Date: Mar 06, 2016 02:41 pm Title: Out In The Open
Sad. NOBODY can be trusted. The captain of the police had been bought by Stenny. *smh* What a tangled web we weave. And I'm all caught up!!! I'm enjoying the story, girl!
Author's Response:
You'll come to see that there are so many skeletons in closets it's not even funny. No one is immune and the past comes to bite everyone in the ass!! Did I tell you how happy I am that you caught up? I'm not only honored but happy!! Love ya!! <333
Date: Mar 06, 2016 02:22 pm Title: Lose Lose
I think that while Marley was so angry with Michael for withholding information, she should have been considering all of the "secrets" that she was keeping from him! Wonder if he will react as strongly when she finally tells him. Petty Peter's an a$$. I hope that fool Kenny doesn't hurt Teddy. :(
Date: Mar 06, 2016 10:36 am Title: Unmasked
Another trip into the psyche of a deranged serial killer... my blood is boiling. His end should be out of a best seller for the cruelest torture and slowest death .
Date: Mar 06, 2016 10:25 am Title: Assurances, All On The Table
It was as it should be. The simplicity of the announcement to Baylee was perfect for a 5 year old no matter how advanced.
Date: Mar 06, 2016 07:01 am Title: Watching Eyes...Sinister Ties (Deux)
As hurt as I am for what happened to Kenny since he was just a child, he is DERANGED! Ria should've told Michael. Easy to say than do, I guess. And Baylee might belong to that sicko. *sigh* Next ...
Date: Mar 06, 2016 06:46 am Title: When A Stranger Calls
I don't even know what to say? He's going to make a play for Baylee?? BAYLEE might be "Kenny's" because he drugged and raped her mother? I can't ....
Date: Mar 06, 2016 06:35 am Title: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)
This is an all new low. What the HELL did he do to her after he knocked her out? Will she be blackmailed? The nerve of this guy, and his crooked dead daddy, to buy and sell people like furniture. If I loathed him before, it's ten times worse now. I wouldn't spit on him if his poop chute was on fire!
Date: Mar 06, 2016 03:39 am Title: Unintentional Lies
Uhhh-ohhh... he should've told her ... a long time ago.
Date: Mar 06, 2016 03:29 am Title: Soft Then Vile
A dirty b@stard. Well, "two" dirty b@stards -except one is now a dirty old "dead" b@stard.
Date: Mar 06, 2016 03:16 am Title: Boxed In
Hmmm ... let me read one more chapter before I get off of work. Officer Stenny has a whole lot of attitude for someone who was only promised a lunch date. *smh* His behavior is too OTT and disproportionate to the amount of time they've known each other/relationship depth. He has abusive/abuser tendencies. He's dynamite ready to blow!
Date: Mar 06, 2016 02:59 am Title: Finally Found Out
Kenny was "abused" as a child? It makes me feel a little sympat-ta-tion for him, but not forgiveness for what he's done and constantly conspiring to do. He chose to allow his circumstances turn him into a vile person. And Rhoda told him on purpose. She knows what Stenny is capable of and telling him Ria's whereabouts was a final act of revenge. Look at me going all Sherlock Holmes! Lol.
Date: Mar 06, 2016 02:29 am Title: Divinity In Motion
I did enjoy the "coupling" between Michael and Marley. I saw reference to the story title in this chapter and wondered "what will "Stenny" do next? How grotesque is he going to be? I think it's too soon for Baylee. Even though all three are a unit, that child has known too much grief and loss to be subjected to a menagerie of Daddy's girlfriends being paraded in and out of her life. "Let it simmer" and then see what happens. If they are meant to be, they have time to let Baylee in on the secret. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2016 07:56 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
Omg! That ending though...loved it!
Author's Response:
Awe thank you. I'm glad you liked it. It's about to get crazy again!!<333
Date: Mar 05, 2016 03:34 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
The Heavens opened up and smiled! The accidentally on purpose gold diggers insurance policy baby is no more. But she's coming back?? I shiver at the thought of "how". She's pretty sour right now! Lol!!!
Date: Mar 05, 2016 03:29 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Marley's so cute "trying" to sing! Lol! And Michael's such a little boy scaring girls and throwing food. Bet he was the type of bad a$$ who used to feel the girls bootys and RUN! LMFBO! He's SO sexy and romantic all grown up though! To answer one of your questions, yes. She has a right to know especially since she's all caught up in it now. If he does not tell her, he will be placing her in the greategreatest amount of danger IMHO.