Date: Mar 08, 2017 08:38 pm Title: Family Life...All In...
Okay ... so much I want to comment on. Tut, thank you! For sharing this beautiful piece of your imagination with us. This story and its characters will forever stick with me! So memorable! You are the GOAT and don't you forget it. Inked is officially a masterpiece. Bravo!
Date: Dec 11, 2015 03:08 pm Title: Going Back To Cali...
Liberians don't speak swahili
Yeah I know. 'Swahili' means 'coastal people' in an Arabic dialect. Kiswahili is the African version of it. It doesn't have a specific country of origin. Used mostly by the Bantu people. But the name went with the song so I used it still. I do appreciate the sharing of knowledge. So thank you pointing that out!! <333
Date: Dec 07, 2015 09:11 am Title: Farwell To His Arms...
I love da story to death xo.... The thing is Mpenzawe is wrongly spelled. In the song liberian girl the chant says "mpenziwe", not "mpenzawe". Actually the meaning of love in swahili.... Which originally it's from East Africa,my love is Mpenzi..... Love is mapenzi...... But the current name really fits....... Just trying to clarify some things..
Ps: btw i love the story to bits
Hey thank you so so much for reading this story and enjoying it!!! It's one of my favs. I know that Mpensawe was spelled differently for the story. She explains in one of the chapters that it got misspelled on her birth certificate cause they couldn't read her dad's handwriting.(It's either the intro of the chapter where Michael asked her the meaning of her name. I forget. I haven't reread this in soooo long) Lol it was play on the idea that all doctors(her dad is a doctor) have bad handwriting. So it ended up being spelled wrong.
I'm so happy you took the time to read it!!! Did you finish? <333
Date: Sep 11, 2015 10:39 pm Title: Closure...Well In A Way...
Jesus... What horrible song, I looked in YouTube and I can say Michael would never loved it!
You wold be surprised at the songs Michael listened too. According to Chris Tucker and a few others he was very much into Hip hop and Neo soul music. That song is a mix of both. I think he would enjoy it if not only for the guitar lick. He loved good melodies. <333
Date: Sep 09, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Crossing The Line...And Getting The Boot...
Didn't she promise him to let him explain if something like this happened?? -_-
She will. It's still a bit shocking to see something like that. That Psycho was right there naked in be with him and he was naked too. She just had to breath and let some tears out. <333
Date: Sep 09, 2015 10:56 pm Title: Crossing The Line...Trying It...
"she had already left with her parents on a spiritual retreat in Onondaga County..." Oh... Damn! That sorry ass will try something... Right? I know it without read the chapter!!! Stay strong, Michael!!!
You can smell the trouble brewing. <333