[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2016 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Forty
I love how Michael entered against her orders, but then chose to listen when she told him to leave. LOL. Her dad has become a jerk. I'm guessing he's bitter over what happened to his life? I need more romance to counter the blood. Samantha can take her time while Michael hurries up :P
Author's Response:
Her dad's vamp change is responsible for his new behavior. He hasn't kept as much of his humanity as Michael has. Michael doesn't know what to do at this point LOL he's at a loss and Svetlana expects him to just KNOW that what she really wants is him to apologize and seduce her.
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2016 10:27 am Title: Chapter Forty
Uh oh, I bet someone kidnapped Karo and took her to Ismenia! Let's hope Sam can save herself. Martin shouldn't be mean to Lana, yes she made some bad decisions but he shouldn't yell at her like that. Michael should've went with her but if he did, Martin would have his head. I hope Lana and Michael get back together. Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yeah. Sam's a smart girl, we'll see if she can see the trap before falling into it. Martin's not himself. He's a vampire now. Michael needs to get his woman back.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 11:10 am Title: Chapter One
Also, may I ask do you still have that one story that was Smooth Criminal themed, I think? If I can remember, I hope I have the right author. Or something that was related to club 30s, and a girl who couldn't talk?
Author's Response:
No, that's not me lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 11:08 am Title: Chapter One
I love this! :') This story... I just. God, I nEED MORE.
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2016 01:13 pm Title: Part 2 Prologue
Ooo, things are going to get good!! Svetlana made some bad choices while on tour. I hope her and Michael get back together.
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2016 12:37 pm Title: Part 2 Prologue
You are such a tease :P I want to know what happens when she arrives "home," now. Please? And why would drinking = whore? Or is there more to her having fun....?
Author's Response:
It's a new Lana and things will be very different now she's actually grown. The whore label was just a media thing. They did a lot of partying and she was photographed with a lot of different people and yeah that makes her a whore... (Not really). Not much more to it than that.
Date: Jun 29, 2016 10:15 pm Title: Chapter One
Well you beat me! LOL congratulations😃
Author's Response:
You deserved it more than I did honestly LOL but thanks!!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2016 07:42 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine
OMG I read this when you first to me and I didn't even realize I didn't review. The SHAME!!! Lol.
I know everyone is in upheaval right now and Martin coming back only means Michael and Lana's love now has to die a slow painful death. If Martin found ou about them he would surely have Michael killed or kill him himself.
This makes me sad. They had only just began and the romance is now Ooooooverrrr... They had a lot a lot of love toooo giiiivvvveeee. Sigh. Got me singing and what not.
More soon!!!<333
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2016 06:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine
Why did her dad have to come back?! They were already facing so many challenges. Damn you Martin!!
Author's Response:
Once I finally finish this story... if that happens. There will be a sequel and all of these trials Michael has been through with Lana will create the character he plays in that story and it will make sense, hopefully.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2016 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine
I understand why Lana would be upset with her, I feel so bad for her. So did Michael and Lana break up or are they taking a break? Michael doesn't understand that Lana is happy with him and wants to be with him forever. Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
He broke up with her. (for now).
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2016 05:49 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
You came back with a BANG!!! This chapter was amazing. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I wonder where Michael is? I'm guessing he's with Martin preparing for his re entry into his kids lives. I thought Michael would have at least healed the puncture wounds like he always does. I guess he was too scared and distracted to remember. I'm glad you kept going!!!
More soon!!<333
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2016 03:23 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
I just did an internal happy dance when I saw you'd updated this. This chapter lived up. So, Martin is back? That's a twist I didn't see coming. Now, how is she going to explain the puncture wounds? Two precision lasers appeared out of the sky? Or is she going to name someone who is against them and is a vampire? That'd be good....but it'd risk outing Michael.... damn.
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2016 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Poor Lana!! I'm glad that she is ok! Poor Michael is in a tough situation, he can't tell Martin that he was the one that did this to Lana. I hope Svetlana can get out of this mess with those group of men. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: Mar 25, 2016 01:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven
I love love love this! I finished this in under two days! Girl you are an amazing writer, nice character development too. Please don't tell me this is the end of this story! I'm in love with it, I hope you write another chapter soon (:
Date: Mar 03, 2016 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven
I LOVE this story. I love how it ended and am eagerly waiting for updates. I finished this in under a day; I could not stop reading and now I need more. ;)