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Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 3. Who Is She?

Interesting start. I love it when the OG isn't swooning at Michael's feet.



Author's Response:

Thank you. And very true. Michael needs a girl who ain't playing and ain't gonna be putty in his damn hands. I mean, the brotha is fine and all of that but he needs to chase for a change.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2015 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1. A New Life

Damn - I've never heard anyone say LA traffic is better than anyplace else. Shoot it topped worst city for traffic in the US this year.

I'm curious as to how she came into so much money as to afford that house. Damn that room would be sweet for an adult, let alone a teen!



Author's Response:

Lol, I wouldn't know cause I'm used to my home state traffic, which is Louisiana and Atlanta traffic when I visit family. I prefer theirs. Louisiana over anything though.

Her mom, well later on throughout the story you'll know what kind of job her mom is working at. But that's what a good job will get you that pays you better. 

Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2015 06:38 am Title: Chapter 13. Got It Bad

I loved this chapter! Please continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2015 07:03 am Title: Chapter 13. Got It Bad

Lol it's only been a day really and these two are falling all over each other. Why Fatima still trying to front though. Her feelings are not even on the DL anymore. She already told Michael she's feeling him. I guess we get to see them interact when he gets to the arcade. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

Girl, you see that don't you?? And Fatima alqays gone front stunt whatever else you wanna add in. Ans I'm sure she knows that by now too. When Mike gets to the arcade, no telling what might happen between them

 

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2015 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 12. The Three Muskaroaches/New Follower

I really like this story and I love the way its going. Please keep writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! :)

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2015 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 12. The Three Muskaroaches/New Follower

First of all "funky ass pepper poon"?!?!? I've picked out my casket!! Lmaooooo Juicy Curl Bae is doing the most. 

The Three Muskaroaches. My plot is also picked out. Lmao. 

Shanelle's a funky ass pepper poon. "My mama said to tell you to mind Ya mothafuckin business bitch!" *Kevin Hart voice. 

Michael did go in and I'm glad he did and wasn't carering to her ass. 

He got the follow. You go Juicy Curl Bae!! 

More soon <333



Author's Response:

Lol, girl I just be writing stuff like that in this story to make it funny. Tbh, the word 'poon' is a word I use to call the women's lower front region. Now, The Three Muskaroaches came from somewhere idk. It just came to me. Majority of the stuff in this story that is crazy is what I say in real life or would say. I say crazy shit like that.

Shanelle, she just a jealous ass, can't get no life bitch. Always worrying out Michael. Like its clear he don't want you anymore. Move along skeezer. She needed to be told off on anyway and put in hher place. 

And yes, Fatima finally followed his ass. She in for it now.

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2015 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 11. Tryin' To Break Ya Down...Butchu Playin'/Starting Off As Friends

I wonder if her ex was abusive or got her pregnant or something it made clear why she left her old place 

and that Shanelle she gonna hate her even more there gonna be a cat fight between her and fatima I can see it 

update soon



Author's Response:

Well she left because her mom got a better job offer in Cali but Ace is probably bad news though. Heat have said some hurtful thing and now it's got Fatima being all insecure and stuff. 

And Shanelle ass better just keep her cool. Or like you said, a cat fight is gonna start soon. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2015 04:53 am Title: Chapter 11. Tryin' To Break Ya Down...Butchu Playin'/Starting Off As Friends

Lmaooooo. You stay cracking on Applehead Bae!! "Juicy Curls" is still my favorite one. Lmao. 

Shanelle is salty and let her remain that way and deal. If she wasn't hoe-in round she would still have Michael. If she does try something I now the BK gonna come out of Tima real quick.

Hassan sit your little peanut head ass down. You can't run your game on this one. BLOCKEDT!!

Well al least she admitted she's frontin. As if it was obvious. Her front was more see through than a ziplock bag son!! Lol. Friends it is but it will be more soon. I bet Ace used to berate her and make her feel bad cause he was a jealous ass. She's damn beautiful and I know Michael will not only show her how much he'll make her see it in herself. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

Lol, girl ikr. Yoh nike cyrls be a lil juicy. And Shanelle better stay in her lane. Aint nobidy got time for her ass. She wants Michael but the feelings aint the same. 

