[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2015 05:29 am Title: Chapter 2
First off I got to say for you to have written this at 16/17 Kudos girl.
One thing that's troubling about young people of wealth is their romanization of poverty. There is nothing romantic about having to struggle to pay bills especially when you don't have to. It doesn't make you more noble, "real" or morally inclined than those who accept their wealth. I guess the grass is always greener on the other side.
On the same token I can see why she would want to escape her fathers imposing thumb.
So Simon is the gold digger in the scenario. Lol. Well him wanting to marry for money and position only proves my earlier statement. It's what happens all the time and ruins lives because there is no love involved. Jody certainly would not be the best candidate for a demur housewife that's for sure. Lol
I hope to God Michael is a tiger in that meeting. The idea that they already think him weak is rather wack. I can't wait for that dude to get his ass handed to him in a wet paper bag.
More soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 10:17 am Title: Chapter 2
I started laughing when I read your note. Por supuesto mi amiga.
I really don't like Simon or Jody's father. What kind of a lame man would pursue a woman just for prestige or wealth? Oh wait, that's commonly reversed. Nevermind. He's such a villain in this story and I have to wonder how naive she must have been in the past to be okay with him. Jody is like this rebel without a real cause...living in fear. She's disobeying her father, but at the same time, he obviously controls her life. It's sad and frustrating. Okay, I'll shut up now before I reveal too much....