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Date: Apr 11, 2017 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 39- Feel that Heat.... II

Brandy ... omg. You did an amazing job on this chapter! Not that I expected anything less but wow. This chapter was soooo sweet and so fitting just for Michael and Semaj. Michael is so sweet with her. Omg. The feels, man. This was really an awesome chapter! Bravo!

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Date: Apr 11, 2017 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 38- Feel that Heat....

YEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I feel bad Michael gotta get it in with a sling on though but still YEEEEESSSSS 😂😂😂

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Date: Apr 11, 2017 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You

Ooooooh snap ok so first of all James is a dirty dog. Like how can you want to hurt the guy your daughter loves and risk seeing her heart broken?! And Tucker? Well he's gotten on my nerves since he was first introduced in the story. I respect Aaronfor wanting to warn Michael. Aaron is Tuckers brother, right? Just want to make sure I'm keeping up. Ugh I love this story so much I can't believe it took me so long to read it. I'm gonna be so sad when it's over lol. 

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Date: Apr 10, 2017 10:27 am Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend

"Y'all niggas ain't good for shit, y'all ain't hear her ass walk in? Damn Lenny you sittin right there can't yo ass see out that damn gap?" Michael gestures toward the curtain. He hadn't even been paying attention to notice her come in or to see her converses walking across the floor. "And why the fuck you creepin?" Michael asks looking her up and down.

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

 

 

anyways sey def has reasonable suspicion about James' newfound behavior. Can't believe she's the only one weirded out.

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Date: Apr 09, 2017 06:54 am Title: Chapter 29- For The Love of God Pt. II

These my babies 😩😩😩😩❤️

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Date: Apr 09, 2017 12:16 am Title: Chapter 25- Real Gun, Water Gun, Same Thing

Ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh mmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyyy ggggggoooooooooooossssssshhhhhhhh

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Date: Apr 08, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 24- Momma's Havin A Baby, Semaj Is Going Crazy...

I am shook! 😩

This story is making me emotional! That last sentence got me on the edge; before it's too late? Hold up there Michael don't give me anxiety now 👀

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Date: Apr 08, 2017 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 23- Saved by the Scream

Daaaaaaannnnngggg I was not expecting that! The whole time I was reading with that white guy blinking face 😂😂 then her parents showed up ... omg! This is getting good! I feel like Michael is gonna be mad at Tasha if he finds out that she knows that James is Sey's dad and she didn't tell him. Then when James finds out who Michael is to Semaj and Semaj finds out that Michael is working for her dad? *insert mr crabs blur meme* the messiness ensues! I can't wait

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Date: Apr 08, 2017 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 22- Mirror Mirror... Who's the Baddest of Them All?

Kearston one if those people that want something to go wrong In Your relationship so bad. Sey just need to stop telling them her business.

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Date: Apr 08, 2017 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 21- The Magic Touch Makes Me Spin

Michael is such a gentleman 😍😍😍😍 .. they burning up 😩 they'll have their time soon. Such a sweet chapter though, I really love these two ❤️

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Date: Apr 08, 2017 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 20- Troll Doll Look-A-Like

I'm over here with this big goofy smile on my face 😂

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Date: Apr 08, 2017 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 18- I Wanna Know...

Laaaaawwwwwd Michael ready for Semaj to turn 18 so he can hit the cheeks, stay strong Michael just a few more weeks 😂😂😂😂

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Date: Apr 08, 2017 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 17- She's Different, This Is Different, Different Is Good

I love love love Michael's relationship with Simone, it's so cute! And Semaj cracks me up with her talkative self 😂

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Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 13- ABC Easy As 123

"Michael places his hands on either side of Semaj's hips on the counters trapping her in but she wasn't going to move anyway. She was going to stand there and listen to whatever he had to say. 

"Maybe I'm thirteen chapters too late, shit, maybe im thirteen chapters too early but I gotta be honest witchu since the first night i met you it was somethin that I couldn't deny 'bout you. I wanted you. In more ways than one and it's been two an a half years since i felt that way 'bout any female. 'bout anybody. I wanna let you in. I wanna be honest. I wanna be good. I wanna change. I wanna be better. But I think maybe it ain't for me. Maybe I can't change. Maybe I'm scared." His eyes connect with Semaj and she finally speaks. 

"I don't care if you're thirteen chapters too early or late." Semaj says shrugging as she tries to keep in contact with his eyes. "Are you scared Michael?" 

It's a few minutes before Michael answers. He just stares at her contemplating whether or not he wants to be honest. He isn't sure if he wants to let someone in again. He doesn't know if he's moving too fast for his shattered heart that was still in pieces or if he was moving too slow. He didn't know but the brown eyes he looked at were so soft and he was melting like a popsicle on a hot day. He couldn't help it. 

He nods his head slowly and licks his lips. "Terrified." "

 

PHENOMENAL .. omg this is so good! You did a great job capturing feeling and internal struggles. Great chapter. My favorite so far.



Author's Response:

Awww this is greatly appreciated Susie! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far and I hope you continue to read and enjoy what I have written! 

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Date: Mar 30, 2017 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 10- Turned Tables

MICHAEL YESSSSSSSSSSSS YOU BETTER TAKE AUTHORITY YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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