Hassan....for you to do him like that tho but hey! Peanut headed ass is what he do have. Kml!!!!

And fi ally Fatima, she finally amitted about fronting. She was fronting extremely hard but it was still obvious that her deelings were mutual for Mike tho. She just couldnt hide any longer. Cat is outta the bag now. And as for her ex Ace, whatevet was said or he did to make her feel the way she does, he gone get his soon. 

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2015 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 11. Tryin' To Break Ya Down...Butchu Playin'/Starting Off As Friends

Omg, I choked on my Pringles, girl. When you said "big, pina colada head ass" I died.

Author's Response:

Lmao, I call my boyfriend that when he gets on my nerves. And Mike is annoying so why not use for him, huh? But please don't kill yourself with them Pringles girl.

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2015 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 10. Partners With The Annoyance

That it girl make him do the Chasing that why she acting how she is with him I exicted to see how this partners thing is gonna turn out 

If I was her I ask Michael he will tell the truth Hassan won't 



Author's Response:

Lol, yess you gotta make em chase. And now that they are parterns, Mike gone try to use that as his advantage.

Let's just hope she asks him and not Hassan. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2015 07:13 am Title: Chapter 10. Partners With The Annoyance

"Juicy curl player..." I died!!! Lmaooooo. 

I feel like Fatima was hurt in her last relationship maybe but she heard Hasssan ain't shit so she needs to stay away from him. She needs to ask Michael what went down. She also need to quit playin and give him a chance. Them being partners will be good though. They'll get to know each other better. I bet Michael isn't even a player like she thinks he is. 

More soon! I miss this story! <333



Author's Response:

Lol, Fatima be coming up with some crazy funny nanes for Mike, i swear. I was lmao as i wrote that. 

And....maybe she waa hurt in her past relationship we'll just have to see and find out. As for Hassan, looks can be very decieving. Al she better do is watch her back. And yes she needs to ask Michael what went down but they need to get to know each other better before sharing personal things as such. Btw, we all know how she is when it comes down to mike there are know chances...or maybe. But she does need to simmer down some and give a nigga a lil chance but hey, thats Fatima. And, maybe he isn't or he could be still but trying t find that roght one who can tame him.

 

Reviewer: lovemichael4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 10. Partners With The Annoyance

Oooohhh, Michael is going hard for this girl bruh! I just can't wait to see what happens later on!



Author's Response:

Yess, mike wants Fatima bad but she playing. She knows deep down that she likes him....at least a little bit. 

And a lot is gonna happen. Just contiue to read. 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2015 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1. A New Life

Girl, I like it so far! Can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Im glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 9. The Clique

Ain't no way in hell Hassan going to be truthful if Tima asked him about his beef with Michael. She's better off leaving it alone and if she wants the truth speak to Michael. 

Michael is a slick one for real. But so cute. The thrill f the chase Huh? I see you boy. The day Fatima finally folds and gives I to him will be too much. Lol

I bet Hassan tried it with Michael's little sis. People know he's foul that's why everyone was staring at him and Tima walking together. 

More soon. <333



Author's Response:

Lol, you and everyone else. I think she should ask Michael herself. But Fatima is gonna do what she gonna do. 

And yes Mike is slick as fuck. He wants Fatima So bad even after not knowing her at all. He's gonna be chasing that girl til the day he get her. 

And we don't know what sparked up the beef between Michael and Hassan. Btw, Mike doesn't have a lil sis. But it could have been a friend that was or someone else he was close to. 

And the people who were staring, they knew what was up, Tima was just left guessing.

Reviewer: mjsfantasy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 05:44 am Title: Chapter 9. The Clique

Bruh..Michael pulled a smooth move tho, like dafuq? Also, I'm starting not to trust Hassan now that that's been revealed to Fatima, but I'm gonna just sit, sip some tea, and see what happens :) 



Author's Response:

Yasss, Mike know he smooth, lol. From the sound of him, I'm pretty sure no one trusts Hassan. 

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