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Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:18 am Title: Chapter 27- Backtracking .....

This chapter was a little sad, reading that Michael and Semaj have been separated at the time and seeing Michael slowly go back to his old ways. Until Semaj calls Michael and gets him to stop. I like how Simone and Semaj patch things up about what's going on between them. This was a sad, but good chapter.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:13 am Title: Chapter 26- The Calhoun Laws

I love how Semaj is changing Michael. How he's not getting into as much trouble as he was before. The fight between Semaj and her parents have me on edge. I'm very eager to see what happens next!

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:10 am Title: Chapter 25- Real Gun, Water Gun, Same Thing

Officer Willow worries me, but I've said this before in a previous review... you're very good at telling different point of views. It tells exactly what's going on at the point in time from both Michael and Semaj. Nice work.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:06 am Title: Chapter 24- Momma's Havin A Baby, Semaj Is Going Crazy...

A lot happened in this chapter that kept me on edge. Semaj's fight with her parents, the fight with Lonnie and Michael telling Semaj that he loved her while she was sleeping. This was absolutely great!

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:03 am Title: Chapter 23- Saved by the Scream

Revealing that Semaj's parents are coming back is a big shock and the fact that Michael works for Semaj's dad is an even bigger shock. I love this chapter!

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:58 am Title: Chapter 22- Mirror Mirror... Who's the Baddest of Them All?

Very good, I liked how Michael showed his caring side by going to get Semaj a card for feeling as if he moved too fast.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:55 am Title: Chapter 21- The Magic Touch Makes Me Spin

So glad they finally became official in this chapter! Great work.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:52 am Title: Chapter 20- Troll Doll Look-A-Like

When Semaj got in the car with Aaron and Tucker I got a little worried as to where they were actually taking her. I was happy that Michael didn't get jail time and Michael's question for Semaj at the end! Great job!!!

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:49 am Title: Chapter 19- Can't Turn A Dog Into A Husband

The end of the chapter made me smile at the thought of bad boy Michael helping Semaj take her hair down. This chapter was great.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:43 am Title: Chapter 18- I Wanna Know...

You've not written one bad chapter yet! Great job.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:40 am Title: Chapter 17- She's Different, This Is Different, Different Is Good

I knew I had a bad feeling about Tucker. This was a very good chapter. Michael seems to take care of Simone which is very sweet. Very good.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:33 am Title: Chapter 16- I Take Full Responsibility

This was a really great chapter, it showed how Michael showed sympathy by offering to watch Simone. Tasha kind of worries me by all of the questions she asks. You're also very good at telling the story in different point of views.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:28 am Title: Chapter 15- The Influence You Have

I loved that Simone finally took up for herself and how Janet helped her. This chapter was very good.

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:26 am Title: Chapter 13- ABC Easy As 123

I love how Michael continues to do nice things for Semaj, but I have a bad feeling about Tucker. This is such a great story so far!

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Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:22 am Title: Chapter 12- A Little Holiday

Michael actually brings Semaj to his house for Christmas, wow! This great! You're really great at keeping the reader interested.

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