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Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2014 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

UUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! TATUM HAS TO GO DOWN!! Seems Like Every Story I've Read Lately Has Her Flat Ass In It! Bitch Ain't A Bit More Pregnant Than I Am! Michael, Man The Hell Up & Send That Trash To The Land Field!! Y'all Got My Girl Andi Fucked Up, LoL!

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Reviewer: MissMichelleJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2014 04:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Hello :) 
I gotta say that this has to be one of my fav fictions of all times :D You truly are one gifted writer and I love that Andi has a look of Zendaya, cause I love her and I can't stop shipping Mike and Z. I am really excited about how this story is going to continue. I may not review a lot but you can count on me, I am a very loyal reader. 
With LOVE, 

M :) 



Author's Response:

now you have me blushing and cheesing hard..but i truly appreciate the fact that you're reading this story. it doesn't matter if you don't review a lot, it matters if you enjoy it :) but anyways, thanks so much for the kindness. 

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2014 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha yea

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Date: Oct 27, 2014 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

O.O who is it?...



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now that you speak of it..the song comes in mind..

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2014 11:01 am Title: Chapter 4

This is going to be fun. Cat fight XD



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XD of course

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2014 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 4

Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm glad she took matter into her own hands and kissed him!



Author's Response:

right! michael was acting like a real baby..:P

Reviewer: Naughty4michael Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

Aww they kissed 



Author's Response:

I know..isn't it just adorable?

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good, Can't Wait!!

Author's Response:

:) chapter 2 will be coming in just a little bit.

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

When's The Second Chapter Going To Be Up, LoL?! I'm Loving This!

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i'm actually typing it right now, so just sit back and relax :)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is gonna be good; I can feel it. Great first chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks! i'm glad that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: SarahJones1814 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Really Great :) keep it up girl



Author's Response:

thanks for the encouragement! i'm glad that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

i realy enjoy it



Author's Response:

Glad you did :)

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Ohh! I like this!



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:) glad you like it. 

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Dear, I would love your story, but for the fact that around 1982-1983 Steve Jobs hadn't even invented the Mac Book, let alone the iPhone....Keep the realities of the time if you want to write about the '80s.



Author's Response:

well, this is the 1980s with the modernities we have, and i clearly forgot to state that. so for that, i truly apologize for not stating that it is the 1980's with the modernities we have..but thanks for the note :)

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