Date: May 17, 2017 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yo suzzzzaaaay, I just read your bio on your page and it says:
... I don't like my stories with happy endingsπ, fair warning
I never knew that! So it looks like you're going to be breaking my heart here and with Nic and Mike. It's cool though, I'm still for the ride!
I'm coming for all yall's hearts! *evil laugh* π especially ETUB1...........anywho! Yes, I can't see myself writing a story with a happy ending. Well, this one story that I've been planning may have one π€... but as far as these two and the new one that I'm gonna be posting soon, nope. Ain't no happy ending, bih. I always hope my new readers read my bio though. I don't want nobody to be tooooo hurt when something goes left, lol!
Date: May 17, 2017 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
No words man. No words. How you not gonna fight for your wife? I don't understand. Granted both Kimora and Michael are in the wrong and I don't know what I would do if I was cheated on but Kim and Mike hadn't even messed around sexually before Rodney left. He jumped to conclusions and bounced.
Girl I'm torn. I don't know who I want to root for. I'm really not rooting for anyone. The only person who hasn't made me mad in any way is Adrianna, but knowing you she'll probably piss me off eventually.
Anyway, the line between Kim and Mike has been crossed so I know things are about to blow up. Things are moving fast but as I said previously situations like this are never slow. Mike and Kim are on a sex high and somebody's gonna sober up and catch feelings and it'll be all ugly. Kim will be the first to catch feelings and then Mike but I doubt he's gonna leave Adri. It's not good for publicity and Kim will still come out as the hoe, slut, homewrecker, etc. Jesus take the will.
And shoot... I guess I did have some words to say lol.
I can't stop saying it, you are so funny. I'm really over here cracking up. All I'll say is that you're on point for the most part. Like I said, while the ending seems predictable, it's like a sandwich: what's in the middle is gonna have you like "biiiiiitch" π
Hmmm I wonder now how predictable ETUB1 is? π€
Date: May 17, 2017 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
You know my first instinct was to hit the mic! I dropped to my knees and grabbed that thang ready to sing until Michael stopped me.
I. CAN'T. BREATHE. This line was iconic as fuck. I remember reading this chapter at random a couple of weeks ago. I do that pretty often to see if I'll like a story or not. If it entices me from a random (middle) chapter then I know I'll read it. And I was right. This was a good read.
It was fast, but for this type of story the sex always happens fast. It's what makes the story messier...jucier. Like I said in my last review they needed to drop some of that tension so they could act normal around each other. They were giving off too many "I wanna fuck you" vibes around audiences.
Kimora is very confused, but Rodney a punk for leaving. If he would've stayed and talked to his wife Kim and Mike's fuck session would've never happened, but hey everything happens for a reason.
"They were giving off too many "I wanna fuck you" vibes around audiences." Brandy, listen girl, you gotta stop having me rolling π Kimora is trash but we love ha, lol. She's confused, Rodney is confused. Messy is the name of this story. It seems predictable, I know but it's gonna be a rollercoaster. When I was planning the story out I didn't realize how quick it was gonna be. I give this story about 30 something maybe 40 something chapters, definitely not going to be as long as ETUB1 but juicy nevertheless. This is definitely my favorite story to write, while ETUB1 takes the spot for as my favorite storyline. I'm honored that you like it as much as you do.
Date: May 17, 2017 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
I guess him calling Rodney my boyfriend was him getting me back for calling Adrianna his girlfriend. Oh well.
Lol okay disregard my last review then.
Six chapters in and this had gotten reaaaal messy reaaal faster. Michael and Kim need to slow it down or be a little more cautious like damn. Y'all that horny for each other that y'all cant act civil? They need to hurry up and have sex to ease that tension between then so they don't have to act so suspicious all the time. To be honest ain't shit going on with them right now so Rodney need to chill out. Why you walking away from your woman? This is where you need to fight for her and your marriage. Just because Michael is who he is doesn't mean he has one-upped you yet, son. You still have one thing that he doesn't Kimora as your wife, and really that's all he needs. I'm not rooting for Rodney, but I do feel bad for him but that won't last for long if he continues to walk away from his wife. Eventually I'm gonna start rooting for Kim to leave him.
Kim ain't all innocent either! Honey you took a vow so you need to come with some decisions like ASAP. Michael is engaged and you're MARRIED. At least cut your husband some slack. If you ain't lovin him like that no more then voice that and separate but calm the ranging hormones in your body because you're about to get caught up lol. Paparazzi already on your ass so you need to chill.
Mike... be a little more considerate of the fact that Kimora is married and you're engaged. I feel like this story is gonna be so one sided when it everything falls apart. Everyone is going to pointing to Kimora while Michael sitting on a beach somewhere chillin with a pregnant Adrianna.
I'm feeling the story girl!
Date: May 17, 2017 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
I could just hear him rolling his eyes. I cracked a smile. "Hmm, I'll have to get back to you on that. I'm gonna go finish making love to my husband now."
"KIMORA! KIMORA DON'T HANG UP ON-" I cut him off, pressing the end button.
BITCH, I'm dead.
Btw I wasn't calling you the bitch lol. I can't deal though. She should've corrected him and been like husband when he called Rodney her "little boyfriend" like boy you been this uptight about her calling your fiancee your girlfriend... fuck outta here Mike lol.
Brandyyyy you have me over here hollering. The way you bolded and italicized "BITCH" though π© I swear, I'm no more good LMAO π
Date: May 17, 2017 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael bold girl, bold as hell. This escalated pretty fast so I'm sure it's about to be real messy.
Real messy indeed. The whole story is just messiness personified. Lol. I'm so glad you're reading β€οΈβ€οΈ
Date: May 14, 2017 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
π© Lawddd!!! Her time with Michael was π....girl, ππ I can't even put it into words. And Rodney...man, poor Rodney. I feel for him. I'm having mixed emotions about her cheating now...π”
This is absolutely a great story!! I've been searching for a great story to read when I found time and this definitely is one of the good ones. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Let's just say Michael rocked her world π©
I feel for Rodney as well. Kimora is going about the whole situation kinda trifling lol. I understand how you feel though. You want her to cheat because of the chemistry between her and Michael but Rodney also doesn't deserve the mess he's putting her through π© The struggle of picking sides is real!
I have more coming for you soon enough, thank you for taking the time to read and review!!
Date: May 14, 2017 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Giiiirrrrrlllll!!! She reminds me so much of myself.....ππ I'm in love!! Good for her!
Awww that means she's relatable so that makes me happy! I love Kimora, like I really love her! She's my baby, my favorite character that I've created thus far
Date: May 14, 2017 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Girl, no he didn't!! The nerve of him 'I'll talk to you when I talk to you.' Good for her telling him not to come back nor call. I can't say I would have done the same thing cause let's face it, it is Michael Jackson...πππ but any other nigga... "boy, bye!! ππ
Lmao! That's the truth! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!