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Reviewer: orangejuice_mj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2016 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 Her Secret

I'm loving the story so far! Keep writing!!

Author's Response:

Yay thank you!! I'm definately still going strong with this story ^^

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2016 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 Play Room

Girl....whoooo I was worried for Michael! I thought he was gonna totally explode! I can only wait for the revenge chapter! Lol 😈 Great stuff!



Author's Response:

Hahaha that is indeed a valid worry XD The revenge chapter is called "Switched Roles" if you haven't read it yet, there you go ;)

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2016 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 20 Teaching him

I would  lik if Michael  was in control  lol 



Author's Response:

Well that ain't the case here ^^

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2016 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 On the Armchair

That shower scene tho 😍 I do want one chapter where Michael gets complete revenge on her, turning the tables! Ooh girl, u got me hooked I need me a cool drink n some popcorn for this! loving it! 👌🏾👍🏾🍿



Author's Response:

hahah you're too much XD Thank you!! And you are in for a treat, there is a scene in there where he get's complete revenge, just keep reading ;)

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2016 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 2 In Handcuffs

Damn, poor Mike was going thru it lol RED! RED! She teased him so much, he almost got vertigo lol great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Oh yeah you are competely right XD Jamie want's him on the edge of his seat ;)

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2016 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 Her Secret

Yasssss Jamie take control! I am hooked already! Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Hooked from the first chapter?! That's great, thank you so much!!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2016 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 16 After Work

continue



Author's Response:

sure wil :)

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2016 09:24 am Title: Chapter 15 Seductive Torture

that was hot

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2016 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Revenge

dang



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2016 07:49 am Title: Chapter 13 The king on his throne

that was hot



Author's Response:

;) thanks girl

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2015 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 12 Revisit at the Playroom

FUCK I LOVE THIS!!! Thankkk uuu for updating!!! He shud totally get her back😉😊😏. Seems like they havent fucked in a while. Did you ever see that episode of sex and the city where samantha has sex with

a guy in a swing after she gets an HIV test? Might be a cool idea for ur next chapter;) u can do any position in one of those😏



Author's Response:

Loved your comment hahah you're motivating me to write more ^^ I watched the part you mentioned, I could totally add that to a future chapter!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2015 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 12 Revisit at the Playroom

please continue it



Author's Response:

sure will :)

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2015 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 11 TOP THAT

i wanna know more on the relationship. (ps add a marriage proposal)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2015 04:52 am Title: Chapter 11 TOP THAT

The erotica is amazing, but I wouldn't mind just a bit of plot for background's sake. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! So sweet to hear from you :D I think we need a bit of plot as well ^^

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2015 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 11 TOP THAT

That was hot. Love this as always. Wouldnt mind knowing more about their relationship how they met mustve been interesting. I imagine it was an impulsive hot as fuck hookup after a concert of his, you know her getting him back for flaunting that crotch for 2 hours😊



Author's Response:

Hahah that is a great scenario you pictured there ^^ That's totally something Jamie would do, you know her XD Thanks for the review!!

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