Thank you I knew you would Love it

yeah i felt this part deseved it's own banner 

THANK YOU... I was hoping someone felt that that part was justified it was along time coming and tell me the best line was not "you broke my heart but she fixed it" didn't that just kill you

He totally got her and Janice went nice instead of telling her stright where she could put her bull you know our little fire cracker Janice would have too but i wanted to give Michael that moment, and Janice was lying a bit witch she will admit she only said stuff about being her fan and like those two movies because she wanted her to feel some type of way, she went on the reverse psycolgy tip, killingher with kindness and let Michael anchor the killing blow.

yes, Michael and Janice or number one

Thank you Always Love

That what it's about making it different ans seeing how these characters would play out that situation

yeah I wanted to show what it was like for a child to get to see first hand something they love or prtentially love... I actually was a fashion major in college and have done fashion sketches sense her age and if I had the opertunty to see it close up at that age I would love that.

rember this was BEFORE she became first lady, I was inspired to put it in there plus it was a current event of the time and that what it's about being acuare to the curent events of the time 

Were you trying to say that they Make up cute... yeah they do she knew he didn't mean it she over reacted a bit because she was exhaused and jet lagged from working non stop all week.. oion a normal week she would only work 3 days at CNN and the other two she would spend at her atlanta office keeping things there stright for her work back in New york and her clientel.. but the back and forth flighing here going there grant you the shoots were an easy day better then working it was alot of work to get there and she was working inbetwen reading caling and all that why I called it SUPER WOMAN because shes doing everything and not complaining 

Thanks for the chapter love 

and you NEVER know where i'm going with something until you see it because I have some twists planned for the chapter that no one will see coming so enjoy the fin while it lasts because when it gets serious you Know it's going DOWN... all I have to say Rember Janices dream... shes very aware of her husband and she will do anything to prevent the same result

YES she does I want to Make her a Fire Cracker... because well if i recall Jurnee use to play those rolls as a kid and that inspired me as well as we all know Michael had his bad streeks as a child and I'm more then certain Janice did too but she not bad she just intelgent and that can make her a hand full

Michael was still upset with Joe and him constantly calling him and when she said that he kinda had a flash of his own childhood and overreacted, I was going off the fact michael always said in his interviews he wanted his kids to have a childhood in his barbara walters interview... so he would want to teach his kids but he wouldn't want them doing anything until they were older and more in there own mind knew what they wanted and how to do it to the best of THEiR own ablitiys

I wanted the video to be a suprise because Michael was Missing her and you know he loved that

I'm glad you did to can't wait to hear what you think on the next part 

okay.... first thing you should have know that it wasn't a ligit situation because as you read NO ONE was within there orginal catacters and even Janice was percieved to be a bitch before that point even Michaels Mother dindin't like her which was completely Oppiste from the way that the story was orginally told

it was like sje was litterally in a alterneate reality, Nothing was the right way the amount of Children that she had her job her life was different, and you notice she kept saying it was a nightmare multiple times, the only thing that should have really caused concern is if everyone was in ther actuakjob preferances kids families so on and so forth I did it on perpose that way to disassociate it from the regular story. 

good thing you kept reading, GIRL you know me... you read the Epilogue of the story rember MICHAEL WAS ALIVE in 2014... so stands to reason he still would be but the point which actually worked was to disorient you so you really didn't know what was going on until the end of the chapter when she woke up and realized he was fine, because the story is first person to be in Janices head like that the whole way was key. even in her waking up and being disoriented in realizing Michael was fine. 

if I sucked you in that way I did my job corectly.... the lat chapter was ment to be fun this one was ment to be what it was scary. but to end with the pay off of it being nothing more then  figment of her imagination... and even in the end you could tell she was infact still startled because she had to keep her hands on him touching him snugling up to him to make sure he was still there and still real like anyone would after such a realistic nightmare. 

Glad you enjoied and I promise not to pull the rug out from under you anymore Promise...LOL

for me it was simply about seeing how Janice would have handled the situation period, Michael was her rock and for him not to be there and for her to have to face him being dead how would she handle it. 

I sent you the pages and... glad you enjoyed be on the Look out for the new chapters and and hope you checked out chicago... yrs Michael was Know to be a Prankster and know I never used it at any other part of the story so i felt it was the perfect place to do it

yeah I know and that came as a FLUKE for real I was coming past the TV and the Movie dirty Dancing Havana nights was on and that song was playing and I said "thAt has to be added"

they were in Cabo san Lucas pureto Rico, it fit PErfectly, and in remebering Michael was teaching her how to dance in the Epilogue thought it would be cool to bring that back

more to come

THANK YOU SWEETIE

Okay in response to the killing him I Have NEVER understood when you have the CREATIVE FREEDOM to CHANGE his FATE you KILL HIM... are you MAD it boggled my MIND every writter that wrote a FABOULOUS story and then undercut it by him dying in the end... except for the person that wrote slave to the rhythm where he was met on the otherside by his long time love... 

WHY KILL Him it like saying that the person that he fell in love withs Love was Not strong enough or mattered THAT LITTLE to him that he would still Die.... now there were some stories I've seen where the woma have been sheer idots and even I was like No WONDER he died in one I read GREAT story but the woman ACUTLY QUESTIONED HIM ON HIS INNOCENCE on the child moslestation which NEVER should even cross a persons Mind if they truely love the person

I had to give janice and Michael that Happily ever after they fought to hard to get where they were to NOT get it besides, JANICE prevented every situation that would have ever lead to him feeling the way he would have to ended up dead in the first place, she was his Night quill, she broke down every bareer and Dared anyone to question her about it and Murrray wasn't even a damn thought okay. 

THANK YOU it means SO MUCH to me when people recognize my talent, I just wish to have heard from more of you guys that were reading this but i'm happy to have you 3 or four that spoke up

AWWW thanks... I wish you had said more during the story i love having playfull banter with everyone that is reading the story, AWW i didn't know it was that emotional for you guys but if you were crying that ment I was doing my job

I hope you weren't confused in reading 1 after starting 2 but I'm glad you loved both of them. 

yeah i felt there was so amny un  expalined things about janice and her band of mary scoobies that I had to write this sequal and give each of there storylines more face time because I felt Michael and jancies story line was good but it needed the others stories to break the manotany of Michael and janices blues and back and forth, and the fact of how they tied in together I didn't even see coming until I was litereally writting it 

IT HAD TO HAVE A HAPPY ENDEING... i don't know how these people with creative freedom and ablity to do what ever they want AND DO, how they can consitantly kill him at the end of the story what the HELL... comeon now what is this.... I would think everyone would want to SAVE him, to have there character SAVE HIM mentally from the termoil that ended his life in the first place if the woman in his life can't do that then what were they their for in the FIRST place

THANKS for the incorougment i'm just stuck in limbo with the job thing and I have to keep moving forward