Date: Mar 25, 2015 03:01 am Title: Dear Michael (Slam Poem)
Ooh, I'm excited that you are writing a story. Just reading your poem makes me want to read it! Also, when you get a chance, check out my story Remember the Time and tell me how you like it, and I will read yours when it comes out! Once again, great job, girl! <333
Thank you :) I did read your story and I love it! Keep up the great work girl.-Eleanor M
Date: Mar 24, 2015 04:59 am Title: Dear Michael (Slam Poem)
I loved it! Flawless! Michael would have loved it, too. Even though he was loved by many, he was understood by so few.
Thank you! Michael was human just like everyone else on this earth. I'm the type of fan who sees beyond the glamour of fame and fortune. I only saw the man with a childs heart. The song Childhood hits home for me because my childhood was taken from me because when my dad left I had to grow up and help raise the family. Now I'm 17 and I act like I'm 6 LOL.
I'm glad you liked it there will be more don't worry in fact I am working on a story at the moment. :)
again thanks for the feedback :)
Date: Mar 23, 2015 07:40 am Title: Dear Michael (Slam Poem)
This was absolutely lovely. You are very talented and I just adored the way you incorporated some of his best songs in the poem. You were graceful and beautiful with your words, not just anyone can pull that off but you did. Welcome aboard and I hope to read more from you in the near future. I think you'll love it here on this site. It's pretty cool and lots of fun. God Bless you too! And once again, well done. :)
Thank you so much 😊 I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your hospitality I'm very happy to be here. I will be writing more very soon :) God Bless -Eleanor M