Date: Apr 13, 2016 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1. Another Lonely Night
Date: Jun 27, 2015 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 3.
Wow... it was a good thing Michael showed up when he did and saved Cara from her abusive uncle the way he did... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Thank you very much! I actually wasn't completely done with the chapter it's still missing some parts but I'm glad you like it.
Date: Jun 25, 2015 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 2. Mad World
Oh, wow…! Very awesome so far, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. :)
Plus, I hope that Cara’s uncle Fred will get the punishment he deserves, such as prison. If he goes there, he will learn how Cara must have felt when the prison inmates hear about what he tried to do to her, and would probably call out things like “Give him to us!”, for it is said that people like child abusers, pedophiles and child molesters are not very popular in prison.
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)