Date: Jun 28, 2014 10:55 pm Title: STORY NOTE
I Hope You Okay Now. But No Worries I Thought The Last Few Chapters Was Incredible.: )
Author's Response:
New Chapters Up
I was shocked not to hear from you I was checking back periodically because your I knew when you read them you were going to be commenting in excitement, But I can't wait to hear what you think about the direction I went with the Newest chapters
THis story is heading toward it's end but don't worry some suspensful stuff is about to pop off with everyone so stay tuned things are about to get MESSY
I go suprise for the Pics for the next chapter can't wait More to come
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2014 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 33:Jealousy (Pt) 2 - Sweat
She bet notta did the nasty with Derek!
Author's Response:
No Comment ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2014 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 32:Jealousy (Pt) 1 - Fly You Away
Where da hell Michael b/c shit bout to get real!
Author's Response:
Don't You KNOW it
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2014 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 30: Case Of The EX - How to Love a woman... Sweat
I Didn't Think That Lisa Would Ever Grow Up.. . But Damn I'm So Proud Of Her Being Adult And Shit Lol.
Janice Need To Get Intune Thoo She Can't Be Mad At Michael For Forever.
Michael Need To Do The Same For He Look Up And Not Have No Wife
Author's Response:
Yes Lisa had Grown up *claps* Lisa has Grown up
No she can't but shes confused
Your absolutly Right
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2014 03:58 am Title: Chapter 29:Flyaway In Circles Of Jealousy... because Rumor has IT
I Knew I Had Reasons For Not Liking Derek. Why Would They Kiss Man?????
This Probably Just Made Her Relationship With Michael 10 Times Harder. 😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓
Author's Response:
Because Derek is a Opertunist and he will take what ever he can get sadly... He wants her and when a man wants a woman he will TAKE WHATEVER HE CAN GET
Oh yes thisngs will get Harder... stay tuned
New Chapter Up
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2014 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 28: Save The Hero
Just Tragic, Michael Should Have Listened To Janice From The Jump. Then Maybe He Wouldn't Be Looking So Damn Stupid. And Even If Michael Felt That She Had Approached Him The Wrong Way Then He Should Have Told Her That.
Man Michael Shouldn't Have Ever Been Corresponding With Lisa, Man If He Felt He Needed Somebody To Talk That Would Understand He Probably Should've Called His Mother. Cuz To Be Honest I Don't Think That His Wife Should Ever Have To Be Jealous Of Another Girl.
Author's Response:
Yes He Should have Listened but some times you gotta screw up to realize how lucky you really are... your right he should but he was ALL in his felings about it it and that what ened up Happening
YUp but sooner or later you will figure Out EXACTLY what the big thing IS between LISA and Michael and WHY they still correspnd the way that they do and it will make sense yeah you think he should keep talking to his Mother but Maybe someth specific lisa has his mother doesn't... you will find out why Neither janice or his mother can be the one he talks to about THIS THING
No his wife shouldn't you'll see keep reading
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 27 It On AGAIN pt 4 - Save The Hero from this Rolercoaster
Man Messing Around With You And This Story Done Made Me A Little Too Sensitive To Other People's Problems. I Mean Like I Finna Cry Into My Salad Or Something Lol. But For Real Though I Think I'm On Janice's Side There Shouldn't Be Anything That Michael Can't Tell Her.
I Don't Get Why Michael Won't Actually Sit Down And Hear Her Out, I Mean Like I've Never Been Married But My Parents Are And As Far As I've. Seen They Compromise. Why Can't Michael Just Do The Same?????
Author's Response:
Glad My story Touched you in such a Way.... Your right and i assure you the secret will come out and it may well be something NO one expected
Because Michael is a guared and untrusting person to degrees and sometimes put his trust in the wrong people he is forgiving but that don't meen he trust everyone especiallly with deep dark secrets and yes even his wife
In real life a guy that worked for him for years sense he was a CHILD didn't get to know who he Really was and get close to him for 30 damn years he's not that easly MOVED so yeah New chapter more to come
Date: May 19, 2014 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 27 It On AGAIN pt 4 - Save The Hero from this Rolercoaster
Michael ass is hardheaded and stupid-stubborn. He's really getting on nerves frfr!!!
Author's Response:
Yes he is but as the story unfolds you slepy begin to understand why... Read in to the next Chapter and see what i mean
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2014 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 26: Rollercoaster of Skeletons
What Could Possibly Be Worse Than If Michael Was Having An Affair With Lisa? I Just Don't Understand Why He Just Don't Tell Her The Truth.
But I Also Don't Think That Janice Is A Hypocrite, I Mean Like That Stuff That Happened With Antonio Might Be Traumatizing For Her To Remember That Stuff.
