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Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2015 04:16 am Title: Not his day

I hope they find Michael 



Author's Response:

let's see

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:41 pm Title: Not his day

I don't know how Chris can outsmart them again... What is he going to do to them!?!



Author's Response:

you'll see soon working on the next chapter soon

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:38 pm Title: Ooops

Uh oh!! This could mean terrible things for Juliet.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2015 03:32 am Title: Ooops

Thank goodness Chris doesn't found out about Michael and Juliet 

Can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

be up in a few hours

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 04:27 am Title: Strawberry Bounce

They better clean up fast before Chris gets home 

I see trouble 



Author's Response:

Let's see shall we

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 04:00 am Title: I just want you to know I love you

Loved it lol 

Hopefully Chris won't get home anytime soon 



Author's Response:

glad you did and I know right

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2015 09:07 pm Title: I just want you to know I love you

LMAO at Michael getting all that penis into those too tight boxers >.< 

This chapter was very good! I think it was the best written chapter so far! I get nervous about writing sex scenes too and I thought it was good. 



Author's Response:

hahaha Just had to add that in 

me too I am proud of this chapter, thank god I am not the only one 

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2015 09:15 am Title: Dead or Alive?

Juliet better get Michael out of there soon!!!! Thank God Paris is safe, though!

I saw your profile! You are so beautiful!



Author's Response:

I know he to be resuced quick I know thank god 

Awww Thank you I seen your too You beautiful too 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2015 02:33 am Title: Dead or Alive?

Can't she kill Chris?  

Poor Michael just want safe him and bring him back home 



Author's Response:

That question is goona be brought up in the next chapter 

I know me too 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2015 03:50 am Title: 1 saved!

Michael is fighter he's strong he'll live?  Right?  

Glad Paris ok  



Author's Response:

Well will see later 

me too 

Reviewer: MJwife18 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2015 10:34 pm Title: 1 saved!

awh I will and im glad Paris came home! and PLEASE DONT LET MICHAEL DIE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU 



Author's Response:

thank you, me too, we will seee 

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2015 08:15 pm Title: 1 saved!

Nooo!!!!! Michael can't be dead! omg I can't believe Chris hit him with his van! I hope Chris gets what's coming to him!



Author's Response:

I know right me too let hopes he not dead 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 05:55 am Title: Anything for Freedom

That Dean is creepy 

So hope Chris won't find Michael 

Please continue soon 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2014 03:39 am Title: You like everyone else

I thought she was really different and tried to help him 

I hope Paris is all right poor thing 

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2014 07:13 pm Title: You like everyone else

Where is Chris taking Paris!? Juliet needs to trust Michael and just go with him!

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