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Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2015 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 21- Tuesday Night Update: 11/24/2015

Soooo cute!!!!! 😍😩 I love them like this. I hope they keep working towards what they want to be.



Author's Response:

Yasssss.... I agree sis.  Thank u for your review and rating.  Tonight and update will be posted. 



Author's Response:

Yasssss.... I agree sis.  Thank u for your review and rating.  Tonight and update will be posted. 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2015 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 21- Tuesday Night Update: 11/24/2015

They made up way to fast but I'm happy that they made up though and it seems like they are on good grounds now I still feel that he's too demanding and aggressive when it comes to her just because he's older , I loved when she was throwing things at them they deserved it honestly 



Author's Response:

Lol! Story is no fun if they don't make up. As alwats, I look forward to tour reviews and ratings.  Update will be posted tonight. 

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2015 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 21- MONDAY NIGHT UPDATE: 11/23/2015

Cause that exercise could have ended very badly. I was so scared I really thought this was it for them. I was like "nooo please!!!" I get why Mike, Cliff, and the counselor felt they needed to go this far thoigh. Cindy's reaction was very dismissive. I think Cliff and Mike have made good points. I definitely think this will help though cause they both hate to see eachother with someone.



Author's Response:

Thx sis for your review and rating. We're on the same page here. Getting ready to try and upload tonight's festivities.  Lol

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2015 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 21- MONDAY NIGHT UPDATE: 11/23/2015

Hey girl welcome back.

I do agree with Clifton's talk with Cindy. It was straight to the point and Cindy needed this.

You had me going there when Cindy went back to Michael's and found him and Shania both in towels. Can't blame Cindy's reaction. Then to find out is was a plan formed by her father and the councilor and for Michael and Shania to go alon with it, I would be sooooooo pissed and tell them all to go to hell. Cindy might understand but not right away.

It was just all so mean, even for trying to get Cindy to show some emotions. 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey there... Thank you and I love to read your reviews. Yes, I agree. I think that was below the belt. At least Shania felt bad behind it, but any woman knows those cold as ice eyes Cindy gave. Michael better be lucky his wife handled that more civilized then one may have thought. But I am glad that her dad finally was a father for a change and let her know about her actions, he was just pacifying her for years in my opinion. I mean he's gotten on his son-in-law too, but as a woman, I think Cindette needed a reality check. 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2015 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 21- MONDAY NIGHT UPDATE: 11/23/2015

And to add : she should drive off and don't talk to them she really needs time to herself because what do they expect now ? For her to go home , work it out and then sleep with him ? No she needs to clear her mind and just have a weekend away with her sons !



Author's Response:

Loved your outtake. That was mean as heck what they did... Hopefully, they can get throught this madness. 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2015 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 21- MONDAY NIGHT UPDATE: 11/23/2015

This whole chapter was fucked up I don't care what anyone says that was 100% bullshit to do that to your wife and her father was in on it and the counselor? No sir that's fucked and some how Michael is always the victim Cindy should drop all they asses and take her kids far away because this was so fucked up on so many levels I would have smacked shania and what if Cindy was so mad and emotional that she got in a car crash or something ? Like serious I hope next chapter she give them all a piece of her mind nobody playing victim but he because that shit they pulled was ridiculous and she give into Michael to easily I don't care that was so fucked up smh I'm so mad for her like who does that , setting her up like that ? No she needs a break from everyone honestly 

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2015 11:01 pm Title: NEW Chapter 21- Monday Night Update: 11/9/2015

I'm loving their interaction right now. It's so cute! I think they are really on the right path. I loved the flashback! Explains alot about Mike's temper exploding back then.



Author's Response:

Hey Sis! Sorry, for the late response. Internet problems... I had to reveal a little more about their past. So, now we know. LOL! I actually like going back in time, because I'm able to be more free as a writer. Remember, at the other site we were restricted with so much; now I can express freely this time around on the flashbacks. Thanks so muc your reviews and ratings; I really appreciate it. I'm writing more.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2015 09:12 pm Title: End of Chapter 20- Saturday Night Update: 11/07/2015

I think a reset will be very good for them. I hope it helps rebuild their intimacy and trust. I'm glad Beenie put Mike in his place. Mike definitely needed to hear it from someone close to him. 



