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Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2014 02:34 pm Title: Part 3: Susie Says It's Right

cliffhanger!! cant wait for an update

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2014 05:56 pm Title: Part 3: Susie Says It's Right

Wow, so that's why Sydney was taken. Very clever, miss Sarah, and we're introduced to Damonika! Coolness! Next chapter!<3<3

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2014 04:06 pm Title: Part 3: Susie Says It's Right

I agree!!!! Moooooore! XD Susie's a pretty shady character. >_> <_< Guessin she's trying to attack Travis since he's all supernatural and sexy and that. Daominka's cool too. Short but awesome chapter! ^_^

Reviewer: Sweetpanda14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2014 03:45 pm Title: Part 3: Susie Says It's Right

YAS. MOOOOOORE :D

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2014 03:16 pm Title: Part 3: Susie Says It's Right

Whoa that was nice to read. So that's what happened to his wife!

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2014 06:00 pm Title: Part 2: Seven Inches In...

Woah I love this!!! Cant wait for more. All the names you gave each character really matches their look too! Lol I love that.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! ^^ I'm really glad you like the story~!! <333

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 05:42 pm Title: Part 2: Seven Inches In...

That was so sad....poor Sydney......poor Travis...........aww, Sarah, why? Lol j/k, it was great! I can't wait for more! (And my chapter!;p)



Author's Response:

I know right? Lol, I can't help it! Thanks! More should be up soon!

Reviewer: DunberberLee Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 01:02 pm Title: Coming Soon!!!

It's so mysterious and I love how Travis is so sweet to Sydney. Thanks for the update, you're doing great (: 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know, right? x3 Much love, <333

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 11:47 am Title: Part 2: Seven Inches In...

Oooh! Mystery!!! Why take Sydney and not them both?  Hmmm...Syd may have something she hid from Travis, I wonder what.....reminds me of the "Who Is It" video. XD Even this is for a different song. That MJ pic, sooooo sexy. Geez. XD Add more awesomeness soon Sarah!^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! =3 Hmm, I dunno. Maybe Travis is too much to handle? Idk, we'll have to find out. X3 IKR?! I was like, "Oh, hail yass! Wit his fine ass!" LOL XD It'l definitly be up soon! <333

Reviewer: prettyswagboss89 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 11:46 am Title: Coming Soon!!!

OMG that was shocking turn of events

Morgan-Freeman--shocked

But I'm

Dying Dying

For more lol



Author's Response:

Lol, more commin' up! Glad you liked it <333

Reviewer: Cherry101 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 11:40 am Title: Part 2: Seven Inches In...

Wow sad and crazy but love the chapter though



Author's Response:

Thank you :3 <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 11:38 am Title: Coming Soon!!!

Your welcome!!! I loved the chapter, sad that I got kidnapped, but still I loved it!! I hope Travis will find me!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Hopefully he will!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 11:26 am Title: Part 2: Seven Inches In...

Whoa! That's crazy!



Author's Response:

Thank you! X3

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2014 03:13 pm Title: Coming Soon!!!

Sweet thank you!!! I can't wait to read it!! By the way, I forgot to mention in the girls wanted story that I am white, sorry.

Author's Response:

Okay. =)

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2014 06:46 pm Title: Coming Soon!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter with me in it!!! Being Travis' wife, ooo lalala, sexy!!! When are you updating the next chapter? I am getting anxious!!!

Author's Response:

Lol, It should be out soon, maybe saturday? I wanna make it perfet for you! lol

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