Date: Oct 17, 2015 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 21
Wtf i cant believe no one did anything for him on his bday! That was soo adorable and fucking nice what Hazel did for him! Wow you really made him human i feel like a lot of people, fans etc dont realize is that hes not a god hes really not much different from us, he has insecurities, bad days, makes stupid mistakes, pride gets in the way, he breaks down every once in a while and to quote him he bleeds like anyone else meaning he gets hurt too. We just dont see that because him and other celebs put on a really good front in front of the cameras and the world. I like that you made him human, he wasnt completely egostistic despite his immense talent. He still got scared and anxious over how his work might be perceived, even though he knew it was flawless. So thank you for really showinh Michael and not the king of pop.
Author's Response:
Awwww your welcome!!!! That's actually one of the joys I'm having with writing this story :) I really just wanna portray him or at least try to portray him as a normal everyday guy which can sometimes be a bit difficult since I never met him lol I just kinda have to predict with how I want him to act or how I think he might've acted in certain situations. I agree, because Michael was such a HUGE worldwide superstar (still is lol) I can see how it's hard for some people to view as simply human at the end of the day and tend to put him on a high pedestal.They tend to see Michael Jackson, the king of pop instead of just Michael, the human being....man that's gotta be rough having to deal with that all the time :/ Glad that you're enjoying this!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2015 11:55 am Title: Chapter 23
greaat chapter
Author's Response:
Thank yooou :)
Date: Oct 17, 2015 03:01 am Title: You're A Jerk, I know.....
Oh for the next chapter, maybe talk about the making love thing. Like, maybe for a couple of chapters, keep it a little happy you know? And then bring in some intense drama or suspense, so the reader's like "oooooooooooh". Just a few suggestions hahaah :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the advice!!! <333 I was startin to feel a lil bit of writers block come on haha that's the absolute worst!
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2015 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 22
GREAT CHAPTER.
Author's Response:
Aw thank you!! <3
Date: Oct 16, 2015 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh yay!!!!!! She said it!!! The L word. Holy crap!!! He's gotta say yes, like, if he doesn't, wow, that'd just hurt. And dude, that karen person, she's been known to put on waaaaay too much makeup on MJ than what was necessary. She's a little bitch. Ugh.
Author's Response:
It's about dang time Haze finally said the L word! Haha I think she was just a bit hesitant and too scared to say it in the past :) And ikr?! Karen would sometimes lay the makeup on just a lil too thick on mj. I'm sure he didn't need to wear ALL of that wit his sexy self lol I hope he says yes too!! I gotta really think about how I'm gonna write this next chap now...;)
Date: Oct 16, 2015 01:15 am Title: Chapter 22
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's just so sad!!! I remember when I saw that vid from the Grammy's, and he looked so disappointed but up till now I never really figured that he might have cried about that until I read this now, and now I'm like "they made my baby cry, how dare you!!!" Bad's the best, man, they all knew it, but just, ugh. People are stupid.
Author's Response:
Ikr!! If I were in his shoes, I would've slapped the MESS outta whoever was in charge of the Grammy awards that night. I mean it somebody woulda got they behind FIRED that night lol I mean, what they did to him was so wrong and uncalled for. I remember reading somewhere that apparently afterwards he went back to his hotel and cried his eyes out :( Man that just breaks my heart! I agree, 'Bad' is a FLAWLESS album!!! Ain't nothing wrong with it and they fact they didn't acknowledge it's greatness...ugh makes me so mad!
Date: Oct 15, 2015 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 22
Robbed is an understatement!!! They should have gone to jail for that crime, Michael at least deserved album of the year! They tried it so bad with not giving him an award! I feel like they did that on purpose.
Author's Response:
You're not the only one! I honestly feel like they did that on purpose too...shady as hell. I guess they didn't like the fact he had won all those Grammys a few years earlier for 'Thriller' I feel like they really tried to make an example out of him...He deserved to win that yr smh
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2015 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 22
I agree wth you! Michael did get robbed at the Grammys that year for Bad
Author's Response:
Ikr?! 'Bad' was such an amazing album and the fact that it didn't win anything really upsets me :( The Grammys did him so wrong that year smh
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 21
Such a cute chapter!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
That was a nice surprise Hazel had for Michael. It's not so great to spend your birthday alone.
