Date: Oct 22, 2020 11:34 am Title: Chapter 31--Oshun.
These two will be the death of me. I didn't imagine their little secret would give Taj suspicion of their "Whatever he wants to call it". I mean, they were playing but sexual tension was there. And now that they can have a change; Michael starts to regret the past and she is building more barriers. I didn't know there was a deleted sex scene :'( I'm gonna cry.
LOL! Don't cry! If you would've read it, it wouldn't have made sense either, and it would have taken you out of the story.
I'll make the first one count, I promise! LOL
Date: Oct 20, 2020 04:54 am Title: Chapter 31--Oshun.
Is Michael having his regrets now ??? These two just make me anxious ! One minute I think they're close to being together together then shit happens !! Great update !
I mean, it is a messed up conversation to have. And all of the worst qualities that he thought he had were confirmed by yet another family member. First Jermaine and now Taj.
Date: Oct 19, 2020 02:40 am Title: Chapter 31--Oshun.
As you can see, I check this website at crackhead hours just for updates so I may have a problem. Lmao. And no, you failed to mention that little tidbit. At least tell me this, was it special? Cause if I've waited 31 chapters, I NEED it to be special.
Haha! It was not. It was animalistic, and Michael did it drunkenly and out of desparation. That's why it didn't feel right. The fact that Keisha wouldn't protest or check him at the very least...
...the fact that Keisha would consent by asking him if he had a condom...
...the fact that Michael THEEE Jackson would utter the words, "I'll pull out," is complete bullshit and I deleted it with a quickness. ha ha.
And it's good that you check it at crackhead hours because I'm on the other side of the world in Japan now, and it's nice to know that someone out there is reading while I'm still up LOL
Date: Oct 19, 2020 02:22 am Title: Chapter 31--Oshun.
First and foremost, let me get this out of the way. I'd rather be stoned and quartered. I would rather go blind. I would rather have every cell in my body ripped from me than have to wait so long for you to update again. That is all.
Secondly, I think that Taj jumped all the way to conclusions. Can't a man and woman have a simple water fight without something going on? LOL. But I can only imagine the electricity emanating off of their bodies when they are together.
Lastly, I am glad that the cat is finally out of the bag. No more sneaking around. No more lies. I'm excited to see where exactly we go from here.
Side bit. I gasped out loud when Michael called Taj by his full name. Lmao.
See you soon, I hope.
I'll be around. LOL. It takes me awhile, but I'm not on hiatus. Temporary or permanent. I'm out of retirement permanently, but I'm still working a full time job, my time management sucks, and this story ain't paying no bills...lol.
Plus, did I mention that I wrote a whole sex scene at the end of this, but then wound up chickening out, making it a dream sequence, and then ultimately deleted it because it didn't seem like the right time or place for it in the story? 31 chapters with no sex? GIRL. That is not my M.O. ha ha.
Date: Sep 28, 2020 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 30--Star of a Story
Did him saying that at the end ruin the love making that was going to happen (T_T)
Nope. It wasn't going to happen...at least not then and there. I think he ruined it by saying that he wantd to give her what she deserved...ha ha.
Date: Sep 23, 2020 06:10 am Title: Chapter 30--Star of a Story
Jesus Christmas!! Drama is about to come. They decided what was best for them. Is it my impression? Or Taj doesn't get the hints or he's aware of Michael and Keisha's sexual tension. Bye bye Taj!!! Thanks for the update, always looking forward to read this wonderful story.