Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2014 03:18 am Title: Chapter 98. The wedding

Loved this story in its complete way 

Love the fact you took it to the more nowadays era (the later zeros) since not many people have stories in those years (at least not that I know on this site) 

Love the fact they are a close family and the way they all love each other

 

What if that isn't Jamie and Cloe on the beach but Abby and Jake? 

Can't wait for the next chapter 

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2014 11:59 am Title: Chapter 97

Loved the chapter. 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2014 12:49 am Title: Chapter 97

So nice to see them living the family life 

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2014 10:33 am Title: Chapter 96

Very nice chapter. I loved Michael and James' interaction.

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2014 03:40 am Title: Chapter 95

Welcome back, Cowboy & Sassy.  Well Michael is officially retired now. Michael is really the greatest husband ever.  He always remember the small details and ALWAYS keeps his promises.  Ash is a very lucky woman.  

I'm sure the Hawaii wedding is going to be beautiful, romantic and perfect.  I think I see it on a private beach during a gorgeous sunset. :)).

Eight months pregnant and the action doesn't stop. Just add a little whipped cream ;) yum.  That was pretty hot.  Looking forward next update.

Is all for LOVE... love always Lummi <3

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2014 12:43 am Title: Chapter 95

Loved the chapter. 

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2014 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 95

The love scenes between them are really good. The wedding in Hawaii is going to be lovely, I'm sure.