Date: Aug 18, 2016 09:08 pm Title: Getting Caught?
i enjoyed your story
Date: Oct 25, 2015 07:30 pm Title: Getting Caught?
Good job!
Date: Oct 25, 2015 07:19 pm Title: Afterwards...
Mike should put on his clothes. No one should find Natalie..
Date: Oct 25, 2015 07:02 pm Title: Going All The Way....
Good job! It would be nice to find out if they become a couple.
Date: Oct 25, 2015 04:05 am Title: So He Said...Yes
Good job!
Date: Oct 25, 2015 03:58 am Title: Michael's Decision
Good job!
Date: Oct 25, 2015 03:50 am Title: Let Me Show You.
Very good descriptive writing!
Date: Sep 08, 2014 01:05 pm Title: Afterwards...
Omg they are so cute together!!!
And hahaha how is Michael gonna explain being naked, I cant wait to read more ^^
Great chapter and ahhh so cute how Michael said baby to her! Hes so sweet to her
Author's Response:
Awie thank you so much for the love!!! And ikr?! Michael's got some MAJOR explaining to do to Marlon lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2014 11:36 am Title: Going All The Way....
Great that natalie could show Michael how beautiful he is! And the end was so surprising! I hope they are a couple now cause he needs a girl like her :)
Author's Response:
Ikr! And thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2014 11:07 am Title: Going All The Way....
I'm glad he finally realised how beautiful he truly is...
Author's Response:
Same :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2014 11:04 am Title: So He Said...Yes
Damn.... You should still... Divide XD I'm sorry english is not my first language, still...this never happens to me, I'm embarassed...
Author's Response:
Aw don't be! It's all good I just have to work on separating the text. I know it's gotta be a pain to read lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2014 11:01 am Title: Michael's Decision
Wow, she's so bold...
Author's Response:
Ikr! I would never and I mean NEVER have the guts to do that....
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2014 10:58 am Title: Let Me Show You.
Aww this is sooooo sweet, I LOVE it! But you should really divide....I don't know what it's called... :S Instead of all your text ...This is frustrating I don't know how to explain... You shoul divide your text so it's not just one big mass ... Otherwise I'm completely in love with it.
Author's Response:
I get what you're saying, I'm sorry about the text :/ I'm trying to work on dividing so it won't be so difficult to read....glad u love it tho :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2014 10:53 am Title: Let Me Show You.
poor the man );
Author's Response:
Ikr :(
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2014 01:43 pm Title: Let Me Show You.
Please update!