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Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2019 10:17 pm Title: Taking A Break

Work on punctuation. And balance how much outer characters appear

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback sis! I love for people to be able to interact with the story and offer any productive critisism! I want to continie on with this story but if there is a lack of interest then it's always a battle of why do it if no one wants it and what am I doing wrong that could put this story on a whole nother level. So I very much appreciate this ❤

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2019 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

Best ff ever

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Date: Jan 02, 2019 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Cuute

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2019 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 4

I know it's so annoying when no one reviews

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2019 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great!

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Date: Jan 02, 2019 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like your story

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2019 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting...

Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2018 11:03 am Title: Taking A Break

Please continue.  I have fallen in love with the characters and I love the fun and humor you have built into their relationship.  I truly look forward to seeing how their relationship grows and how Michael and their relationship is affected by his contract/committment to stay in London.

Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2018 08:43 am Title: Chapter 8

I am really enjoying reading this story.  Love the interactions between Michael and Kirsten.

Reviewer: pumpkincakes53 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2018 01:20 am Title: Chapter 2

Good 10/10 :)

Reviewer: Tiffanyjoy763 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2018 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 14

That was a great chapter I loved it!!! will there be any more chapters in the future??? love these two as a couple!!

Author's Response: thank you so much for your many reviews. I hope to continue on with this story. I really hold it dear to me and I am glad that you are enjoying it so much. I hope that you enjoy what all this story has to offer!! <3

Reviewer: Tiffanyjoy763 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2018 01:26 pm Title: Taking A Break

I'm sorry you feel this way -your writing is very good I hope you keep it up don't give up!!!

Reviewer: Tiffanyjoy763 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2018 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 13

how sweet.... love this romance...

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Date: Sep 16, 2018 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

o
my
god!!!!!
lololololololol

Reviewer: Tiffanyjoy763 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2018 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 11

lmao I loved that!!!

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