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Reviewer: CherylQueenRed Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2023 10:01 pm Title: CHAPTER THIRTY: Too Much To Life

Can you make another Freddie Mercury Michael Jackson slash but series & longer and they end up together

Reviewer: zink Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 09:11 am Title: CHAPTER THIRTY: Too Much To Life

This story is my favorite on this site.

Reviewer: Lingnat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 09:36 am Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: And The Odds Are...

I read it again ! absolutely my favorite ....
hope you can start a story Again !
I really appreciate the story ...

Reviewer: Lingnat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 09:30 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?

You are an amazing writer !!!
I really hope youcan come back and write more for us

Reviewer: Lingnat Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2018 02:16 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?

The story is so gooooood! This could be one of my favorite fanfictions ! I like it ! keep writting some amazing stories .

Reviewer: mikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2015 05:05 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?

This fucking story broke my sensitive baby heart into pieces.

 

Fix this shit now and get Michael to drop the bitch also known as Broke and be with my baby Freddie again. Idgaf how and why I'm being such a bitch. I want these two together otherwise you'll know what is going to make me cry for months. Yas, I'm that sensitive.

Reviewer: fuoff Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2014 04:20 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?

I loved your story so much <3 The ending is very sad, but the story is absolutely magnificent :D

Reviewer: LoveyoumoreMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 09:36 pm Title: CHAPTER THIRTEEN: Caught In A Landslide

Oh my god !!! What has become ,, !

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Date: Jun 26, 2013 01:12 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: The Magic Of The Red High Heels

lol Michael recited some quotes from the Bible to the stripper ? oh that's the funny one XD

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2013 10:08 pm Title: CHAPTER THIRTY: Too Much To Life

....I have no words. The conflict within this young man who will never admit to who he is for the sake of appearance is sucha  reality that this ending hurts!! But well done, my friend. Part of me thinks this just might have been how it had to end anyway.

Reviewer: kjfinn Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2012 09:07 am Title: CHAPTER THIRTY: Too Much To Life

That was sad movie but happy movie ending good. That was really nice.

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2012 11:11 am Title: CHAPTER THIRTY: Too Much To Life

This chapter was like a movie! I saw everything happening in front of me. It was so real! <3

This is a beautiful end. I'm so glad Michael is healthy and Brooke is happy. I feel sorry for Freddie though... he lost the love of his life and will probably die soon.... (He died in 1991, right?) 

I really loved reading this story! <3

Oh, and now I remember: I've read this somewhere before. On fanfiction.com, back in 2010. You had an account there too, right? There were only six chapters on that site. 

This was/IS a beautiful story! <3



Author's Response:

Thanks :P Yeah, I started writing this at the end of 2009 and I wrote it in parts during these three years or so... That's why I wanted to bring to it end, because I feared I'd never be able to finish it and to be honest it was difficult to keep it mind what was the original point of the story. I'm glad that you found the end happy in a way and yes, Freddie's destiny wasn't so nice... and Michael got it too easy, maybe. But well, that's life, isn't it?

But really: I wish I could rewrite this one day so that I could make some minor changes to the story and maybe make it a little bit more beliavable in a way. Right now, I don't know how. But let's see what's going to happen! In the meanwhile, however, I'll either start writing something totally different or try to finish that Michael/Prince story I've been writing.

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2012 10:10 am Title: CHAPTER THIRTY: Too Much To Life

I'm so sad this is the end. It was one of my favorite story ever. My two idols Michael Jackson and Freddie Mercury reunited in a beautiful story, I couldn't be happier.

To be honest, I was wishing Michael and Freddie would end up together. That seeing Freddie, Michael would realise that he still loves him.

The scene when Freddie revealed his HIV to Michael was so beautiful. The love, the tenderness and the caring they still both felt for each other was so beautiful. You realised how much they loved each other and  that they're still and they'll even always will. I almost cried at this scene...

Thank you for this amazing and beautiful story. I hope there will be a sequel and I'm waiting for your next stories.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's sad and I'm grateful you've given me such great feedback during the process :) It's difficult to explain how important it is. It kind of makes me believe someone is actually reading these stories, that I'm not just writing it for the sake of writing it but for someone else.

I kinda hoped too that I'd find a way to get them together. When I started writing this, I knew the ending would be a sad one but I thought they'd keep seeing each other 'til Freddie's death. Now I changed it and I'm not completely happy with it, but well - I haven't been writing that much and to be honest, I couldn't have done it any other way at the moment. 

I thank you one more time and hope that I'll hear from you in the future!

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2012 04:23 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE: The Stag Night

Stupid Andy, spoiling Michael's night! But at least Michael knows he should see the doctor. (Plz Mikey, make sure you're healthy!) 

It's so funny how Michael's brothers took him out for a 'great' night. ;) 

I can imagine Freddie would be very upset about the wedding. And I find it so unfair too for Brooke... if she finds out she'll be even more hurt than Freddie. 

I wonder how the wedding day will be, and if Michael is gonna say "I do," who knows...

Really a great chapter again! I'll add this story to my favourites! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you :) Yeah, his brother's idea of a "great night" was something else... Kjeh.

Wedding will be in the next chapter. And unfortunately - so it seems - it's gonna be the final one. I'll start writing a new story and even thought to this day I thought I would write more chapters to this, I came to realize it wouldn't really bring anything new or interesting to the story. Maybe some day in the future I'll rewrite this or write or sequel or something.

See you! Love your stories!

Reviewer: kjfinn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2012 09:50 pm Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE: The Stag Night

The stuff that happens to him!!! Damn that Andy! Starting trouble every chance he gets. Whats going on with Freddie? What about Brooke she has to find out eventually, I bet she will be so heartbroken.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - some questions will be answered in the next chapter. Some won't be answered, unfortunately :/

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