Into You...
I don't know how I feel about Cree. I'm all for second chances but him cheating one to many times is enough for her not to give him a second chance. I only see him messing this up between her and Mike even though Mike ain't no better either. 😈 Drama...I love it! Lol.
And the meeting they're about to have with her being invited to the family day? Can't wait!
Author's Response:
Cree did homegirl wrong and he's talking about he's a changed man. Yeah, he's changed alright. I don't think Dawn would be that crazy to give him a another chance after all that he done to her. I know I wouldn't.
It's possible he could mess.up things between her and Mike in the future if they end up together but you right, Mike isn't any better himself, lol.
Yes, she was invited to family day by Janet. Gotta wonder how that's gonna go.
Date: Sep 28, 2015 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1. Running Back Into You...
Ok, I like where this is going! So they're going to be working together....this is going to be interesting to read.
Michael had me rolling my eyes at how he now realiz he's in with Dawn. In my head, I was screaming 'nigga it's too late.' Lol, well we shall see how he recovers from this.
Back to reading...
Author's Response:
Aww, im so happy you're enjoying it. And you're right they will but they just don't know that their gonna see each other again after so long.
Mike is a trip in the first beginning stages of the story. He makes you wanna shank him and every other bad thing there is. It took him that long to realize he is in love with Dawn. But does she feel the same for him? Hmm...
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 02:19 pm Title: Prologue...
Well damn, I think I'm just as upset and heartbroken as she is.
Im trying to figure out why I haven't came across this story before. This was an excellent start and Michael already on my shit list. I can sense so impending drama between these two in the future.
Back to reading...
Author's Response:
Haha, you're the second person to say that. But it is very upsetting at how Michael did Dawnette. Lol it happens. And thanks. I worked very hard to come up with the introduction and I'm glad you liking it.
Eh, Michael is on.everyone's shit list right about now. As for the drama, you read and find out. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 09:36 am Title: Chapter 13. Running Back Into You...
I'm glad they finally told Kyan the truth. All that hush his and watching what they said would have gotten to be way too much. Now Dawn shouldn't have a bad reaction to Guiliana at all because she's a product of a marriage she knew about.
Now the siblings get to meet and I'm hoping they will get along.
More soon bb!! <333
Oh if you get the chance check out my new story Soul Seeker. It's not going to be a long story and it's halfway finished already. <333
Author's Response:
You and me both. I'm happy they did and got it over with. The slips up would have pretty much made things.confusing Kyan but luckily it didn't.
Dawn, she'll be aight when Giuliana comes. She should. And like you said, Michael was married and his daughter is a product of that.
I'm sure Kyan and Giuliana will get along just fine. Maybe start of shy like most children their age.
And I'll most definitely check it out right after I catch up on BEB!
Date: Sep 28, 2015 05:46 am Title: Chapter 13. Running Back Into You...
Michael would have told dawn about his daughter earlier instead of dropping it on her when his daughter come , to prepare ky to meet his sister and all
Author's Response:
That's true. I think he should tell her to give her a heads up but mostly Kyan because this is his sister that he's never met before. Hopefully, he will in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2015 07:27 am Title: Prologue...
Damn it. How you gon make me sad during a prologue. I feel for Nettie though! Damn :( Does Michael have serious feelings? Cuz I'm feeling like something is there. Like, sir you can't be serious right now. I think there's something there but I don't wanna assume
assuming is like thinking though? God idk! I'm ready to find out
Author's Response:
Awwwww, my apologies. I didn't mean to make you crrrrrryyyyy!!!!!
Dawnette, really felt played here. I don't blame her for going off on him. He deserved it.
Now as for Michael having possible feelings for Dawn, maybe he does, we wouldn't know unless he confesses them. Just keep readinand you'll find out. You won't be assuming anymore.
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2015 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 12. Running Back Into You...
Michael can't be too mad at Jan for her comment about his ex because if he used to condone her remarks before then all he had to do was explain that she's not doing so well so the jokes are in poor taste.
Its going to interesting when the whole thing comes to light with Geena and Dawn. Dawn will find out he has another child which shouldn't be too surprising since they where married. What's going to be crazy tho is when Geena finds out he has another child with Dawn and that he was cheating on her at the time to conceive said child. That's going to be interesting to watch go down for sure!!
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Ha, you have a good point girl. A good point. Mike is backwards foreal and that's all I'm gonna say about him. One minute he doesn't care that Janet talks about her then the other minute he cares. Pick one Mike?
Geena and Dawn is gonna be something else when they meet which will be sometime soon of course. Not sure when.
Let's just say all he'll is gonna break loose for sure when these two actually meet for the first time. Michael, he's practically the cause of this mess, he might as well get prepared for the drama.
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2015 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 12. Running Back Into You...
It's a left turn ;) I don't know if it was just my GPS and phone, but I couldn't get a signal there for the life of me.
Damn, so his first real meeting with his son isn't even going to be about just the two of them bonding. His daughter will also likely be going through her own issues as she's watching her mother's health decline rapidly. Now Dawnette's pending reaction? I need to see that asap, please!
Author's Response:
Oh wait, you visit Neverland?!?!?!? How cool.
See I figured I had the directions wrong, I was close though. Lol.
Yes. This meeting is sure gonna be one hell of a family reunion. Now only is Kyan meeting his father but his aunt and sister later. That's something.
As for Giuliana, I do feel bad for her. The poor girl is losing her mother as each day comes. Poor baby.
As for Dawn's reaction to his daughter..... we'll see soon.
Date: Aug 31, 2015 12:56 am Title: Chapter 3. Running Back Into You...
Wow great story love it 😊😊
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.