Date: Sep 20, 2015 12:26 am Title: Chapter 20
I bet putting together an album is hard! Songwriting is fun but the trying to decide which ones should be put on there and which should be left out is not easy. 29 is NOT old. Neither is 57 so there. He just thinks of everything & anything to get Hazel to come with him. He just HAS to take advantage of her weak spot to get what he wants and pf course the hypnotizing smoldering eye fucking gaze lets be real who can say no to that?! I read this quote from
the artist who did all those portraits of michael that were in Neverland, the ones of him holding a sword and he said mikes eyes were the most mesmerizing beautiful eyes you could see for miles. I talked to this sound engineer on twitter who helped with thw history album and he said michael used to BLAST they dont care about us, i mean at FULL VOLUME so the walls would shake and wud dance & beatbox to 2 BAd as well. Needless to say Hazel is one lucky girl to have been able to watch that! Loving this story!! Cant wait to see what will happen on tour!
Author's Response:
Ikr! I'd love to work in the music business one day but the song choosing for the album is prob gruelling as hell! It sounds like it'd be so much fun but also stressful! And 29 definitely isn't old at all!!! He's only a couple yrs older than Haze. Yep! Michael knows her weak spots and how to get her to do what he wants which can be a good and bad thing lol That's so cool about the artist who did the portraits of him! His eyes were so memorizing and intense! It's like he'd stare right into your soul in pictures. I can't think of any other celebs who have powerful eyes like that except maybe Janet, Prince, and 2Pac. All of them got beautiful brown eyes :) I'm actually not surprised that he would blast his songs lol it's prob so cool to be able to hear the bass that strong! It's gonna be fun to start writing about life on tour and how Hazel copes with it. A lot of interesting things are gonna occur...Glad you're loving this story!!! (Gives huge hug) :D
Date: Sep 19, 2015 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 19
HOW CUD HE POSSIBLY THINK HE DID A BAD JOB??!! HAS HE NOT WATCHED VIDS OF HIM ON STAGE??!! He KNOWS what hes doing😜 good thing Haze love the nickname told him just that 😊. Love that he cudnt look anywhere else during the shoot and those photos are adorable! Were they actually taken spontaneously like that with tatiana? Or were they for promoting the short film? It wasnt too hard to imagine hazel in her place :) then he gives her an orgasm inducing kiss to end this perfect day! So i take it theyre going public with their relationship? I mean i dont think that director will keep his mouth shut.. This short film is severely underrated its amazing and so on point with everything he went thru
Author's Response:
Rofl I think he prob thought he did bad cuz he was so eager to finally get a taste of Haze (giggles) As for the photo shoot, I actually have no idea if him and Tatiana did it spontaneously but those pics of them are soooo cute! Haze and Mike's relationship isn't officially public just yet but hopefully it'll get out! I agree, 'Leave Me Alone' really is underrated as a song and short film! That's one of my faves :)
Date: Sep 19, 2015 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 18
Holy FUCK that was HOT! Lovvved the letter he really shouldve said all that in person but whatever. He is soooo freaking cute when hes embarassed and nervous XD annnd its about time he gave her the credit for man in the mirror damn. That was really cool and compassionate that he gave her all the credit and didnt take any for his own selfish reasons. She just wrote a grammy award winning song!! Wow thats really cool and commendable that he doesnt want to have sex until they feel the same way about each other still ughhhh. I KNEw HED BE EXCELLENT at ORAL!! It was probably all that lip biting 😎😊😜. She is really lucky she snagged him!! Dancers are supposedly AMAZING in bed as they realllly know how to work those hips 😉. That has to be the best bday prez ever. I knew that sexual devian that comes out on stage wasnt just a performance😎 lovving this!!
Author's Response:
I agree with u girl! Michael really should've told Haze how he truly felt like how he did in the letter. He poured his heart out in that thing lol. Haze was mad determined to get a lil somethin somethin for her birthday! It was actually pretty interesting to write this chap because of how Michael and Haze were acting towards each other and the tension of them finally giving in somewhat lol. It's sweet that he isn't ready to give himself fully to her yet until she feels the same way (until she falls for him too) His character really shows when he gave her all the credit for 'Man In The Mirror' and it shocked haze cuz she had thought he would at least taken some credit too. I've heard that dancers are incredible in bed too! I gotta find me a dancer rofl
Date: Sep 18, 2015 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 20
Naww that's so cute, and MJ's so different now, he's not the whiny bitchy 12 year old anymore!! Amen to that
Author's Response:
Awww ikr?! Haze is definitely changing him for the better now! Let's please hope that continues lol ;)
Date: Aug 26, 2015 02:29 am Title: Chapter 19
Nawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's just too cute <3