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Date: Mar 08, 2017 08:38 pm Title: Family Life...All In...

Okay ... so much I want to comment on. Tut, thank you! For sharing this beautiful piece of your imagination with us. This story and its characters will forever stick with me! So memorable! You are the GOAT and don't you forget it. Inked is officially a masterpiece. Bravo!

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Date: Mar 08, 2017 10:03 am Title: It Was All A Dream...I Use To Read Word Up Magazine...

*lets out breath* we ain't friends no more! Lol great chapter!!!

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Date: Mar 08, 2017 09:50 am Title: Falling Down...

HOLD THE HECK UP

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Date: Mar 08, 2017 08:07 am Title: Crossing The Line...Made It Home Safe...

Lmao! At first I thought the puking was a side affect of all the meds and her condition but as I got to the middle of this chapter I was like .. my baby is pregnant! 😂😂😂

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 07:38 am Title: Crossing The Line...And Getting The Boot...

NOOooOoooOoooOooo !!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: Mar 07, 2017 07:34 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...

Mrs. Jackson wjsjfjajejfnsjwj im screaming!!!

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Date: Mar 07, 2017 02:55 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...

You did an amazing job with the marriage certificate! This chapter was awesome, you are the GOAT!

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Date: Mar 06, 2017 11:40 am Title: Plain Plane Plans...

This chapter was hilarious lol I've missed this story and yes I'm reading from the beginning while writing ETUB1 so it's taking me a while. Goodness I love these two😩

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2016 06:54 am Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...

Good introduction..

Reviewer: Manee4Mj Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2015 05:27 am Title: Proposals And All Manners Of Sweet Treats...

Started from the bottom - Drake



Author's Response:

Lollllllll they came a long ass way didn't they? So much more to go through!!! <333

Reviewer: Manee4Mj Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2015 03:08 pm Title: Going Back To Cali...

Liberians don't speak swahili



Author's Response:

Yeah I know. 'Swahili' means 'coastal people' in an Arabic dialect. Kiswahili is the African version of it. It doesn't have a specific country of origin. Used mostly by the Bantu people. But the name went with the song so I used it still. I do appreciate the sharing of knowledge. So thank you pointing that out!! <333

Reviewer: Manee4Mj Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2015 09:11 am Title: Farwell To His Arms...

I love da story to death xo.... The thing is Mpenzawe is wrongly spelled. In the song liberian girl the chant says "mpenziwe", not "mpenzawe". Actually the meaning of love in swahili.... Which originally it's from East Africa,my love is Mpenzi..... Love is mapenzi...... But the current name really fits....... Just trying to clarify some things.. 

 

 

Ps: btw i love the story to bits 



Author's Response:

Hey thank you so so much for reading this story and enjoying it!!! It's one of my favs. I know that Mpensawe was spelled differently for the story. She explains in one of the chapters that it got misspelled on her birth certificate cause they couldn't read her dad's handwriting.(It's either the intro of the chapter where Michael asked her the meaning of her name. I forget. I haven't reread this in soooo long) Lol it was play  on the idea that all doctors(her dad is a doctor)  have bad handwriting. So it ended up being spelled wrong.  

I'm so happy you took the time to read it!!! Did you finish? <333

Reviewer: Patrice Thomson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2015 10:39 pm Title: Closure...Well In A Way...

Jesus... What horrible song, I looked in YouTube and I can say Michael would never loved it!



Author's Response:

You wold be surprised at the songs Michael listened too. According to Chris Tucker and a few others he was very much into Hip hop and Neo soul music. That song is a mix of both. I think he would enjoy it if not only for the guitar lick. He loved good melodies. <333

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Date: Sep 09, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Crossing The Line...And Getting The Boot...

Didn't she promise him to let him explain if something like this happened?? -_-



Author's Response:

She will. It's still a bit shocking to see something like that. That Psycho was right there naked in be with him and he was naked too. She just had to breath and let some tears out. <333

Reviewer: Patrice Thomson Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2015 10:56 pm Title: Crossing The Line...Trying It...

"she had already left with her parents on a spiritual retreat in Onondaga County..." Oh... Damn! That sorry ass will try something... Right? I know it without read the chapter!!! Stay strong, Michael!!!



Author's Response:

You can smell the trouble brewing. <333

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