Date: Jan 27, 2014 10:30 pm Title: Afterward
Very awesome. :) And I'm glad that Miranda's parents are where people like them deserve to be, and that they now have to see what it was like to be in Miranda's shoes when they abused her, as well as learn a lesson about prison the hard way, too. Plus, spending thirty years behind bars is a good punishment for them. Serves them right, in my opinion... ;)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)
Thanks for your beautiful review:)!!!!
Date: Jan 27, 2014 10:26 pm Title: Auditions
Awesome... :) Very neat, as well as very well-written, too. And I hope that Miranda does well in the role of Ashley Banks, too. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very beautiful and wonderfully creative writing! :)
Thanks sweeheart! *smiles*
Date: Jan 27, 2014 10:24 pm Title: The Truth Of My Life Revealed To You
Wow. That took a lot of courage for Miranda to tell Michael all about that.... especially the rape part, too. And I hope that Miranda gets the help she needs, and that her parents get the punishment they deserve from the police and the courts, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully inspiring writing! :)
i know it did, thanks for your review ;)
Date: Jan 27, 2014 10:20 pm Title: Spending Another Day Together
Neat so far. :) I like it. Very neat, as well as very well-written, too.
I hope that Miranda will be able to escape from her abusive parents' house and go someplace new with Michael by her side, and that Michael will help Miranda like the good friend he is, too. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Thank you so much, im glad you like, i wish you PEACE&LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;)