Author's Response:

I agree... I'm aiming towards a full recovery. :-)

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 20- Tuesday Night Update: Nov 3, 2015

Michael really needs professional help sooner than latter. He needs a one on one with the therapist.

Cindy is going to get to the point it's just too difficult and tiring to contnue the same grap with Michael's jealously. Michael really needs to get it together.



Author's Response:

I definitely agree. This is unhealthy for the both of them. Thank you for your outtake and rating. I'm working on getting our MJ help.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2015 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 20- Tuesday Night Update: Nov 3, 2015

Their little argument about sex was hilarious. Lol. I do feel bad that Mike is that jealous and insecure about their relationship it's really not healthy. I think Mike really needs to learn to let the past go so he can heal.



Author's Response:

Agreed... Those two are too much. Lol! Yes, he is bad off now. Who knew that MJ was really this way about Cindette?  After all, he's Mr. Casanova. Thanks, sis as always for your outtake and rating.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2015 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 20- Tuesday Night Update: Nov 3, 2015

Wow Thad just cold what he did to beenie honestly I feel that she just too soft when it comes to him , he's so aggressive like who wit holds sex because you wife doesn't want to have a baby ? She has a tour to finish and she just had a baby and packing her stuff and telling her to leave ? She needs to once and for all take a damn stand those insecurities are dangerous now 



Author's Response:

I think MJ is just being funny or maybe he's really not up too sex as much.  He is 57. MJ is known for his rash behavior and tantrums in this atory. Lol! I get what your saying aND I agree. Mike definitely needs help at this point.  He held in his feelings way too long. Thanks for your responses. Love reading them.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2015 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 20- SUNDAY NIGHT UPDATE: Nov 1st, 2015

I think if you are going to stray away from the drama that is SM4 then a different name would be cool or like SM with a twist. Lol. I wouldn't mind a new era story. Anything you write ima read honestly. I'm glad Cindy and Mike got through that with very little crazyiness. I'm shocked that Mike didn't try to get him some though. Lol. 



Author's Response:

Mike petty as hell and u know he low key pissed off about what she did. He on some new ish lately. Tryna withhold the "D" from Cindy. It makes me wonder if he's just not up to it like he used to be, literally.  Lol! The fact that this is a dramatic infused series. Lol! Btw, do u remember... "Heat of the Night" That's the story I was writing and forgot all about it. I found it on a backup drive.  So, i figured why not continued. Not sure if u read it on the site, but it was about MJ and some fan he slept with. 

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2015 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 20- Wednesday Night Update: 10/21/2015

O boy someone's not happy. Cindy better watch out. Hope Michael keeps his cool.

 

Sorry to hear about your friends.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yes, it's been quite crazy, but writing helps me to stay occupied. Glad you enjoyed the update and thank you for your review and rating. Let's hope he keeps his cool. Cindy ought to know better to know how Michael would react, but after all she snuck off and did it this time. Remember before he wouldn't ler take the ills, but I don't think this was a smart move on Cindy's part. MJ may have agreed, but who know. He is very much the family man; so, should we agree with Cindy knowing how Mike is about giving life?

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2015 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 20- Wednesday Night Update: 10/21/2015

First off I want to send you my condolences about your friends passing. You all will be in my prayers. 

This is not looking. Cindy sould have just told Mike she wasn't ready for a baby and she was going to take the plan B. I mean sometimes Mike is understanding about that and other times not but it would be better for him to know. I hope their counseling session doesn't go too bad. Smh. They were doing so good too and was nice to see them be the Cindy and Mike I know and love. Loved the update. Update whenever you can. It's really no rush I will be here waiting. Lol. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you sis. Sorry, I thought I replied... But luckily I rechecked.  I am hoping to update tonight.  Thank you very much for your condolences, review and rating and as always. I  think his reaction is borderline.  Lol! 

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2015 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 20- Wednesday Night Update: 10/14/2015

I'm loving Mike taking control of his family. And Beenie playing advocate is great. Him and Patrice will definitely get these two right on track. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and rating sis. Yes, we gotta love when Mike gets masculine and say hell 2 the naw naw naw. Lol! I'm working on their counseling session.   

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