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Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2015 03:53 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Damn, so the first feed on Lana must be really addictive! i'm surprised she took it so well.

But I worry about what Ruby is supposed to do....



Author's Response:

He's addicted now! Lana may end up sorry she forced him to try her. And now with Ruby... the gang is in trouble now! 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2015 11:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I hope they put vervain around the cellar, because Michael had to anticipate this.....

 

Wasn't there a trick Michael could do to make it more pleasurable? Or is that only during sex?



Author's Response:

We'll see what happens. Michael's got his head in so many different places right now. He may or may not have handled the Veronica situation looser than he should have. Leaving this obvious gap wide open... With a wooden bullet hindering her brain, Veronica (in his mind) should not have been able to make contact with anyone telepathically or not.

You're right its just during sex. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2015 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Awe sooky. He finally took the plunge. So to speak. Lol. "...I could eat you for every meal!!" He knew what he was saying. LMAOOO. I'm hoping he gets to do that soon!! *eyes you with the intensity of a doe!! Please?

lol

Wow so Steph got compelled. It makes sense he just up and left so abruptly. 

Now Ruby is going to free Veronica a shit gonna go down. Lawd!

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

He sure did know what he was sayin!! Mmmhmmm We'll see. It's obviously bound to happen soon. Svetty all ready to loose her virginity and stuff. 

Shit is gonna go down. I told y'all Ruby was gonna cause problems. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 04:29 am Title: Chapter Thirty-one

He is what he is. It's not really cheating. He has no more bloodbags and he doesn't want to use Lana. I get it. I know it's hurtful to know your man is sucking at another woman's neck but they're just food. There is some level of intimacy there but it's the same when we eat. The satistion only last as long as the meal. He loves Lana, she has his non beating heart. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad if he drank from men too? Lol I don't know. Lana better not do anything stupid and put everyone including Michael at risk. Impulsiveness can be a grave downfall. 

Lawd the drama is coming I can feel it calling in the air!!

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

A vampire has to eat. Michael doesn't want to feed from men. They don't taste as sweet as women do and its awkward.

Drama is coming. 

<3<3

Reviewer: halesjackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 12:39 am Title: Chapter One

yep I will not call that cheating.

and michael feeding on lana will only make his hunger worse so she better be patient and understand him.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2015 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-one

Not sure that drinking blood from someone out of hunger is quite the same thing as cheating, he isnt having sex with the women he drinks from is he? I mean if he starts feeding off only Lana does she really have enough blood in her to keep him fed? I guess it depends on how often he needs to eat? As long as he keeps his penis to himself or Lana only she may just have to be a bit more realistic and accept it. Although he could meet her halfway and also drink out of blood bags or men more often than he does, why does it always have to be a woman? I guess I can see both sides of the argument.

He has to eat something, but he should be more mindful of her feelings and less mindful of his guilt over "sullying" her body. And she needs to be patient with him.  



Author's Response:

You're right. I don't think its the same thing as cheating. He's not having sex with these women anymore. He used to before Svetlana came of age. And right, she's never going to be able to act as his sole source of food. So she's going to have to give a little. I think it would be awkward for Michael to feed on another male blood sharing just seems like and intimate thing to me. Which is all Svetlana sees...

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2015 11:58 am Title: Chapter Thirty-one

He cheated. He may think he's doing her a favor, but by ignoring her wishes he is treating her like a child. I guess he wants a gf with a daddy complex?

 



Author's Response:

He didn't have sex with anyone else... I don't know if I'd call it cheating, but he's definitely not in the right hiding it from her. Or promising her what she wants to hear and then doing things his own way. Since he's always been the father figure, the guardian... it'll be hard for him to make the transition and see her as his equal and not the little girl he's protecting. 

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2015 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

I wonder what Lana's reaction is going to be.

Author's Response:

we'll see. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2015 06:15 am Title: Chapter Thirty

Alex is on point!!! Lol. Him and his Samantha tho. They need to be together in the future for his sake. Lol at Ruby being a vampire and still nagging Laex about his school work. 

There already on plans C moving on to plan D. They're failing miserably. The maker put her trust in the wrong hands that's for sure. A fledgling going up against seasoned vampires was not a great idea at all. Why did they turn Ruby and not just kill her I wonder. Hmmmm. 

I love how you describe Michael's blood lust. But he just wants a bite of his cinnimon Apple!! Lol. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

You can't fuck with Alex! Sweet Samantha. Maybe one day when he's of age... lol 

Ruby was turned as part of the plan, you'll see! Grayson may just be a fledgling, but he's got some wits about him. 

Michael's bloodlust is going to get him in so much trouble through this story and its sequel. 

Reviewer: halesjackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2015 10:52 pm Title: Chapter One

oh great now ruby is a vampire too

and michael better keep his promise but we know he is a vampire controlling is hard:-)

it's my most favourite story you have no idea whenever I open this website and see this story have been updated I get soo happy lol

LOVED THE STORY!!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2015 09:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

Damn, so only Alex and Lana are left in the family.

Michael was going to feast....he needs to not lie to Svetlana.

Sorry I'm brief, but I did enjoy the chapter :)



Author's Response:

Alex and Lana are the heads of household now...

And yeah he was totally seconds away from sinkin' his teeth into that maid, he can't be lying. 

Sorry I'm just now responding to these reviews. I've been doing too much lately.

Reviewer: pmkj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 01:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

That was a damn good chapter but plzzzzz do update this story more often like u do to others plzzz .this is my favourite 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to update it more often. 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2015 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

....so wasn't expecting what happened at the beginning to happen..had expected to see Michael and Lana spend some time building up their relationship..was like "oh no don't tell me he drank from another woman after that heartfelt confession" but the blood was all over him I was like O.O what the heck happened? did he spill blood all over himself from the blood bag or something..he better be careful

and although I was not thrilled about Grayson being in the chapter, the end where the blonde bodyguard gave him the smackdown was satisfying, heh heh heh



Author's Response:

He was just on a binge eating, shoving his face with every blood bag in sight so yeah it got a little messy but he kept his promise and didn't drink from another woman.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2015 04:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

You don't understand how much this plays as a TV series in my head. LMAOO. 

It all started off intense then it got so sweet. Man these two need to be together for the sake of my mortal soul!! *Shakes fists at sky!

"Night sweetheart, I love you." I came out from under that sentence covered in sugar sigh. 

I wonder what this means. Are they together?!?!?!?!?!?! And ?!?!?!.

"Witchy Woo" I laughed out loud. 

God I hope Veronica doesn't fall for the oaky doke. This is gonna be bad news. 

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

Lmao that's probably because Ive based it off of two TV series and put my own twist on it lol 

I was going to make her walk in there and find a bunch of dead bodies lol but then I figured Michael could use a little break to show a little tenderness. 

Are they together?! I don't know!! 

Veronica is a wild card. That's all I'll say. She could be on either side. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2015 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

"But you should know..."

Wait a second. What? They've only just kissed and he's already talking about the future. Shoot, live in the moment for a second, man. It was such a quick flip in character. He's just so controlled....somehow I'd imagined him not being able to exert that much control when the moment came down to it....then again, he's just ate, which should help his thinking and impulse control. So anticlimactic. I know you are just doing this to surprise us later.....>.> lol

 

 



Author's Response:

And they dropped L bombs too! He's just letting her know where they stand up front. She's young still and he doesn't want her starting this off with a bunch of hopes and dreams that just aren't going to happen. 

And yes hunger causes lack of impulse control for him. Being that he just binge fed, his will power was at its utmost strength. 

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