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Reviewer: Dreamgirl4Michael Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2014 06:09 pm Title: Contacting Michael

Wow, good, but it's too short. If you wanted it to only be two chapters then you should have made it have a better ending.
This is just me and what I think but to each their own.

Author's Response: thanks for the advice

Reviewer: Dreamgirl4Michael Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2014 06:05 pm Title: The Plan To Contact Michael

I'm not really into this kind of thing at the same time it's interesting, and freaky/ creapy.
I'm writing a story at the moment and this gives me an idea for part of my story but I don't know if I will do it, cause like I've said, I don't really believe in this sort of thing.
I may just have to breakdown and do it just this once.

Author's Response: ok

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2014 09:44 am Title: Contacting Michael

Welcome!!

 

And awesome chapter! Please keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Auntie does seances for people and she is a huge MJ fan. When I spent the night at her house, we used her ouji board to try and contact him. And we did get one answer. We asked if it was him and it said yes. We got no more answers but things kept moving and feeling a lot more cold and weird as though we weren't alone. It was creepy yet awesome!!



Author's Response: that would be awesome!! New story coming soon !!!

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2014 04:10 pm Title: The Plan To Contact Michael

OMG!! I've been waiting for a story like this!!!! PLEASE CARRY ONNNNNNN!!!!! :) :) :) :) Amazing beggining by the way! Can't wait for more x



Author's Response: I will

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