Date: Oct 30, 2020 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 24
Loved this book. The concept of this was great!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2015 03:25 am Title: Chapter 24
beautiful story
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 24
Excellent story. I loved it. Way to go.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
If you liked that I will hopefully be adding another story along the same line as this one.
Date: Feb 25, 2015 04:43 am Title: Chapter 3
It was either Aurora didn't think about or she didn't spend that much time with her Jackson family...Keep in mind, she was born twenty years after this all happened.
(but this is why I post my stuff. So that other people can see what I can't. I shall try to make that bit more clear!)
Date: Feb 24, 2015 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ok, so he didn't cut off his family? Then how come his granddaughter didn't know she was also black?
Things are moving very fast for both of them. It's like he instantly started to confide in her and within a chapter she went from being reticent to all in. It must have been one great day!
Date: Feb 24, 2015 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow this story rocks Im going to keep reading!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll keep posting! :)
Date: Feb 24, 2015 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh lawd, the spacing makes things so much easier! I'm glad you altered it as your writing deserves to be read by more people.
How did she get pushed up to the front?! That's a spot people are more likely to get pulled from then pushed into lol. I take it that this is a pretty AU story? How did he get from LA to NL so quick? Either way, she's lucky as hell!
Author's Response:
Keep reading. I'll be adding something at the end that should make more sense as to how she got to go to Neverland so quickly.
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2015 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
sooooo much better! My eyes can handle this ;)
Very interesting premise. I'm having flashbacks of The Princess Bride lol. So, what we need to find out is how did he die, why did he change his ID, and why did he cut off all contact with his family.
So she's been married twice, just like him? I'm intrigued!
Author's Response:
Yeah. I realized that after I started writing it lol but i've always loved that style of story telling and it seemed to fit with what I wanted to do with this story.
I think I explained those things in chapter thirteen when he and Nicole discuss his plan for disappearing. And as for cutting off all contact with his family, I don't think i wrote it that way. But in chapters yet to come I will show him having contact with his family....Sorry if that's not clear.
And I wrote Nicole as having been married twice so that she would be someone who understands Michael that way.
Despite those things, I hope you've enjoyed what you've read so far and will continue to enjoy it as I post more chapters.
Date: Feb 24, 2015 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah.
Don't worry I will. I am uploading currently. But I will fix it.
Thanks :)
Date: Feb 24, 2015 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please mess with the formatting. The text is so bunched together that it is hard on the eyes to read. I'd like to read it, but the way it is currently formatted, I can't.