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Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lmaooooo Michael is worried about losing his manhood! His cute ass irks! Like omggg! lmaoooo Thats what it is! Manly man! Just support yur wife's dream!

Like if you want to jump over the damn moon, your partner should support you jumping over the damn moon. Now they don't need to like it, but they just need to stand there and watch your ass jump over the damn moon.

^^I totally agree! I think Nene said that on Real Housewives

And Apollo *chuckles* Aiden looks just like Malcolm X! I was like damn!! 

But anyway, Michael was getting to use to the fact of Kalli at home. This is not the 1950s! Women today! (well with the storytime) 90s women ;) handle theres! We can be a mommy with a job too! Michael doesn't understand that!



Author's Response:

Yes Nene said that! I love me some RHOA ;)

IKR! He is fine, Michael will probablt hate him one he meets Aiden lool. But he will have too because Kay is determined to work again :)

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2015 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like this story, mj is a curious character to me. I luv your writing, keep it going plz

Author's Response:

I willl :) And the new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh hell no - Michael did not just say that!? Is he determined to die alone in his bed, or for the very least, for her to be wearing full length flannel to bed every night? SMH. I hope she works nights at first, just so that he can sleep alone. First trying to pay off his wife then shutting her down? She needs a chastity belt, Princess Bride - style and he needs to think.

Part 4 is off to a great start. <3



Author's Response:

LMAOOO! You're right! Michael is crazy if he believes that a 'no' is going to stop Kay. He doesn't own her, she is a grown woman, so if she wants to work, she will. And Michael will deal!

Thank you Redone <33

The new chapter is up and I am 90% sure that there is not one hilarious typo lmao :)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2015 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes - mom needs to have her own ID, too. BTW Kalliope is Michael's wife, not his husband lol. So glad to see Kalliope and Michael back! Ooh, and I'm eager to see how you'll weave in the flashbacks. *anxiously awaits*



Author's Response:

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These typos won't let me be great :((

Thank you Redone <3. The new chapter of Little WHite Lies is coming in less than hour btw :)

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2015 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

The new chapter is oneline Paris-Janet :) Enjoy :D

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2015 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah!!!!

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:)

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2015 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

O Boy it doesn't sound  like things are going to be smooth for Kay and Michael.

Wonderng who's coming into the picture.



Author's Response:

Pay attention to the new characters, they might play a big role ;-)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2015 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

Mmmmmm....Michael I don't know...Kali handles hers. She's happy but at the same time she's not. She just wants to do something outside family life that makes her feel value. Michael has to lighten up. I understand he's stressed but what about what his wife wants. He wants things his way.

But then..what about their babies? Their kids? How would they feel about their mommy going off to work. Their father already has to leave home many times because of his job...now their mother is too? Geez this is gunna be something girl! 

Missed Kalliope and Michael, Annie girl! 

<333



Author's Response:

You're right! Michael needs to understand that Kay's life has been revolving around him and she needs to do something for her now! Well, he gon learn today because Kalliope is not going to give! It's true that the kids needs stability but I'm sure Kay wouldn't make a decision wouldn't taking it in account :)

Aw, thank youuu! I missed writing their story too :)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2015 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was like O to the M to the G! You're baaaaaack! 

P.S I love flashbacks! 



Author's Response:

Yassss Smoochy and Bambi are backkk

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2015 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start to new part of Michael and Kay's life. Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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