Date: Dec 03, 2017 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 57
Wow it seems like I accidentally read behind
Date: Dec 03, 2017 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 56
This was a very cute chapter
Date: Dec 03, 2017 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 55
This was emotional chapter that I have been waiting for. Great chapter
Date: Nov 30, 2017 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 59
I thought this was going to be a dramatic chapter but i was wrong
Author's Response:
Lol nah. This was mostly them making up. Thanks for reviewing. Hope to get more from you as you read on.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 58
Wow Michael is being a jerk to cherell.
Author's Response:
He was a little mean in this chapter, but Cherell knows how to handle him.
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2017 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 85
Great story! I think I've read about all of it in a week. The pace of the storytelling and the humour are really good. The only improvement could be on the steamy stuff, I think you could write longer flirty/sexy scenes without them being explicit, you know? Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Welcom aboard new reader! I'm thrilled that you've been enjoying this and caught up rather quickly too. Thanks for the advice too. Originally, this was an erotic story, but due to personal beliefs and conflictions, I could no longer continue the story in that manner. So, I had to do some editing with certain scenes and that may be why some of the steamy stuff is choppy or lacking in quality, compared to the rest of the story. And you're right, I'm sure with proper time and effort, I can make those scenes tasteful but sill appropriate. Thank you so much! I hope you continue to stick around as the story progresses!
Date: Nov 03, 2017 09:28 am Title: Chapter 85
Yay. They are pregnant. Michael lives Cherell, but she felt hurt at his words at the Grammys. Who wouldn’t especially that you are supposed to be the woman he loves. I understand why he is doing it. But for how much longer can he keep it a secret is the question.
Great update
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response. Yes, Michael loves Cherell and even though she knows that, Michael needs to put himself in her shoes sometimes. But he's getting better about considering her feelings. Hopefully, Michael will soon lay this secrecy to rest.
Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Date: Nov 01, 2017 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 85
Ahhhhh, congratulations on getting published! I’ll defin check it out! In other news, this chapter was so riveting. I LOVE the way you write; I felt as if I was in Joe’s living room watching this all unfold.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm one step closer to becoming a full time author.
As for this chapter, It was a lot going on, especially with Cherell' s emotions. Poor girl. So glad you enjoyed it.
BTW, I'm also in love with the way you write. You have true talent.
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 85
Oh my God they're pregnant!!! Yes!!! I've been waiting so long for this. I love Yasmine and Cherell's relationship. Yasmine is such a good friend. I'm glad Cherell decided to forgive Michael. He better not pull that shit again. I really hope the baby is a boy. Please continue soon!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol the moment has finally come. And Yasmine really helped Cherell out with calming down. They truly have each other's back.
And Michael knows he better not ever do a thing like that again. Cherell ain't playing around with him.
Lol you really want a boy, don't you? We'll see 😉
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 85
I am so happy for you! Congratulations on your achievement! With your talent, you're bound to go far! I'm also happy you updated this story. I can imagine Cherell's anguish from watching Michael and not being included. On another note, I knew she was pregnant! I'm excited to see them go through her pregnancy and how a child will influence their lives! Thank you so much for this gift and I eagerly await your next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch, Waterlily91! That really means a lot.
Poor Cherell. Michael's oversight cut her deeply. Luckily though, Michael quickly realized his fault and begged for her forgiveness.
It's funny how everyone knows Cherell is pregnant before she does lol. Maybe she should pay attention to her body more.
Michael and Cherell are so happy to be parents. They are about to start a whole new chapter in their lives.
I'll be back with another update right after I update my other story. So, stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 04:24 am Title: Chapter 85
I knew she was pregnant! I'm so happy for them. It just shows God truly brings miracles time and time again. I know they will be great parents and this time be careful to make sure everything goes well. That kid trying to flirt with her harvey is it? Was cringey yet funny at the same time. Cherrell clearly wasn't interested poor girl. Well they wouldn't have found if she was pregnant if not for her. Is that regret I see in Joe? I just hope Janet leaves Debrage in time and Joe steps into realise his feelings for the almost Janet. But we shall see in due time. Great to see another chapter again!
Author's Response:
Yup! You called it, Lorry! Cherell is with child...and she's freaking out a little lol. She and Michael are most likely going to handle this pregnancy with extreme care. And yeah, Harvey was so annoying. Cherell has Yasmine to thank for his unwanted attention. As for Joe, it makes you wonder what's going on in his head.
Stay tuned 😉
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 04:01 am Title: Chapter 85
Congratulations on your accomplishments!! What a dream it is to be an author... And published, at that!
I loved this chapter! I really hope everything works out for them and that we're able to see a progressing pregnancy.
Great entry, as always. Update when you can!
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 04:01 am Title: Chapter 85
Congratulations on your accomplishments!! What a dream it is to be an author... And published, at that!
I loved this chapter! I really hope everything works out for them and that we're able to see a progressing pregnancy.
Great entry, as always. Update when you can!
Author's Response:
Thank you MJLover_98! I'm super excited.
As for our characters, they deserve a healthy pregnancy. Hopefully, they can finally have one. Cherell needs to make sure she doesn't stress out too much. She seems to get anxious pretty quickly.
I'll be back as soon as I update my second story. Thank you so much for your readership!
Date: Oct 12, 2017 02:42 am Title: Chapter 5
You know your timeline is a little out of place? Can You Feel It was released in the 80’s not the 70’s.
Author's Response:
Very true. I sort of shifted things around a bit so it can work with the story. Sometimes, I'll put disclaimers about it. I pull my inspiration from true events that happened in his life but they may not always happens in this story the same time it did in real life. I hope it doesn't trouble you or keep you from enjoying the story.
Thanks for reading!
Date: Oct 08, 2017 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 34
Wow I'm surprised that this accident happen but what I really wonder is how cherell father is going to react
Author's Response:
No one saw this coming. And there's no telling what her father might do...or try to do.
So glad you're enjoying the story!