Date: Feb 11, 2016 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: There Was Never A Bond...Only Control
This story is heading in a good direction.I wish you started writing the section where Judith comes out of jail and lives life peacefull.i imagined that she went to Africa and startes helping the poor and needy.what if she meets michael and her daughter their cause michael visites africa most times.pleaaaaaase continue to write
Date: Oct 30, 2015 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1: There Was Never A Bond...Only Control
I would have been if you went forward to the part where she comes out of jail and lives her life and suddenly met a girl near a ice cream truck e.g her real daughter and a renion between all of them.
Date: Jan 08, 2015 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 7: His First Time
rofl!! This chapter was hilarious. Michael - Am I high from smelling it!? LMAO for some reason I knew Lisa would be ok with it. and OMG of all times for Judith to go into labor!! When Michael's comin' down off of that Trainwreck lol!!!
Date: Jan 06, 2015 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 6: My Career, My Dignity, My Life
I'm so surprised this story doesn't have more reviews! You're a really good writer compared to some of the other stuff you find on here. I love it I can't wait to see where this goes and how it develops.
I really should read the other story that goes with this. LOL
Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking the time out to review, it means a lot. Lol and yeah, it makes a LOT more sense when you read the other story.
Date: Jan 02, 2015 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 4: It's My Priority to Protect Her
This is the first story I've read where Lisa is actually a bearable character lol. Most people including myself make her out to be so evil.
I'm excited for Michael that he's happy he's going to be a dad...
Yeah, I've noticed that too. I never really thought of her as a horrible person though.Thank you for your reviews 😊😊 it means a lot
Date: Dec 30, 2014 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 3 There Weren't Enough Apologies
Wtf. Michael had some serious issues back then! I wouldn't have stayed around for all of that!! continue soon!! I'm hooked!
Thanks so much! I'm happy you're enjoying. I'll be updating soon, stay tuned :)
Date: Dec 27, 2014 11:43 am Title: Chapter 2: She Was Definitely The Lady in my Life
I love it so far! It's sad though... Poor Judith.. spending Christmas alone after giving birth to her baby to never see him or her again. I can't imagine it.
Thanks for the review :) And yes, I did realize that this is one of my more emotional stories. But it will lighten up over time
Date: Dec 24, 2014 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: There Was Never A Bond...Only Control
Great start keep on writing girl
Thank you for the feedback :) And will do!