I Just Noticed The Banner, It's Pretty. You Must Love To Make Banners. :)
Author's Response:
I Know what could be worse then Michael having a affair... Your just going to have to read and find out, Because maybe he feels,... well you know what read the next chapter and you'll see why
Nope she isn't she just being defensive and on guard because of all she knows and remembers, lets face it he has a history of bad behavior WTH HER... your right and it is tramatizing for her to remeber that stuff
Oh thank about the banner, I was a art major in school, and I like to keep my skills up so I'll crack open the Phto shop from toime to time to make my banners and it's not so much the making of the banners it the creating of Art i love
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2014 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 26: Rollercoaster of Skeletons
I don't know what Michael is hiding but it is irritating me too. I don't think Janice is being hypocritical after everything Lisa done put her thru, Mike should be the 1st one to understand that!.....You really can't compare being abused and whateva Michael is going thru unless he was abused also then both of them need to find comfort with each other instead of other people outside their marriage even tho Lisa was prolly confided to b4 everything went south.
Author's Response:
Nope she isn't being hypicritical... and maybe you are close on what he's hiding, they do need to find a midle ground to comfort one another... and if you may understand a little more why michael confids in lisa in the new chapter
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2014 10:55 am Title: Chapter 25: Haunted - Part 2
Damn I Like Really Thought That There Wasn't Anything That Candice Had To Hide.
&& That Damn Antonio Make Me So Mad.
It's Crazy How Janice Never Noticed The Lock On The Desk Lol. But ForReal Though Michael So Bogus For Hiding Whatever Is In That Desk.
Author's Response:
yeah, Candice looked like she would be the least likely to have anything to hide but looks like she is the biggest one next to Quints issue
Antonio is supose d to make you mad he was created to be an antagonist... you love to hate him
think about it like this, if your not looking for something do you always see it some times you don't see it until you have the tought to look... i have done that many time missed something right infront of me becuase i wasn't looking for it and vise versa
think about it like this... we are people that are creatures of habit, if we hid things in a locked drawer knowing you have no reason to think anyone is going to look in that drawer, why would we change pattern now, espcially seeing as he more then liekly hit business papersa dn other things in locked drawers all his life before he got married and didn't suspect his spouse to ever become suspious enough to snoop... and not there.
That is why
more to be revealed in the new Chapter
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2014 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 23: The Fabuous Life of: Living With Michael Jackson Pt 4
Damn I Been A Little Busy, But Uhhmmmm I Just Know That Antonio Stupid Ass Wasn't At The Party???
Author's Response:
dis you see him there... then he was there and that iwhy... sofia was Mad... did you see the clips talking about mj's ghetto behavior they are not to be missed
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2014 11:23 am Title: Chapter 21: The Fabuous Life of: Living With Michael Jackson Pt 2
Okay I Am Like So Sorry But I Been Like So Busy But I Read These Last Two Chapters && They Was Incredible.
Lol You Had Me Laughing &&.Stuff. Thinking That How It Should Have Been.
Author's Response:
It's okay... Life happens shit, things been heavy fr me too But I still been manging to write some how... I got a damn stomach infection, I had to be put on some heavy antacids, because my stomachs been feeling like wolverine decided to have a play day with the bottom of it... and then tenderized it
Thank you... i knew you would love it thoguh no one else has spoken about it, it still the new chapter and one more of the interview before it's over with, enjoy while it last because they get back to the reality SHIT IS ABOUT TO GET REAL
it's supsoe to make you lguh have you ever sense michael jackson commenorated... go look it up, it's just like this but that's REAL it a japanse documentary of Michael jackson trip to gary and Michael be acting just as stupid
Yeah man I think this is how it should have been to... if Geroldo got that interview i think we would have seen a whole NOTHER side of MJ
Like Lisa said "Michael shows you who ever he wants to at the time... he reads you figures out how you are and then shows you whatever he wants at the time" Bashits ass actted dumb so Michael actted Dumb right back to him... geraldo acted real with him and michael acted REAL right back to him, geroldo got Michael TO CURSE on live TV, come on now... we would have gotten a WHOLE different MJ
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2014 03:33 am Title: Chapter 20: The Fabuous Life of: Living With Michael Jackson Pt 1
Now Tommy Choose To Get Mad T'F????? T'F He Gone Do Get His Mofia Friends????? He Look Real Ignorant Right Now.
But That Interview Though.Jon'Nee Answer Was Cute Lmao.
Author's Response:
Of Course he did... People like don't be giving up... they get mad and then they try and get even... I'm not telling you what's going to happen Next you have to wait and see and yes he looks ignorant but he was ignorant for going after Michael like that only difference is he didn't get caught for what he did to Michael... Michael was onl y able to get the Sony Justice
I know and that was just the first pat look at the next parts
Yeah I had to have Jon'Nee Anser in two different ways
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2014 03:27 am Title: Chapter 19: Sony: The Japanese Way
Man Im Like Already Tired Of Antonio Ass.He Irk The Holy Shot Out Of Me.
And Tommy Gone Be Bout Mad As Fuck When Them People Actually Get To Firing His Ass.Man His Ex Wife Dont Told All His Business.
Author's Response:
Yeah I get that But we ain't done with him yet you going to see him in at the very least 1 more chapter if not More then that we shall see
As you already Know how the firing turned out
Nope Mariah don't don't play as she sang "I betcha gonna Know... I'ma Laugh" and I believe she truely did just THAT