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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:23 am Title: Chapter 6

I enjoy reading the story. Please continue to write more chapters. I would like to know how the story progresses...

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:07 am Title: Chapter 5

I like your characters, and the way the story line is going!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 4

I enjoy how the story is progressing!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2016 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

The story has a good flow.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2016 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 2

Good start!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2016 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is a good introduction to the story..

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2014 07:26 am Title: Chapter 6

gnaaw, this story is cute but I think its going a bit too fast. But it's still really good and I think the plot so far is awesome :) Hope you update reaaal sooon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the tip! I'm working on the update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the tip! I'm working on the update. 

Reviewer: izziebe123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2014 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 5

I love this story!! Thanks for updating!



Author's Response:

No problem, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BrownSugarBabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2014 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG. The shade though in your story summary lol! 

I really enjoyed this so far. It's very, very well-written!! ;) 

Keep updating!  xo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I just thought I'd add that on there because half the stories I read on here are written in all slang with no grammar at all. It means so much that you said that. 

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2014 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

Gabriel, fuck off.



Author's Response:

Haha, I've been waiting for your review. Every time I update I wait to hear from you. 

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

Aww poor Michael. She couldn't have given him at least a peck!?!? Poor baby. Please hurry and update soon!!!

Author's Response:

I'm working on the next update right now!

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2014 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm awesome!!!!! Lol Please don't drop this story!!! I really like it!!! Update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I will try and update within the next two days!

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2014 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far. Please continue!!!



Author's Response:

Really? Thanks a load! 

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