Date: Jun 18, 2015 01:51 pm Title: A Day With The Magician
Neat… I like it. :) And the idea of Destinee marrying for love reminds me of Princess Jasmine from the 1992 Disney film Aladdin, as they have something in common: a desire to marry for love. However, that is where the similarities end: while Destinee’s mother, the Queen, is still alive, Jasmine’s mother (who was also the wife of the Sultan, Jasmine’s father) had passed away. Plus, I like the fact that Destinee’s mother agrees with her about marrying for love, and I also hope that Destinee’s father will see sense and learn that marrying for love is quite different, as well as much better. Hopefully his wife will talk some sense into him. I agree with Destinee that her father is being unreasonable there — setting her up with so-called ‘suitors’ who are not very nice at all. She has no eyes for them at all — and the only person she does have eyes for is none other than Michael… good for her. :)
Keep it up with your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! <3
Date: May 03, 2015 10:08 pm Title: A Day With The Magician
Omg I love it!!! I'm so blown away right now and. I have been waiting 4 an update so glad it finally came! The pic of the beach is soo romantic and breathtakingly gorgeous! Take ur time reading my story no rush hope u enjoy it wen u do read it. I watched the video remember the time and at the end I said is that all? What happened 2 the rest of the short film and then I thought about it and said 2 myself I have 2 come here 2 read the rest of the short film lol I know that's silly but this story is really good in a lot of ways. Keep it up plz!
Thank you so much for your kind words <3 I will keep it going! :D
Date: May 03, 2015 02:02 pm Title: A Day With The Magician
Omg! You betta continue girl!
I will! :)
Date: Apr 28, 2015 03:10 am Title: Stick Around!
Ur very welcome I got nothing but good reviews which I'm glad my work is being enjoyed by a lot of ppl makes me feel good they are taking time out of their day 2 read my work. But I guess not everyone likes my work its good 2 hear from u as always
Once I have time, I'll read your story :3
Date: Apr 23, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Stick Around!
I am so in luv wit this story and that pic I actually watched remember the time the other day and mj blew me away I thought I saw it coming but mj surprized me! The whole thing with the golden dust and the sexiness just got me. Mj was surely ahead of his time with his short films, I luv mj soo much! If I were in the queen's shoes after kissing mj I would have been with him faster than he could dissolve into that golden dust! lol I'm silly right?!
Lol, it's ok to be silly! XD And I completely agree with you ;)
Date: Apr 19, 2015 06:51 pm Title: Stick Around!
I luv the idea of the pharoah n queen i luv how the story is like i said b4 i luv it mj was ahead of hiz tyme wen he made his short films he's simply amazing even words r not enough...he is wonderful
I'm glad you like the story and I totally agree with you :)