Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 13- ABC Easy As 123
"Michael places his hands on either side of Semaj's hips on the counters trapping her in but she wasn't going to move anyway. She was going to stand there and listen to whatever he had to say.
"Maybe I'm thirteen chapters too late, shit, maybe im thirteen chapters too early but I gotta be honest witchu since the first night i met you it was somethin that I couldn't deny 'bout you. I wanted you. In more ways than one and it's been two an a half years since i felt that way 'bout any female. 'bout anybody. I wanna let you in. I wanna be honest. I wanna be good. I wanna change. I wanna be better. But I think maybe it ain't for me. Maybe I can't change. Maybe I'm scared." His eyes connect with Semaj and she finally speaks.
"I don't care if you're thirteen chapters too early or late." Semaj says shrugging as she tries to keep in contact with his eyes. "Are you scared Michael?"
It's a few minutes before Michael answers. He just stares at her contemplating whether or not he wants to be honest. He isn't sure if he wants to let someone in again. He doesn't know if he's moving too fast for his shattered heart that was still in pieces or if he was moving too slow. He didn't know but the brown eyes he looked at were so soft and he was melting like a popsicle on a hot day. He couldn't help it.
He nods his head slowly and licks his lips. "Terrified." "
PHENOMENAL .. omg this is so good! You did a great job capturing feeling and internal struggles. Great chapter. My favorite so far.
Awww this is greatly appreciated Susie! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far and I hope you continue to read and enjoy what I have written!
Date: Oct 25, 2016 09:16 am Title: Chapter 57- Gangsta Lovin'
I'm so glad that you didn't let Semaj die. That would be so sad and break my heart :'(.
When I found out 'Gangsta Lovin', I kept reading it non stop till the end. And I love both Michael and Semaj characters you created. You've done a really great job! I like that Semaj is a girly, gentle girl with classic, who knows how to apologize when she did something wrong. I really really don't like the girl character who is so stubborn and has to much pride to say sorry even though she knows she is wrong. And Michael, he is a great guy to me, who is such a normal young man that made mistakes because of unfortunately circumstances and tried to get his life back. A bad boy but not bad at all (if you know what I mean ;)) .
Thank you very much for sharing with us this amazing story of yours. It's really great and well written. You're such a talented author :).
Aww thanks so much! You're amazing for this review. I hope you're reading the sequel and enjoying that one too!